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 *By 1930 the play, though deemed difficult, was performed by various ethnic Chinese troupes the word ""difficult"" is confusing to me, used here. 

 *The lead should talk about the reception the play received upon release, some to the second paragraph. 

 *No DAB links, no dead links. 

 *Is there a link for ""letter-setter""? 

 *Kioe Lie's fiancée Gouw Hap Nio comes by and leaves some snacks for the two with their father awkwardly constructed. 

 *Can you add a reference for the costume criticism? 

 *Can you add in any more information? Does any more exist?   "