Hi , I noticed your removal of text regarding Trainor performing her first music writing effort at a wedding, but leaving the text regarding her writing that musical rearrangement.  I tend to agree what was there was wordy and didn’t flow well, but I think it may be important that this was performed at a wedding, because otherwise, it doesn’t seem notable.  Any kid could “rearrange music” but most would probably not be very good at it, and it wouldn’t be performed anywhere.  Do you have any objection to a briefer mention of the wedding performance at age 7, and if not, do you have any suggestions on how to better briefly word it?