It's pretty good but there's things in the storyline that make it feel like it's an older person's fantasy of a young couple's first date. Not many (any?) dates go all-nighters without alcohol. Maybe I'm just from a bad background but this feels fake for a couple of 18 year olds. Alas, why is it better for the rich girl to decide to go directly to Brown instead of taking the gap year at the kibbutz in South Africa & accidentally doing something real for ten minutes? So there's a feel of somebody's parents wrote this and let their own fantasies about what they want for their children creep in... I don't know how old the authors are, but this kind of thing did bother me a little.