::Its not 'just getting lost' though is it? Its an example that illustrates the theme. The line establishes what the theme is supposed to be, and then professes to outline how this is done by saying what we see. She's in a new city and we can see this because of her trouble navigating. She's also living out of boxes etc, but I'd only use one example to keep it simple. Then I'd use an visual example for the other point - battling Taylor and/or Flynn to show her alone in a man's world. I'm not wedded to my particular edit, but a correction is needed because the examples listed are not what we see. The line is trying to say that the broader theme is established with certain examples, which to me made sense, except the couple of things listed were bad examples because they aren't what we see. They were examples of vague story arcs that needed to be much clearer and simpler examples. If its decided that the line is better used by describing the broader examples listed above that's fine too, but the line has to reflect that and be rewritten to remove 'We see this by.' Even the wording is poor - 'after leaving Atlanta' is completely wrong and could've at the very least been corrected to 'arriving FROM Atlanta' instead of being reverted multiple times to something that's obviously incorrect. If we use some of the points and examples raised here, concepts that better show how the theme is illustrated we can have a section much superior to whats there now.