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 ===Action=== 

 * I think the only way that this article can be improved is if Factseducado actually gets involved with the article by adding references etc, this user has alot to say and they are obviously well read on this topic. But they need to get involved with some action and add these ""peer reviews"" or scholars from the field on Theosophy into the article that they have mentioned.. becuase so far well over a week or more and he has written 100s of lines on this talk page doing all kinds of debates (some of which off topic), but when it comes to the article itself nothing, no action taken, no improvements whatsoever. I really do not have time to read all of this users posts, I am afraid there is just too much, it may be nice to have a chat on here but that is not what the article is about, we discuss improvements or nothing at all. So in short, there needs to be less talk on here and more action on the article itself, atleast then it will be easy to see what is going on. DonaldRichardSands has obviously tried to improve the article, but other editors need to get involved. So less talk more action, I am going on holiday for a week, so good luck with it all!   "