Well, that was an utter waste of time. I could have spent the time wasted reading Unwind or Outside Wonderland or any of the other, numerous books I've been dying to read. And this book almost, literally killed me. Honestly, there were times where I would have begged any random person off the street to, "kill me now." What a stupid, idiotic book. 
 On the bright side, it was slightly. Ever so slightly, better than Divergent. 
 Alright, let's get this show on the road, shall we? 
 1. Augh, I've been shot in the shoulder! But I can carry on. It is no biggie. But the other injured people, oh, they can't do anything. Seriously, Tris? That is unrealistic. With a gun wound in the shoulder, you would never in a million years have been able to do what you did. But does that matter? No, cause this book is an illogical mess. 
 2. All the characters had split personalities? Honestly, they all changed their actions and personalities somewhere between the ending of the first book and this one? The characters seemed so foreign and unlike themselves. Like Caleb, I mean, what the heckling? 
 3. Speaking of Caleb, yeah, what was with that? I mean there was NO hint towards him being a traitor at all. It was out of the blue. If you're gonna have a traitor, you've gotta make it believable and actually drop some hints. So, yeah, that was poorly done. Really. Also, he was one of the only characters I liked. 
 4. Speaking of characters I actually liked, way to kill them all off. The main characters are all dumb and abusive and idiotic but the supporting characters are awesome. And then she killed all the awesome supporting characters. Needless to say, I wish the main character had been Lynne or Marlene. I mean, honestly, what was those deaths? 
 5. Now, for one of the most annoying aspects. Tris and Four. I mean, Four? Way to be an abusive jerk who threatens to walk out on his girlfriend because she's traumatized and is making stupid mistakes. Yeah, she's dumb and her actions are illogical, but seriously, you're supposed to love her, even if she's stupid. 
 6. Marcus? Really, Tris. Why trust him? WHY? You hate him. He abused your jerk of a boyfriend and you can't stand him. So, why trust him? That made no sense. Which is weird, cause you're supposed have some Erudite in you, but Erudite are logical and you just aren't. So... I gotta question the validity of your test results. 
 I could go on. And on. And on. Trust me, this is 524 pages of pure crap (and I don't usually say something like that, I like to think I'm pretty lenient on what I judge.) 
 Now I'm gonna do something worthwhile. Like, finish Flowers for Algernon.