There was nothing wrong with this. It was actually pretty clever but it wasn't my favored brand of fantasy. I appreciated it but I didn't enjoy it. Too many stories within stories. This is all coming from someone who awarded one star to Neil Gaiman's The Sandman, Vol. 1: Preludes and Nocturnes so graphic novel aficionados may prefer to ignore this rating. 
 I loved Y: The Last Man, Vol. 1: Unmanned and Preacher, Volume 1: Gone to Texas but the fantasy aspect of this one more closely resembled Locke and Key: Welcome to Lovecraft #2. 
 Not bad but not my thing.