First of all, Wikipedia is not a tool to promote the company; that mean it should NOT to included the promotional tone. Please avoid wordiness and repetitions as it seen as a company promotion. Second, not every bit of information about the company is notable. If no third party reliable sources find that bit of information notable to publish, it is probably not notable and does not belong here. Third, if you have any connection to the company (and based on your edits you have), you should discuss all your edits at the talk page before making changes. Fourth, one or two-sentence paragraphs about operations by country is discouraged. It may be useful if there is more information but this is not a case right now.