There's so much I want to say, and I don't have a lot of time. I wanted to like this, but I didn't. Between the references to that book, the female lead with absolutely zero common sense and the whole possible BDSM angle, I wasn't pleased. Also, what was with the cokehead roommate? I don't understand why that was even part of this story. 
 This was a good plot idea, and I wanted it to work, but sadly it didn't. The sentence structure was poor and editing wasn't nearly as bad as it could have been, but it still needed some work.