I'll admit I'm a sucker for the famous boy, common girl (or boy) pollen. And the scenario here sounded reminiscent of some very successful fan fiction I've read across fandoms. And the pieces were there. But it needed a little extra push. 
 I couldn't get a real feel for the protagonist. Her initial emotional reactions felt contrived to fit the plot. First she was sweet and quirky. Then she was angry so she yelled a lot, but that meant she wasn't like other girls because obviously she didn't moon over this boy band. It didn't always work for me. 
 And here's the thing. I didn't really like Oliver. All of his charm was that he was the frontman of the Heartbreakers. But he didn't feel developed or flushed out beyond that. Okay, he liked to cook. He had one distinctive personality trait. But all the other boys felt like more complete characters. And while it's obviously a personal preference, I would have picked Alec any day. 
 I know the author got her start on wattpad because the cover of the book says so. However, wattpad isn't one of my main hangouts. I know the One Direction fandom is popular for fan fiction to publish harvesting right now. I don't know if this is part of that, I don't know if there's depth here I would get if I was part of the fandom.