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 ::Thanks Steve. Since I haven't heard any further comment from anyone on either this or my earlier suggestions (in re Tigo's ""Secondary"" concerns) in a few days, I've gone ahead and implemented them. I welcome criticism and suggestions on these edits; I believe they are mostly organizational and don't change any substantial claims, but everyone please say so if you think otherwise (or dislike this reorganization). 
 ::Steve, one thing you may be able to help with: the references on the first sentence seem an odd jumble of individual references and two strange amalgamated references named DefRefs01 and DefRefs02. It seems like if things are going to be amalgamated they should all be amalgamated together into one set of dictionary definitions, otherwise they should all be split up, but I don't know much about the technicalities of writing inline citations on wiki. That seems like it's more your forte though, can you maybe help sort that out?   "