"==GA Review== 

 :This review is transcluded from Talk:You Are the One (telenovela)/GA2. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. 

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 :There are many problems with commas not being used when they should be. 
 ::Examples - 
 :::""The telenovela was produced by Pol-ka based on a premise by Adrián Suar which he formulated nearly six months before the show's premiere."" 
 :::""The premise involves a rich businessman and former Formula 1 racing driver who falls in love with a poor woman looking for work in his emporium."" 
 :::""As in Muñeca Brava, the narrative of You are the one revolves around a wealthy suitor and a poor woman, but unlike the former program You Are the One does not concentrate all the characters on a single narrative context but instead organizes two contexts for both the rich and the poor, each one with its own characteristic locations and supporting characters."" 
 :::"" The main location is a tenement in the neighborhood of La Boca where Esperanza lives with other characters."" 
 :::""Esperanza trains as a boxer in a neighbourhood gymnasium at the same time as Quique, who has a wrestling gimmick as the ""Commander Ray"". 
 :The lead still needs to be expanded, which I see was in the first Good Article review. 
 :""The story begins with a fight of the female boxer Esperanza Muñoz—nicknamed ""Monita""—who has injured her hand from fighting."" Why say that she is a female boxer, and then say that she injured her hand? That is redundant. ""With a fight of"" sounds awkward.  Is her nickname relevant to the television series? 
 :""Her manager is pressuring her to continue fighting despite her pain."" should ""Her manager pressures her to continue fighting, despite her pain"" 
 :""Unbeknown to the other characters—including Martín and Esperanza—Quique and Constanza began their own relationship."" What is wrong with a simple ""unknown"", rather than ""unbeknown""? 
 :""The program used several guest stars, who apperred in secondary or support roles in several episodes."" ""apperred"" should be ""appeared"". Why not say ""The program had several guest stars"" or ""Several guest stars were in the program""? 
 ::There are far too many problems with this. There was even a previous Good Article review.  
 :::This is a quick-fail.   "