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# Character Flaws in Fiction

Katie Khan Writing Coach at The Novelry 

Katie Khan

June 27, 2021

June 27, 2021

Character flaws are one of the most important ingredients for a gripping story and a memorable protagonist. Whether they’re honourable, ethical good guys, or down-and-out criminals with a wicked streak, they need some major flaw. And in the world of the character flaw, meaning stretches far beyond the all-important task of creating a believable cast.

Many writers can write. But few are naturals when it comes to storytelling. The good news is that storytelling skills can be learned, and because readers buy books for their stories, literary agents and publishers are always on the look-out for a great story. So, if you’re writing to get published, remember that what leaps out to publishers and agents alike is the story you’re telling. Storytelling begins with a character with a problem or a flaw.

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Our writing coach, author Katie Khan, has become obsessed with how we first meet our favourite complex characters in books and the major flaws that make them so compelling. And as a novelist, she’s keen to work out how best to create her own three-dimensional fictional characters. Here, Katie takes a deep dive into how to do it.

## How to introduce a character’s flaw

One of your biggest tasks when writing character flaws is deciding not only how but when to reveal them. Ideally, some fatal flaw will appear in chapter one, or as early as possible.

Remember: we need a character flaw for your hero. After all, a flawed character is an interesting character. They have somewhere to go, a ready-made character arc. Flaws create conflict. A character who’s already perfect rarely makes for a good story. Plus, an interesting character flaw, psychology would say, makes for an interesting backstory.

## List of character flaws

you don't need unique character flaws - common character flaws can work well

So what minor flaws or weaknesses, and what fatal flaw, might you consider imbuing your beloved characters with? It can be tricky to define ‘fatal flaw’ – after all, the trait that proves fatal for your major characters depends on their stories and their goals.

Here are some common negative personality traits – and some less obvious ones – you might consider:

- Arrogant or vain
- Conceited or self righteous
- Narcissistic or self centered
- Libidinous or having excessive desire
- Predatory
- Excessive pride
- Deluded
- Boastful
- Vengeful
- Narrow minded
- Easily angered or ill tempered
- Lack of self control

Or your character might be more on the pathetic side of flawed – things that might seem anything from almost cute almost positive personality tratis to infuriating uselessness. These might seem like more minor character issues to give your protagonist, but they can still hugely impact their character arc:

- Miserable
- Helpless
- Isolative
- Slothful
- Apathetic
- Small-minded
- Indifferent
- Prone to misplaced trust and/or easily deceived
- Weak willed
- Lacking knowledge or common sense
- Some irrational fear

don't forget to include at least one minor flaw that affects your character's life

### How you introduce character flaws matters!

Going beyond the character flaw definition, choosing and revealing your character’s flaw is, I think, one of the hardest parts of introducing the major characters in a novel. In fact, it’s one of the hardest parts of writing a novel at all! And unfortunately, it’s also the most open to misinterpretation.

In early drafts, we often introduce characters as deeply unhappy and broken. In its extreme, the main character is so down on their luck that the first chapter is a misery-fest.

Beware, too, of writing characters who are so aware of being awful that they already stand on the precipice of self-hatred. Pity them, the author seems to urge; pity this tragic figure for their plight.

This doesn’t work, I’m sorry to say. I’ve spent weeks if not months pondering why; I’ve concluded that when an author steps in and urges us to pity their character – especially from the moment they’re introduced – we cannot root for them.

We’re being given an opinion, rather than being allowed to form one.

Worse still, when a character openly recognises their flaw at the start (‘ I’m awful and I have to change’), the journey ahead falls flat. Not only are we being told what to feel about them, but they are not forced dynamically out of their equilibrium.

Resistance to change drives plot and conflict. Having no choice but to change is a story.

## Tips and techniques for writing character flaws

If you want some of my top hints and tricks when I’m thinking about writing character flaws, have a go at these:

1. Remove your authorial judgement from your character’s flaws
2. Let the character flaws speak for themselves
3. Introduce the character’s triumphant flaw
4. Put the character at odds with their setting
5. Don’t fear writing unlikeable characters

### 1. Remove your authorial judgement from your character’s flaws

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Highsmith throws us into the opening scene, in media res. Tom Ripley believes he is being followed. Afraid he is in danger of discovery, he enters a bar on Fifth Avenue to see if the man will bring out a police badge and arrest him. Instead, the man introduces himself as the father of Dickie Greenleaf, a vague college acquaintance of Tom Ripley’s. Ripley is relieved.

Ripley’s criminal activity is presented so matter-of-factly here I almost missed it: ‘it wasn’t grand larceny or tampering with the mails’. Ripley has clearly been up to no good before this first chapter. And right on its tail, Highsmith points out Ripley’s true nature – a manipulative person with the ability to run a con on the wealthy: ‘Tom knew just what to say to a father like Mr Greenleaf.’

#### Why is Highsmith’s approach to Tom’s negative personality traits effective?

Think for a moment about how Highsmith introduced this character – and how she didn’t. Imagine if Tom Ripley felt remorse in this first chapter, instead of a reprieve from jail. Imagine if Highsmith urged us to pity this morally corrupt creature.

It wouldn’t have anything like the same effect. Ripley would be a whiny rule-breaker who deserves to face justice. It would be tiresome and dull.

Highsmith doesn’t judge her creation, and so we (the readers) don’t either. We’re in on the con. We’re off on an adventure right from the outset, criminal behaviour be damned.

