First line: "Rory, stop!" 
 This series turned into a big ol' cheese fest. Everything became so obvious and tropey and if they weren't such quick reads I would have left this series after the first book. 
 - The timeline of this series is whack. All three books probably take place over the course of like a month and a half, maybe two? Definitely not enough time for characters to be declaring their love for each other. HELL NO. 
 - Rory is such a special snowflake. I know I was praising her for really being true to herself in the first book but she's so loved and revered by pretty much everyone, and I'm looking for a reason why. 
 - The plot and mystery got old real quick - dragged out too long. 
 - Joaquin > Tristan EASILY. Tristan is boring af. 
 - (view spoiler)[For someone forever in love with Tristan, that little side thing with Joaquin was laughable. How dare you, Rory (hide spoiler)] 
 - Chosen one trope but again WHY HER? 
 - All of a sudden a couple others are Lifers and they're just cool with it, compared to the internal dilemma Rory had 
 - The synopsis gives away like half of the book's plot 
 - No explanation for how the Tse twins know so much 
 - A lot of things left unexplained really 
 Yay I finished a series! Boo it wasn't good!