I agree, Fitzpatrick is a much better writer than Meyer. Its still dragging and a lot of fillers (marcie, scott, patch, scott, patch, jealousy, wanna kill that girl but wait she's.. my.. omg!! and etc) in the end, it did give a slight interesting curve but I still wish it could have gone way a lot better than that. 
 I still dont like Nora nor Patch in this matter. Along the way, I wish Kate Daniels could have possessed Nora for a moment and act less like an anti-feminist girl who like to get herself trouble. I mean, jealousy was the main reason she snoop (and phail!) around so much.