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 : I'm not sure what  had in mind but the original banner said ""Please integrate the section's contents into the article as a whole, or rewrite the material"" before it was re-written as one banner. WP:CRITS says avoid Criticism sections entirely. I do think think the crit section is a bit rambling now. Like just one random criticism after another.  Maybe the Predictions section should have the prediction related criticism? Could any others find home elsewhere? If not disperse could the criticism be grouped better into what they are criticizing? I question the How to Create a Mind paragraph because that's covered in the article on the book, why including this one criticism from one book when he has many books with many criticisms? And the John Gray thing seems like a salient observation, but not actually a criticism. Finally and least importantly I think Reception is a kind of silly heading for a biographical article, I think books gets a reception not so much people. But I can't think of a replacement right now."