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 == Story summary verb tenses == 

 I noticed that the story summary uses both past and present verb tenses, making the text an awkward mix of the two. For example (italics added for emphasis): 

 :Their attempt costs Alphonse his entire body and Edward his left leg. In a desperate effort to save his brother, Edward sacrificed his right arm to ""Affix"" his brother's soul to a suit of armor. 

 The story should be told in one tense or the other. I personally prefer keeping it in the present tense: 

 :Their attempt costs Alphonse his entire body and Edward his left leg. In a desperate effort to save his brother, Edward sacrifices his right arm to ""Affix"" his brother's soul to a suit of armor. 

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