Wow. This was a wild ride. It hit all the right notes (disability, gender, bisexuality, class and race). I particularly appreciated that the f/f romance wasn't forbidden because it was f/f (it never comes up, not even from the point of view of the Earth-bound narrator) but instead because it was a cross-class situation where the love interest was a noble. 
 Nolan's disability is a bit complicated, but for me it didn't matter that it was magical in origin. He's just as affected as someone with neurologically caused seizures and has dealt with what that's done to his life for all of 17 years, plus because of the magic seizures he's lost one of his feet and is therefore physically disabled. Plus, even though astrally projecting yourself into another body in another world might seem like a superpower, Nolan never experiences it as positive or benefits from it. With the right pills, he's able to control his 'ability' to an extent, but he's never anything other than plagued by it. Disability as a metaphor, or as actually!magical (Percy Jackson's dyslexia) is a dangerous trope to play wit but Duyvis has played and won as far as I'm concerned. 
 The ending was a little short, all in all, but it can't detract from all that came before, and conceptually I thought the storyteller format was lovely.