### 2. Let the character flaws speak for themselves

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Oh, this is a tragic figure, isn’t it? Isn’t she? Look at the people who ask Eleanor about her job: taxi drivers, dental hygienists. She could have added ‘hairdressers’ and we’d get the gist.

These people are duty-bound to ask personal questions as they go about their work, rather than actual friends or interested parties in her life. Eleanor is a loner (perhaps hence the name choice).

Eleanor's character flaw leads to quite a solitary existence and makes her quite an exceptional character

#### Why is Honeyman’s approach to Eleanor’s character flaws effective?

Again, take a moment to analyse how Honeyman introduces Eleanor and her less-than-perfect life.

Notice the total absence of the author’s opinion from the narrative? There is no authorial pity to be found, either in the presentation of the story or in Eleanor’s narration. She doesn’t pity herself. In fact, the world’s lack of interest in Eleanor is great: she doesn’t have to explain the specifics of her very boring job!

As Eleanor details the ins and outs of her daily routine, we learn that she eats lunch alone (a sandwich from Marks and Spencer on a Friday, ‘which rounds off the week nicely’), talks to no one, then goes home to an empty house where she listens to The Archers and eats food she doesn’t enjoy.

The lonely minutiae of her working week are laid bare – and then she describes her weekends.

Still no authorial judgement. In fact, the only place judgement bleeds into the narrative is when Eleanor is talking about her colleagues, or the doctor she sees about the back pain she’s experiencing due, in her opinion, to the weight of her breasts which she has weighed on her kitchen scales.

Other characters are treated with scorn. They are judged and found wanting. Eleanor’s treatment is empathetic, albeit matter-of-fact.

### 3. Introduce the character’s triumphant flaw

Though we are aware of the shortcomings of Eleanor Oliphant’s existence from the first line, we are less than five pages into the novel when Gail Honeyman hits us with Eleanor’s true character flaw.

It’s not that she’s an outsider who is lonely, a bit of a quirky oddball misunderstood by others. It’s that Eleanor Oliphant is PROUD of her life. Her character flaw is presented as a triumph.

This is the key to writing nuanced and artful character flaws: they believe they are in the right.

There is something fascinating about people who wear their shortcomings like a shield. People who say things like, ‘I’m plain-spoken me,’ or ‘I don’t suffer fools lightly.’ They name their coping mechanisms rather than putting the finger on the truth.

#### A flaw by any other name…

Being ‘plain-spoken’ is being blunt and rude by another name, isn’t it? And what makes a person blunt and rude? Why do they act that way? Prod it, like a bruise. Underneath that defence, there’s the flaw. Think about the psychology of your character, and you create a specific sort of fascination with them. They feel three-dimensional, real and relatable.

A character who has put walls up so high they are impressed by themselves, whose coping mechanisms have become a source of pride; a criminal relieved he is not being arrested but instead spots opportunity; a character certain the world is wrong and they are right – these are the characters I’ll follow through 350 pages of a novel.

Because when that belief begins to unravel, when their world begins to crumble and conflict comes thick and fast… What a reckoning they’ve got in store for them.

### 4. Put the character at odds with their world

When we think about how introduce a character and their flaw, their setting is extremely significant. I mentioned this in my blog about high-concept fiction, but again and again I return to the question: who is the worst-placed person to deal with the premise of this novel?

If your book is about an apocalypse, a character who over-relies on law and order is the ideal foil to experience the complete collapse of society. What will they do without their Excel spreadsheets? How will they cope? How will they overcome their fatal flaw and change?

#### Character flaws in opposition to the setting can create archetypes

In a novel about solving crime, a flighty and disorganised detective who relies only on gut instinct as their home and professional life unravels… We ’ ve seen that before, haven’t we? There’s a reason these characters’ flaws have become an archetype of the genre, if in need of a little refresh.

excessive curiosity might not be a character flaw for a detective, but excessive pride might. A major character flaw could lead to another character's death

The character is in opposition to the setting. Their major flaw is in opposition to their quest. They are the worst-placed person to do this thing, and by doing it, they must change. They will grow. That’s how you generate compelling character development.

### 5. Don’t fear writing unlikeable characters

As we ponder how to write a great character flaw, many writers are plagued by the common complaint that a character isn’t ‘likeable’.

Regarding his second novel, Artemis , Weir said:

In my eyes, likeable does not mean the reader must want to go for a beer with that character and swap notes on baking tips and London’s best dog walks. We’re not after the kind of character trait that we look for in a best friend or life partner.

I’m probably never going to ‘like’ a misogynist or a murderer. And if you give me a two-dimensional portrayal of an ‘angry’ or ‘self-pitying’ character then my empathy will likely go even further AWOL.

But if you can introduce that character to the reader without authorial judgement, if you can make the character believe their flaw is their strength, and if you keep them unaware of their true flaw until the world crumbles around them and they have no choice but to face their shortcomings head on (and change)… Well, then I will follow that person anywhere, even on a dramatic downward descent.

We will be invested enough to root for them, warts and all, whether that character is charming or unlikeable, good or bad. And hopefully a bit of both!

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Katie Khan Writing Coach at The Novelry 

## Katie Khan

Katie Khan is the author of two speculative fiction novels, Hold Back the Stars and The Light Between Us, published in the U.K. by Penguin Random House and in the U.S. by Simon & Schuster. Her debut novel Hold Back the Stars is being adapted for film by the producers of Stranger Things. Katie’s books have been translated into more than 20 languages and nominated for awards. Katie is Creative Director at The Novelry.

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