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 ::::This is not exactly helpful advice. If you are unable to articulate a coherent criticism, then your suggestion is arbitrary, and hints at WP:OWN. There is no time limit on this, as WP:WIP says. I would be inclined to say, once again, that other sections of the article need more attention than the lede; we can always come back to it. 
 ::::I would like to propose, , that you and I (at least, others are welcome of course) choose another section to work on together. I would propose the one on Justice, which has had a ""requires expansion"" tag on it since late 2010. I dont think this talk page is the most appropriate forum for the initial bigger edits, but perhaps your or my sandbox could be used to that end. After some editing and expansion, we will post sections of it here for additional comment. 
 ::::How about it?    "