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 == Citations and quick review == 

 Your citations look like a good start. What they need is page numbers (for books in particular); you can but you don't have to use the cite templates (see WP:CITE) for more information. I would like to see each sentence referenced, not only some (think what will happen when somebody inserts content in a middle of a paragraph that has only a reference at the end). You also need to make your headings second level (so use two == instead of one). External links should be more descriptive. Great so far! | "