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 :*8. ""Some, including Tom Palmer of..."" If we imply that there are additional people who make this identical criticsm than we should be prepared to name them. Since the criticism is quite specific, including assocaitions with several people, it is doubtful that that is the case. If we only know of Palmer making the criticism than we should omit the ""Some, including..."" phrase,   and simply attribute it to Palmer. - "