I got nothin' for this one. Managed to get through it in 5 or 6 hours, so I'm either getting better at skipping the pointless adverbs at the end of every piece of dialogue, or just better at not pausing to go, "someone just said something inquiringly, holy shit, someone just really did that." 
 Cool list that has all the adverbs in just one chapter of one of the books (please don't read article too hard he is a bit daft) : http://www.gotpoetry.com/News/article... 
 The general response to this is that nobody complains about the clauses she also pins to dialogue. The adverbs are way way more obvious and everyone understands what's wrong with them in a couple seconds of explaining, even if they go "yeah whatever _I didn't notice_" not realizing that of course they didn't, they're terrible readers. The second part of the clause thing is that, while it's a cheap way to do things, it is at least reasonable. You can pin action to dialogue, but you should never pin dialoguely to dialogue.