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I would like to point out something in case it wasn't obvious to some. These are not stand alone episodes, they are part of a full 20 minute episode. I understand that some by themselves are somewhat boring, but remember these are connected to others. I normally would post them all up at the same time. But since this episode has hit snags and has taken longer than I year, I've just been posting scenes as they've been completed.

Reviews: I appreciate them, and have no problem with tips and/or advice. But immature comments, anything of the like of "this sux" "crap" "garbage" will not be read or even looked at seriously. Don't waste your time and my own. I'm not saying or expecting everyone to like what I do in my free time, but at least be some what mature is all I ask.

Synopsis of scene:
Sharon Amare has been left back at the apartment while Adam Novus fought off the unknown group of frames. While waiting for his return she is met up with by Stephen Novus, Ashley Bellelus, Mario Liberalis and Animus Praevelo after this conflict at West Point.

"Fading Light"
Things are intensifying as the conflict is getting hotter. Demetrius Libertas, an ex representative for the EAP has shown his face once again. His intentions are unknown at the moment. Battles are still waging amongst the various Angel training facilities but all eyes are on New York as Adam Novus tries to fend off the mysterious frames that have advanced.

Edit: The final scene will be posted tomorrow...I'm at my 2 upload per day limit.

Reviews

Rated 4 / 5 stars2010-09-23 18:34:52

All-star!

I think this may in fact set the record for the most voices ever used in a flash cartoon here! I kept thinking again of "Neon Genesis Evangelion" especially when you mentioned the angel or something like that. The animation was not great, but it was fairly satisfying. It is a bit hard to get into the story but what matters is that you put so much emotion into these characters and their facial features. Everyone really gave depth to the character he or she was voicing. I am surprised this series is not more popular.

Using them as reference is how I learn to be honest. At least in terms of animating and what's plausible and what looks good animated wise. When there's more confidence in making the action look good, then yeah. I'm already finding myself able to really make what I see in my head work well animated.

As the series goes on, a lot of the action sequences will be original enough.

Rated 3 / 5 stars2010-08-10 18:31:20

Buttons

This was decent enough. It has an interesting story. Something that I think would go a long way towards improving your videos would be to simply add a pause button. Also, having a button to start the movie instead of it just playing as soon as it loads would be better too. Just a thought.