The list didn't work. Know why? Not messy enough. Your eye would go down the list and it would settle on whatever was the least disruptive, the least troublesome, which of course misses the point entirely.
La lista no funcionó. ¿Saben por qué? Les faltaba desorden. El ojo recorría la lista y podía detenerse en la opción menos perjudicial, en la menos problemática,