": While I've been trying not to comment that much on individual ideas, remember that NPOV is not achieved by text that distracts the user's emotions from the issue.  I'm looking at ""genetically disfigured"" specifically.  And a word change may be in order in the case of 'nascent' - I consider myself well read, but can honestly say I've never heard the word used.  (I have no opinion on the content of this paragraph personally, however, either way)    

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