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 *OK thats it for the bad news.  Sorry if it comes across as a little much all at once.  The article is interesting and I will do some more copy edits and improvements tomorrow. Regards,    
 **Not bad news at all. This article has been needing a separate pair of eyes to read it over. Please be open on the rest of the copyedit (I know the article is a bit long, but it's definitely thorough). '''''' "