"Hi there, Noosa! I'm Cryptic C62, one of the online ambassadors for the outreach program. Sageross gave us the heads up that your class had started working on articles in sandboxes, which is great! I looked over what you have so far on the Niqab in Egypt, and here's some ideas for how you can improve it: 

 * Add a brief section explaining what a niqab is and how it differs from the hijab and the burqu 
 * Add links to relevant topics (see this edit for a sample) 
 * Copyedit to remove typos and avoid inconsistences, such as the italicization of some Arabic words but not others 
 * Start playing around with the footnote system for references 

 It's obvious from the notes you've left (""talk about niqab and bombing??"") that you intend to expand upon what you've already written, so some of the issues I've mentioned may work themselves out as you continue to edit. Keep up the good work!  ·  "