The love triangle / square / pentagon / hexagon/ spider web was annoying. I've always wondered why everyone hates love triangles so much. I guess I've go my answer now. It's a lot like the situation in Twilight: everyone beautiful pretty much "loves" everyone beautiful. I don't mean to discourage you from reading this book (my advice: skim over the middle) because other than that this book was pretty good. 
 There was this scene that seemed unrealistic: right after her grandparents were killed by a MASK, then she ends up working for a mask... and then she's at this place with Elias and she's... checking him out? THE MASKS JUST BROKE YOUR FAMILY APART, WHAT'S WRONG WITH YOU? 
 The beginning was good, the middle was somewhat messed up (because of the spiderweb), but the end got better.