The H was a dick the h had her whiney ass moments the story had a borderline partial shifted sex scene which y'all know is a big ass mutherfucking hell no in my book. That shit needs to be a disclaimer. I'm not giving this one a red x only because the oh he started shifting while fucking me fact was an after thought and not spotlighted in the scene. But still!! 
 story 2.5 
 narrator 3