Astrid's Description: 
 Instead of working out problems in a relationship, Edward runs away. He rips Bella's heart out by lying to her and saying that he never loved her. You get to spend an entire novel reading about her depression and insanity. Yes, I mean insanity because she learns that if she does "dangerous" things, then she can "see" Edward. Bella also uses her friend Jacob to make her feel better. Who cares about his needs though, right? 
 Everything that bothers me is in the description. Edward runs away to give Bella a chance at a better life. You cannot tell me that a boy that has been alive for ninety years is not going to understand how relationships should work. Sure, I do not believe that he is the best thing for her, but to run away instead of talk to her, come on! Then Bella is depressed in such a terrible way that she cuts herself off from everyone. Including her parents. She loses weight and is basically a shell of a person. Then Bella starts doing things that trigger an adrenaline rush just so she can have this ridiculous vision of Edward. All the while using Jacob to get these visions. 
 Bella and Jacob develop an easy friendship, but she knows he wants more than that. However, Bella has sworn not to go there. Except that she begins to wonder if she could go there just so no one else can lay claim to him. Even Bella talks about how selfish that is of her. Yet she does nothing to stop seeing him. When he pulls away, she does everything she can to pull him back to her. Let him go! If she cared, she would. I get that it is needed for the saga to make sense, but still, she could have tried to not hurt him. 
 The pattern of mainly focusing on her friendship with Edward is still in a book where he is supposed to be gone. 
 One more thing that I almost forgot about. The Cullen's lived in the area for two-ish years before the Quileute boys began shifting. Yes, Stephine does say that they have to become of age, but then Seth proves that wrong when he turns at fourteen, and the other boys did not begin shifting until they were fifteen. It does not add up. Were there no kids between eighteen (Sam, the first one) and fifteen (The other that shifted after they turned the "right" age) that had the "unique" gene? 
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