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 == Informal review == 

 I've given the lead a bit of a copy-edit so far. I'll see what I can do over the next few weeks, but I'm a bit pressed for time on and off wiki. Just one question so far:    
 *""This meeting forces her to look at the life she did not choose and make choices about the future."": Do we really need this in the lead? If so, is there a better way that we can phrase it?   "