"==GA Review== 

 :This review is transcluded from Talk:Yoko Ono/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. 

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 I read through this article a few weeks back, so I'm in a handy position to GA review it. I think this is a tough candidate for GA - do you write about Yoko Ono the highly original and strong willed artist who was ahead of her time, Yoko Ono the morally supportive wife and advocate for world peace, or Yoko Ono the funny woman who put weird noises on Beatles records and caused them to break up? 

 I can see immediate problems with large amounts of completely unsourced text, such as the second and third paragraphs in ""Early life and family"", where her experiences during and immediately after WWII are especially problematic and must be backed up properly. The quote about ""Hide and seek"" also requires a citation, which must be either a copy of Grapefruit or a good impartial review of it. 

 I also notice some of the citations don't appear to link through correctly, for example I see a reference to ""Miles 1997"", which I recognise as Barry Miles' official biography of Paul McCartney. I think these issues will need to be resolved in order to stand a good chance of the review passing, I'm afraid. 

 I notice the article has previously been through a Good Article Reassessment. Have you covered all the issues raised there? 

 I'll go back through the article in depth and make further comments.     "