There's some good information here but it's underdeveloped as a guide. Think of the ways you can present information better - like instead of linking to a NPC page for their location you could post maps with pins. I'll set this back to draft so you can work on it further but I suggest looking through some high rated guides for tips and ideas.
I like the guide! You did very well for your 1st time and I look forward to your next one! Only tip maybe use type for the names on maps not freehand..