"====Cleanup==== 
 This is an interesting page, but it needs to be integrated into Wikipedia a bit more. It also has a bit of an issue with being in an encyclopaedic tone (e.g. not using ""you"") and perhaps could be conveyed to the reader a little more (perhaps via a table or diagram). I've added a couple flags and am going to add it to my worklist.    

  

  
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