I was generous and gave this book 2 stars. This novel was so disappointing to me. I loved Ms. White's Paranormalcy series, and figured that this would be just as good. Well...I was very very wrong. Gone was any humor and wit that was in Paranormalcy. The main female characters weren't fun and interesting to read, nor where they tough and strong (at least to me). However, what turned me off the most was the writing. You would think this was Ms. White's first book! The writing was choppy, and borderline juvenile. At times, I felt like I was reading the first draft of the book, and there were many revisions to come. 
 When Mind Games first starts off, the narration was annoying to say the least, but I was hoping that either a) I would get used to it or b) the story would get better and make up for it. Neither of those things happened. This book could have been excellent if the proper time was dedicated to it. This book felt rushed and not given enough thought. Also, even though the chapters were clearly marked as to whose perspective we were reading, there were times when I still couldn't tell who was talking. Fia and Annie honestly seemed so similar to me that it was hard to tell them apart. Usually, each character has their own distinct personality that sets them apart from the other, but there was none of that in this book. As the story progressed, both sisters became more and more annoying and boring to read about, and I almost considered stopping the book. However, I finished it because I thought that maybe the ending would blow me away. That there was some big moment that everything was leading up to, and would make up for the large part of this book that wasn't really worth reading. Sadly, there wasn't. 
 I hate having to write these types of reviews, especially when I love other works by this author. The reason I gave this 2 stars was because of the originality of the story. The novel could have been great if the story was fleshed out a little bit more, and more time was spent on the writing/editing. Even though this book was short, I feel like about 100 pages could have been cut out. This would have been better as a novella, and much more interesting. I still have my fingers crossed for Ms. White's other new book that is coming out this year, The Chaos of Stars. Hopefully, Ms. White won't disappoint me again.