I'm still disappointed this wasn't Ollie and Brit's story, but I enjoyed it...mostly. There were a few things that annoyed me, namely Calla's thoughts anytime anyone with a penis came around. I was also disappointed in the poor editing, though I've recognized it's a trend with this series. Most of all though, was the dialogue in some areas. It was much too old for the character's ages. No one talks in past tense so formally, especially not a twenty one year old girl. And for all that is good and holy, if you start a sentence with "We got," you're gonna be crossed off my Christmas Card list. Jax said it about fifty times. He's off my list. I can't deal with bad dialogue. Especially from the hot guy. 
 Now the things I did enjoy? Jax being protective and adorable. Them together. And of course, J. Lynn never disappoints me with the love (see also: smut) part of her love stories. I was invested in these two, even if they both did some pretty stupid shit. I know stupid shit has to happen to get sunshine and rainbows, but in the end I was happy with the read even if it wasn't the best.