Story of Fated is good. For me it has the same problem like Hunting Lila. In both book story is not bad, characters are OK, even the story line is OK. But what is lacking is depth. It could be amazing, if only the was more to it. More developed world, a bit more development to the characters and more essence to the story. On the plus side, writing style is really really good, my eyes just flew over world, story is consistent and does focus on unimportant stuff. I also the way story just start from the first page, that is does not have 50 page intro. you are instantly hooked. All in all not bad. :)