I really liked this story! I love SciFi stories and this one was really good. Thanks for writing it!

Guest chapter 31 . 10/19/2017

Excellent story! I love a really good science fiction/supernatural story and you did a great job! For any of you who haven't read "Written in the Stars" that is worth the read also! Your story was great, moved quickly, and had drama as well as humor. You also touched on serious issues, such as bullying, death, loss of home and loved ones, etc. Will continue to check out your stories in the future!

I loved it. Your story development skills are
really strong, and the plot was intriguing. I
Hope I don't offend by recommending that
you find a good beta for your next romp.
This was a wonderful story. Thank you for
sharing it with us!