"But Peter's right, she's not pretty , that word is too small.She is not like the girls I used to stare at, all bend andcurve and softness. She is small but strong, and her brighteyes demand attention. Looking at her is like waking up." 
 Awesome! Loved it! It's nice to get a look inside Tobias/Four's head. My only criticism is that I want more Four!