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The 2019 Rejected Manuscripts Competition is now officially closed. Thank you to all who participated, and congratulations to this year's winners, listed below. We will be sending out licensing agreements shortly, and aim to have the 2019 anthology available as soon as possible.
Rejected Manuscripts will be going on break now; the 2020 competition will begin later.
–Charlie Taylor (Editor)
Obrigado (or "thank you" in Portuguese) by Mandy Miller
The path by Dennis Robleski
Concerning fairies by Thomas J. Misuraca
Frantic feathers by Sylvia Melvin
Aging rhymers by Sylvia Melvin
Capture by Philip Mann
Saying something by Philip Naylor
Our wakeup call by John Grey
The bull in the china shop by Mark Hudson
Death comes to Happy Valley by Sankar Chatterjee
Not good enough for Jamie by Saul Greenblatt
Thunder above, fire below by Joseph Dylan
The travails of Dyke Debenham by Joseph Dylan
The lazy man writes by John Grey
Ancient mariner by Joseph Dylan
This way by Edith Marie Green
Three surrealists in a boat by K. J. Watson
Just the two of us by Monika R. Martyn
The tramp returns by Christian McCulloch
The twilight letter by Mark Hudson
Prison writing class by John Grey
How lucky is she by Karen Walker
Moses denied by Joseph Dylan
Wash and wipe by Migel Jayasinghe
Backstroke or smoke by Mark Hudson
Bobbing by John Grey
The Sea Wolf Cup by K. J. Watson
Concerning fairies
The fairies in the picture beckoned to Ed.
This couldn't be. It was only a piece of art his mother picked up at a county fair and hung in the hallway. Ed was certain he'd seen movement every time he passed it, but assumed it was only his reflection in the glass frame.
It was a photo of a real forest scene, with multi-colored fairies drawn over it. The style was so realistic, one could mistake it for an actual photograph. The fairies had transparent wings, shaded the same color as their skin, which was completely uncovered. They had no genitalia, and their bodies appeared youthful.
Now the fairies fluttered all over the forest. A few turned and stared directly at Ed. They gestured for him to join them.
I can't get inside a picture, Ed thought. Continue reading "Concerning fairies"
The last fare
No moon crept across the heavens that night. Nor no stars. The boreal mists that sifted into the valley of Salt Lake City were a recurrent natural event of winter in the Valley of the Faithful, the stationary clouds squeezing out the even the sun in the still skies above the capital city of Utah. As Angel Enriquez squired his final fare for the evening across the boulevards of the sacred city to a celebrated trattoria situated off the city square, he was anxious to retreat to his snug and solitary studio, where he could stretch out in a warm bed. Having put in a full, dreary twelve-hour day, he was anxious to turn in and get a good night's rest before it all began again the following day.
Although appearing Hispanic, Angel Enriquez was actually a half-breed, with no real Hispanic roots: While his mother was pure Anglo, his father was a full-blooded Acoma, a member of a small pueblo tribe that occupied the mesa in northwestern New Mexico that was known as Sky City. It was even more complicated than that, for his father was adopted. Taken in by a Mexican couple who had immigrated to western Colorado from Guadalajara, his paternal grandfather was a brakeman on the Denver and Rio Grande Railroad that bore through the frontier town of Bridger. Angel grew up in Riverton a bit of a loner, neither being entirely accepted by the Anglos, nor adopted by the Hispanics. Finding himself in such a state, he matured fast and he grew tough, bullies and gang members pressing him to many a fight because of the foreign blood coursing through his veins. Continue reading "The last fare"
Heaven is a pub
Heaven is a pub that never does last call.
It's full of pretty girls who all think everything you say is brilliant.
And you can drink as much as you want and always stay six-beers drunk.
Forgive me, old friend, I'm running late;
I still have work to do.
But save me a seat;
I'll be there soon enough.
By Charlie Taylor
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Pierre Duchenne
Drawn to the life of a fur trapper at an early age, scarcely knowing what the life entailed, Pierre Duchenne sailed for the shores of the United States in a majestic clipper, its sails white as snow, its sails billowing like clouds, in the summer of 1817, when he was just eighteen. While most of his fellow travelers, nearly a hundred in all, gravitated toward the Eastern Seaboard, he hewed to a Western Star, not stopping for good until he was well west of Yellowstone. There were more practical reasons. Already trapped out, the eastern shores were well settled by farmers, the Wilderness well-shorn.
