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 == Are we on the same page here, or not? == 

 Hi Alf.laylah.wa.laylah, I can't tell if you and I are on the same page or not here. It seems like you picked up on my response to the IP editor and responded to portions of what I said defensively, then criticized the IP. I guess maybe I could have said ""two editors who aren't sure what alternative phrasing you'd prefer""? I don't have a perspective on the dispute (I know zero about the situation/campaign/whatever,) I was attempting to facilitate suggestions for how to fix the language if it is in dispute, instead of criticizing the existing language and walking away without improving the article. Hope we didn't get our wires crossed. Regards!   "