Ehhhhhh. 
 Really nothing to rave about. It was not poorly written in terms of style or technical aspects. The story was not particularly interesting and I feel it is a bit overdone. It does not stand out from other vampire fiction to me. The "romance" happened far too quickly, in my opinion. I would expect vampires who have lived so long to be a little harder to get in the sack, but... Even for a short story, it was short. 
 I feel like the author is capable of more. I would like to see a longer story from her. :)