It wasn't badly written, but it could have been edited down. Sometimes I had trouble feeling the chemistry between the characters because I had trouble believing it went further than lust. They didn't really get the opportunity to get to know each other. Also Brady could be a douche. I also wasn't expecting our female protagonist to just be going into her junior year of college. And our male protagonist to be 27. Add on the fact he's asking her to hide the relationship, and those are some uncomfortable power dynamics no matter how strong Liz is. I may still continue because now I am curious.