":Well, from first glance, I'd say that it needs to be rearranged a tiny bit (the info about the gender differences should really go under the ""Pokémon"" section rather than ""Gameplay"", in my opinion), and that the ""Pokémon"" section should be a lot larger - maybe move a bit of the info over from the main Pokémon page's 4th gen section? I did some grammar work and sentence restructuring, by the way.  I might do some more tonight.   

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