I love how beautifully the words are woven together. Really passionate piece.
I have always believed that with written words one never dies. It is one of the ways like painting, music etc. by which we can live forever and I suppose that is what is called immortality. Written words make one immortal. Here the poet has described the immortal love very beautifully and has written from his soul. Very deep and true. I loved the poem.
A love-message spread around the world, Traveling through sunshine, snow and rain, Describing times well spent And the secret of her scent... Nicely written and winner choice of words.
Very nice imagery. I can feel the love in the heart as it has her close and the crushing disappointment when the heart loses it's most valuable possession. This one took me on a journey through love and heartache. Well written. Brava!
I like your style, deep and smooth at the same time.
Very nicely written, full of feeling, touching the reader in a very special way.