==Suggestions for Improvement== 

 Sources: 

 There is a lack of citing in the plot. Opinions are given about the characters in the character section, as they are not backed up by secondary sources. Example: Van being coined as the “ideas” person of the group. Where is this stated? Who claims this?  

 Sources are peer reviewed, but could use more references to sources of this kind. Most citations in the article are referencing the novel itself and linked to opinion. 

 Cultural Cross reference section has no secondary source citations. 

 Structure: 

 I feel like major themes section is misplaced and would work better towards the top of the article. Dedications section seems pointless and could be deleted. 

 Writing and Grammar: 

 Grammatically, there are only a few minor errors. Commas misplaced, chunky sentences, run-ons. I think the plot could use some sentence re-structuring, but the article isn’t too bad.  

 Good luck with the page! I'm sure it will turn out well! Grapefr00t