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 *First, you need to get rid of any laudatory adjectives (""state-of-the-art fitness centers"", etc.) so that the article is written neutrally, see WP:NPOV.  Second, the list of directors and schools seems promotional as well and doesn't really belong in an encyclopedia article.  Third, and actually most importantly, the article needs to cite references independent of SBSM itself, see WP:V, that show that the organization is notable per WP:ORG.   "