"== Comments from Kalle == 
    
 Your article was very well organized and thorough. Much of the content was fantastic, so my suggestions focus mainly on grammar/readability issues I saw. I divided comments by section.  Great work! 

 === Non-Profit Housing Development in the United States === 
 1. Missing ""is"": ""...whose mission [is] to provide for the needy, the elderly,..."" 

 === Non-Profit Development vs. For-Profit Development === 
 1. Although it is implicitly implied by their target population, it will be helpful to explicitly state why non-profit developers' business strategy causes them to lack financial and technical resources. 
 2. Cite source for claim: ""Using multiple funding sources is risky because it creates complex financing which can be both timely and expensive."" 

 === Issues During Pre-Development === 
 1. Rephrase ""The major problem with non-profit developers..."" to ""A major problem for..."" 
 2. Check awkward phrase: ""Pre-development is essential for putting packaging a project proposal"" 

 ===Ownership=== 
 1. Unnecessary colon: ""Some considerations that non-profits evaluate before creating an ownership entity include: the ease and speed..."" 
 2. Missing ""a"": "" Also,each member has [a] right to participate in all partnership decisions"" 
 3. Rephrase "" Limited partners are treated differently than general partners where they are only liable for the capital invested"" to "" Limited partners are treated differently than general partners in that they are only liable for the capital invested "" 

 ===Financing (Multi-Family Housing Programs)=== 
 1. Consider providing brief descriptions of each of these programs similar to your treatment of other programs. 

  
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