** spoiler alert ** 
 This book grew on me. 
 At first it felt like a copy of City of bones, especially with the nightclub scene at the beginning. 
 The first few chapters are a little jumbled and I could have done with out the one chapter from Danny's perspective telling us how arrogant Cole is. 
 Really how many times and in how many ways do we have to be told Cole acts arrogant, 
 You should be able to show us with your writing. 
 That being said I was able to get a little into it after that but it definitely feels more like a first draft than a best seller.