This Man had a lot of promise but there were a few critical areas that reduced the potential impact of the story. 
 The first problem was that there was far to much sex. Like any woman I like a little sex to spice up a romance but not at the expense of the story. In This Man there was almost 60 - 40 % of sex scenes vs. storyline. It got a little repetitive. 
 The second problem was the obvious spelling and grammar mistakes. I'm not usually worried about perfect sentence structure etc. but it does annoy me when the mistakes are easy to pick up on. 
 Other than this, I really enjoyed the story.