I really almost called this a DNF, but I hate not finishing a book. 
 It bothered me that Ten found it necessary to keep her legs hair free even though she was being tortured in prison. 
 Also, the writing sounded extremely immature. A lot of it sounded as if it was a comedians interpretation of how teenagers speak. 
 Oh and "Bow" loses their character. In the beginning their witty with immature jokes, but later on, they begin to sound more like a "goody toe-shoes". Totally lost what makes you love them. 
 BUT before you give up on it and declare DNF, pleeeeease get to chapter 18. That's where the sh!t hits the fan and it gets so good! Hopefully the author stops the "witty" teenage angst filled one liners and makes Tenley sound like an actual person!