This started off really good. I was completely pulled in to the characters and their development. About halfway through, I found myself waiting for something to happen. I suppose this story was a bit anti-climatic for me. I really wanted to like it a lot more than I did. 
 As was previously mentioned, some of the grammatical errors were a bit distracting. I wish that some of the relationships in the story had developed a bit more. Particularly the ones between Mercy and her parents. The ending was a bit of a let down. But being that I read the entire book in one day.. how bad could it have been?? 
 Bottome line, I might read book number two in this series just to find out what happens between Mercy and Flynn. Hot hot hot!!