[(Likes)] 
 Storyline (Very gripping and interesting. It started quite simple and then got more complicated and twisted as it went on.) 
 World (the history and the two countries with different ways of living, and the magical powers, they were all very well thought through.) 
 Writing (the more you read, the more you learn from the back story until the end of the good. Apart from this, it was written very easy-to-read and not very dry. Though it wasn't my favorite type of language, still it could be a lot worse.) 
 [[Dislikes]] 
 Holes (It had BIG holes that could change the whole story (view spoiler)[ like why didn't Valek kill Mogkan sneakily like he stole the letter, and so on (hide spoiler)]) 
 Characters (I couldn't understand them very well. Sometimes they had opposite emotions that didn't make sense, like bravery and cowardliness.)