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 == Political funding in New Zealand == 

 Maybe that some of the text that you removed was indeed ""commentary"" - however, this edit did not improve the style of the whole piece. I would have preferred a more careful approach to the piece, with a welcome critical warning as to give some source for specific paragraphs that you feel did lack them. After this undetailed and general ""clearance"" that unnecessarily removed a lot of ""underbrush"" from a text which had been written with a lot of care (maybe not in all respects) I do not know how to procede. There certainly won't be any ""edit war""!   "