That 4 stars mostly constitutes only my love on the first part, the breaking. Damn, that sure hit me hard. It left a really distinctive aftertaste in my mouth (and heart) that I could not remove. The last three parts did not move me as well as the first part; I mean, it dragged on and all these talk of losing and breaking becomes so banal I try to force myself to accord with it and it became quite so-- i know you will kill me for this-- overly-arching to feminism. It really is an exciting read, but beware for a really dragging bunch of poetry (or nonpoetry, quasi-poetry, whatever you call it).