Falling in with three fellow Frenchmen in Saint Louis, he secured an Appaloosa colt, buckskin pants, two scratchy wool shirts, a thick elk skin coat, and a smooth-bore musket and a flintlock pistol, a twelve inch knife, as well as a two dozen footlock traps. There were other items the four of them hoped to trade with the Indians they met along the way for pelts and food. Across the plains the western Nebraska plains, they ran into the Arapaho, camped along the banks of the South Platte River. The Native Americans greeted them with curiosity and disdain, and friendship from the call of bondage of common existence. Lacking common language, they spoke through exaggerated and comical gestures that they both eventually understood. Spring had not yet come to the mountains. Not quite a hundred yards upstream from the Indians, they set up camp where they stayed the better part of a month, trading frying pans, dry goods, pistols and muskets that two spare horses carried with the Arapahoes, for pelts of lynx, deer, elk, bear, and the dearest to the wealthy in the East, the beaver. From them, they learned of dealing with the wiles of the wilderness, especially when it was at its most vicious. Continue reading "Pierre Duchenne"
The tramp returns
The bell on the tramp steamer called out into the thick fog.
A single bell from the buoy off to starboard replied.
Somewhere there were stars beyond the grey blanket.
The ship nosed forward. The bells spoke to each other.
Mor'thn Weeds pulled the collar of his oilskin coat closer and spat over the side. The night stretched out before him.
Lights began to appear in the fog. Dimples at first then pinholes in a grey mist and all the while the double-knock from the rocking waves. Ka-long! Ka-lang! It felt like a log being pulled along a slow river.
Mor'thn licked his lips and waited for the harbour lights to greet him. He counted off the time with her cowrie shell bracelet in his pocket. It had been the longest voyage he'd made so far. He knew there'd be others. He was in no hurry. It was Christmas Eve.
He had a cargo of ermine pelts. Soviet stoat. One thousand. One for each day of the journey. He'd sewed the very finest for her by the light of the oil lamp. With each stitch, he'd counted the hairs on her head. He felt her skin under his fingertips. He'd rubbed his face in the fur and thought of her naked. Continue reading "The tramp returns"
My third church today
The pastor is sermonizing,
the congregation praying,
in a tongue foreign to me.
I have a map in my hand.
And a phone for snapping pictures.
I'm a tourist.
The sign on the door says,
as far as my limited
knowledge of the local dialect can decipher,
"All may enter but please respect
your fellow worshipers"
They ignore my presence,
respectfully.
I file them under local color,
deferentially.
By John Grey
Obrigado (or 'thank you' in Portuguese)
"What's he getting locked up for?"
"That can wait," the driver of the Porsche convertible replies, a forty-something lawyer with a belly that screams he was not in need of the fancy lunch he just shelled out for, the type of meal I can no longer afford on my own dime.
"I mean if you're asking me to represent this guy, I'd like to—"
"All in due time," Lawyer Man says, squaring his hands at ten and two.
"When's that?"
"After he's vetted you. Made sure you're the right fit," Lawyer Man says, face tilted up to the sun as if life couldn't get any better than this.
I plaster on a smile to keep things upbeat. "I mean, it can't be that bad if he's only getting time in the county jail. The really bad guys get prison. At least most of mine do." Continue reading "Obrigado (or 'thank you' in Portuguese)"
Death's dark angel
As winter feathered into spring, the early weeks of March brought miserable weather, front following front. One day would have the semblance of spring, the next heralded winter. Back home from China, looking to come back to the States for good from the Middle Kingdom, I was looking for work. In the winter ritual of watching Pro football screens together with my father on his big screen, the winter weeks went by as I looked for gainful employment. With a stubborn, self-possession, my father, now in his tenth decade, was of the generation who never complained of minor ailments or physical irritations, went about life like one a generation or two younger. It was while we watched the Super Bowl that he first complained of left shoulder pain that he mentioned he had had for a week. As he sat in his recliner watching the game, he placed a heating pad to the shoulder and took a couple tablets of Tylenol. He complained no further about it. Otherwise, his health was ostensibly good, as good as anyone could expect for a ninety-two year old man who flew as a top turret gunner on a B-24 in the Pacific Theater of the cataclysm of the Second World War at the age of sixteen. Continue reading "Death's dark angel"
Look both ways when crossing a street.
In fact, don't cross streets at all
unless I'm with you.
Don't approach wild animals.
They could be rabid.
Don't pick up bugs or snakes.
Despite the temptation,
don't chase butterflies.
They could lead you to bees and wasps.
Step carefully on polished floors and in tubs.
Grip the handrail when descending stairs.
Don't talk to strangers.
Don't even go near them.
And remember,
just because a man is old
that doesn't make him your grandfather. Continue reading "Don't"
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