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 :Thanks Slambo.  I'm restoring my explanation for my edits; there's no reason to discuss this in 'private', Captain scarlet.  

  
 == reasoning behind my edits == 

 ===Surveyor section=== 
 1) removed This module of the game is appreciated for its simplicity. as it is not NPOV 

 2) added  Here, the user can shape and 'paint' the landscape, lay tracks, and place buildings, scenery and trains., a description of what Surveyor actually is. 

 3) removed  Items included with the boxed game are not the only items available for use in the game; Auran offers a download station (or DLS) which hosts over 10000 custom built objects, including decor elements as well as drivable trains. as advertising.  Mention of third party content is added below. 

 4) general grammar and tidy up. 

 ===Driver section=== 
 1) added a reference to explain the link between Surveyor and Driver (bearing in mind that this is descriptive of all versions of Trainz). 

 2) general grammar and tidy up. 

 ===Scenarios section=== 
 1) removed Scenarii are beeing replaced by the more popular session concept which requires less scripting and can be created in 'Surveyor' rather than having to be fully scripted from a third party application. because 

 a) it's disputable.  Scenarios still exist in the game (as a discrete module, and it is the module which is being described here). 

 b) it's confusing, and I don't imagine it conveys much meaning to anyone not already familiar with TRS. 

 And a note on the whole ""scenarii"" thing - whatever you personally think is the plural of scenario, the game module is called 'scenarios'''.  So it makes sense to refer to it as such in this article, no? 

 ===Additional features section=== 

 1)removed the header, as most of that described were not 'Additional features' of the game. 

 2)removed the paintshed section - with hindsight, I guess a description of paintshed should be readded, and I will do so. added a new para on Paintshed. 

 3)removed Trainz Discussion Forum, as pretty much all games have a discussion forum and it's not a notable feature.  A link to the forums is at the bottom of the article. 

 4)removed Language Beta Translation Group - there were translations which were created, but subsequently not used?  What relevence has that to anything?  If anything, it sounds like a subtle POV - a complaint from a member of the LBTG that their work was not used, perhaps? 

 5)removed Content Creation Group, for similar reasons as the LBTG.  It's confusing to someone who doesn't already know what it is, for one thing.  also, an additional reference to third party content has been added, see below. 

 6) removed Trainz on the Road - certainly an interesting phenomenon but it doesn't really say much about Trainz itself.  Auran rewarded demonstrators with premium access to its DLS facilities. sounds a bit funny.  Advertising? 

 ===History section=== 

 Generally tidied up and made more readable. 

 ===Other changes=== 

 removed the little box graphics - they don't mean anything to anyone who doesn't know what they already are, they don't add anything to the article, they look untidy and they are inconsistent (there is no icon for scenarios'', for example). 

 added Trainz also has a large content creation community, who use modelling software such as Gmax to create additional scenery and rolling stock models for use in the game.  The more recent versions of Trainz include a lot of third-party content, and registered owners of the game can download (and upload) third party content via the Trainz website. as a NPOV description of the third party community. Captain scarlet has incorporated this para into his latest edits so I guess it's acceptable."