text: [{"text_idx": "#000002", "text": "bahut hi achha prayas hai sudeep ji.iske liye apko bahut bahut badhayi.par dhun aur shabdo ke beech me talmail ki kuch kami lagi.jaise dhun fast track ki lag rahi hai aur shabdo ko adhik spstata nahi de payi hai.khair mai to is school ke playgroup me hu.apki avaz bahut achhi hai aur playback singing ko suit karti hai.phir bhi music,lyrics aur singing ke dvara apne atulaniy prayas kiya hai.age bhi apke sangit ka intazar rahega...."}, {"text_idx": "#000003", "text": "bahut hi pyari prastuti.alok singh \"sahil\""}, {"text_idx": "#000005", "text": "Good song, you have potential in you. All the best! "}, {"text_idx": "#000006", "text": "bahut ache lyrics hain aor gaya bhi bahut acha hai.acha laga sunkar"}, {"text_idx": "#000007", "text": "bahut khoob! badhai ho!badhiya geet bana hai!sudeep ji badhai ke patr hain ki wo ek achhe geet ko le kar aaye!haan,geet me tazgi hai!ek geet ke taur par dekhen to..bol,dhun aur gayki teenon hi santoshprad hain.kyonki geet ke bol,dhun aur gayki teenon hi sudeep ji ki hi hain,isi liye geet ka pramukh bhav pure geet me bana raha.waise shuruati kukchh panktiyon ki dhun agr bolon ke bhav ke jyada anukul hoti to behtar hota.kahna chahunga,yah rachna ek geet ke taur par bahut achhi hai,lekin hind-yugm se iske jure hone ki wajah se is'se sahityik star ke aur behtar hone ki apeksha hai.geet ke bol beshak achhe hain,lekin hind-yugm par jaisa sahitya ka star raha hai,us hisab se kamjor hai.man me pehle yah nirdharit karen ki \"aawaz\" ki team ka uddeshya sangeet ke kshetr me kuchh ullekhneey karne ka hai,ya hindi sahitya ka samvardhan v' prachar-prasaar.yugm ki chhavi rahi hai ki yah 'sarthak rachnaon avam sahitya' ko badhava deta raha hai,na ki sirf sahitya ke entertainment wale paksh ko.asha hai ki team ko mere kahne ka tatparya samajh me aaya hoga.rachna me chahe prem-ras ho chahe veer-ras,lekin sahityik star waisa hi rakhen jaisa ki yugm par kavitaon ka star rahta hai.khair,ek geet ke taur par yah rachna mujhe bahut achhi lagi.badhai!dhanyawaad!-janmejay"}, {"text_idx": "#000008", "text": "pehle to ye kahna chahoonga ki jahan tak sangeet ki baat hai wo pichle geeton mein jagah jaghah khoobsurti liye huye tha. Isliye un sab ke baad ye kahna ki is geet ka sangeet kuch alag sa aur nayapan liye huye hai pichle kuch geeton espescially sangeet dilon ka utsav, badhe chalo aur main nadi ke sath thodi nainsafi hogi.is geet ke bol aur gayiki se to santusht hoon par iska sangeet mujhe kuch khas jama nahin. Poetry mein jo feel hai use sangeet ka mood bilkul match nahin karta."}, {"text_idx": "#000010", "text": "aur haan shailesh ji aapse nivedan hain ki pop up ads band karein. Inse sangeet sunne aur padhne mein badi irritation hoti hai."}, {"text_idx": "#000011", "text": "\u0924\u092a\u0928 \u0936\u0930\u094d\u092e\u093e Tapan Sharma"}, {"text_idx": "#000012", "text": "Achha laga gaanaa.. sangeet aur achha ho sakta tha.. first stanza jyaada achha laga second se... Waiting for your next song..."}, {"text_idx": "#000015", "text": "\u0926 \u0930\u093f\u091f\u0930\u094d\u0928 \u0911\u092b \u0906\u0932\u092e \u0906\u0930\u093e \u092a\u094d\u0930\u094b\u091c\u0947\u0915\u094d\u091f"}, {"text_idx": "#000018", "text": "\u092e\u0939\u0940\u0928\u0947 \u092d\u0930 \u091a\u0932\u093e \u092f\u0939 \u092a\u0930\u094d\u0935"}, {"text_idx": "#000019", "text": "\u0939\u0943\u0926\u092f\u0928\u093e\u0925 \u092e\u0902\u0917\u0947\u0936\u0915\u0930 \u0915\u093e \u0938\u0902\u0938\u094d\u092e\u0930\u0923"}, {"text_idx": "#000021", "text": "\u0911\u0928\u0932\u093e\u0907\u0928 \u092a\u0941\u0938\u094d\u0924\u0915 \u0935\u093f\u092e\u094b\u091a\u0928"}]