Bella came off as a flipping petulant child. She didn't think about anyone other than herself despite her wanting to be with her daughter. She just wanted what she wanted and damn everyone else. Who cares what happens to everyone else as long as she gets what she wants. Viper doesn't stand a chance. 
 2hrs left in the story........ 
 Yup I wanted to choke the shit outta Bella by the time the story was over. She didn't deserve Viper because of her selfishness and in the end all the trouble she caused was for nothing. 
 story 1.75 
 narrator 3.5