"I do not recall that Holst added one single note of his own to anything I wrote, but he would suggest—if I agreed!—that, given such and such a phrase, the following one would be better if it took such and such a course; if I did not see this, the point would not be insisted upon ... ###>« Je ne me rappelle pas qu'Holst n'ai ajouté une seule note à lui sur tout ce que j'ai écrit, mais il suggérait — si j'étais d'accord!