It would be helpful to key your comments to the specific paragraph numbers, give your rationale for any proposed changes, and suggest revised language.
Please match up your comments to specific paragraph numbers.
Several recent examples include GAOas review of the process the Forest Service used to modify the Tongass National Forest plan,9 the process used by NASA to contract for the design and delivery of the international space station propulsion module,10 and the process used by the Army Corps of Engineers in preparing an environmental impact statement for actions related to the Snake River dams.