Here's why I DNF at chapter 10/29 
 Interesting to mix vampires with Cherokee. 
 Please stop slut shaming and insensitivity to eating disorders; hoping that is the character and not the author. 
 -Well now there's so much I'm going to start writing it down: 
 -"Tucked into her countrified jeans was a black, long-sleeved cotton blouse that had the expensive look of something you'd find at Saks or Neiman Marcus, versus the cheaper see-through shirts that overpriced Abercrombie tries to make us believe aren't slutty." 
 -How to introduce the antagonist? Hm . . . let's make her try to give an unwilling guy a blowjob! 
 "And this is the token guy in our group, Damien Maslin. But he's gay, so I don't really think he counts as a guy." Though author at least gives him a good comeback. 
 Stop saying bitches. 
 Do we hate guys? "Guys are stupid" * at least 3 
 How many times can we say gay in one chapter? No, it does not make your character a "better" gay because he is not as "girly" as others. 
 Looks like we might get a bit of the chosen one special snowflake syndrome. 
 The paragraphs do get really long sometimes. 
 A little heavy on the foreshadowing. "'The penalty for fighting is bad. Really bad. It's not worth it.' 
 I watched Erin and Shaunee pale at the same time" 
 "'You're really prudey, Damien,' Shaunee said. 
 'especially for a gay boy,' Erin added." Woo hoo! Stereotypes.