I wanted to live a quick review. I'm not going to go "all in" I'll say this...I have not read such a wonderful story in such a long time. I enjoyed the characters, who they were base on,and I also enjoyed the plot line! I have to say that the whole time Abu had me thinking he was mind F()kInG her...I mean I see it as a game! I mean he told her its what he do! I loved the fact that fawn killed him in the end! enjoyed reading this and can't wait to read what else you have written

Okay- wow. And, um. Wow. That was amazing and there's not much more that I can say. I'm glad to finally find a story about a girl who kicks serious ass without all the lovey-dovey crap. Romance is nice, but most of the stuff on FP falls short of my expectations. Yours didn't need any of the girl-falls-in-love to sell it to me.

I just wish that you took the ending slower- draw out the suspense and get me to the edge of my seat. The plot has the potential to be absolutely thrilling, but it wasn't /quite/ there.

This sounds really interesting. I love stories like this, and you've done a really good job explaining how Fawn feels and how everything works, expecially the government agencies and everything. I really like this. Great job so far. I bet this is going to turn out to be an exciting story. lol. ]]