Ugh. I powered through this one as it is required reading for a workshop I'm attending in a couple weeks, but man did I do a lot of eye-rolling as a slugged my way through. The whole seeing death dates thing had me intrigued, but that was about the only cool thing about this book, and Laurie even managed to flub that aspect as the story wound down (view spoiler)[(everyone's dates suddenly changing all over the place when they never did before? Gimme a break) (hide spoiler)]. 
 "When" reeked of poor writing and subpar editing. From the unbelievable dialogue (pretty much anything Stubby and Donny and the agents said) to the unrealistic plot points (everything the FBI did was questionable at best, and why were they even involved?), to the horribly pat ending (view spoiler)[ (that whole Aiden plot line was just pointless if he was only featured a couple times, and him moving next door with (surprise!) his FBI agent father had me gagging) (hide spoiler)], this book was just not good.