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 ::I think the record nature of the achievement should be ""brought out"" more regardless of whether the information is relocated; you are correct on that point.  Personally I'm even open to moving the information up the lead, although not to the first paragraph since I think the first paragraph should solely define the film. I think it could be incorporated into the second paragraph ahead of the production information, since the box office/oscars are definitely more prominent information than the background production info. Is that something both you and Flyer would contemplate?   "