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 *""and only minimal writing till the end of her life."" - this isn't quite right. 
 *I see the children are mentioned here. As before, I think it would be more effective if they were fitted in chronologically. 
 *The Fountain, given that it was a bestseller, should be linked, although there doesn't appear to be an article. 
 *""and furthermore was not entirely complimentary towards her"" - ""and was not entirely complimentary of her work"" (if this is the case.) 
 *What is an aper? 

 This article is very nicely written, and was a pleasure to read. Just a few minor points before it can be passed. x "