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 *I did some copy editing of the article, some of which you might want to change. Are you using British or American spelling? (I became confused, but I can fix it.) Also, you talk of the illustrations from deep time in two different places. Is this intentional? I think the article is wonderful, but I may not be neutral. You did a great job of portraying the difficulties of her life interwoven with the importance of her findings. Regards, —  "