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 :Certainly, Michael.  The second sentence is a good example: ""Forced circumcisions have occurred in Kenya in 2002,[67] 2006,[68] and in the ethnic conflicts that followed the election in Kenya on 27 December 2007.[69]""  This tells us that forced circumcisions have occurred, but says nothing about circumcision and law.  What is the relevance of the sentence to circumcision and law?  Were the forced circumcisions legal?  Were they illegal?  Does Kenyan law have anything to say about it?  None of these questions are answered, making the relevance unclear.  The same is true of the following sentence, and the following two paragraphs.  It is not true, however, of the final sentence (or possibly two sentences) of the first paragraph, and in particular the last paragraph of the section, which clearly indicate that these cases forced circumcisions constitute assault in their respective jurisdictions.   "