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 ""Athens suffered a land and agrarian crisis in the late 7th century, again resulting in civil strife. The Archon (chief magistrate) Draco made severe reforms to the law code in 621 BC (hence Draconian), but these failed to quell the conflict. Eventually the moderate reforms of Solon (594 BC), ! Is this concept excerpted from the Scholastic Weekly Reader you used in grade school? This is a misrepresentation of the historical record. It may have been appropriate for grade school knowledge of history but is not appropriate for adult learning. This needs to be revised to a current level of understanding.     improving the lot of the poor, but firmly entrenching the aristocracy in power, gave Athens some stability."" 

 Firstly, why is your hidden comment in the middle of a sentence? What exactly are you objecting to? 
 Secondly, why so patronising? You can just disagree with the statement. There's no need to make pithy comments about 'grade school' - which are also completely inappropriate, since that was not written by someone who is in 'grade school', whatever that is. 
 Thirdly, if you disagree with it, why not change it yourself? If you know that this is a misrepresentation of the historical record, then you obviously know how it could be re-written. So just do it instead of carping on about 'grade school'. 
 Fourthly, try to summarise the Athenian land crisis and its resolution in four sentences, in a way suitable for a summary style article. You'll find that there really isn't space to revise it to a current level of understanding. 
 Fifthly, why not use the talk pages to discuss articles? That's what they are there for. 
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