==Stylistics== 
 Thanks for your email. I'm glad you appreciate my input. The proposed ammendments are fine. Go ahead. I wasn't sure myself about the 'phonology' heading. The main point of these paragraphs seems to be about the stress placed on particular syllables, so 'word choices' is probably a bit too general - but can act as place-saver. By the way, you might like to have a look at the literary language article. As far as I can see, there is a confusion here between 'literary language' (of the sort you are addressing on the Stylistics article) and the conventions of written language as opposed to spoken language. I'm sure you could help them sort it out!