I've heard a lot of good things about Susan Elizabeth Phillip's novels and I was a little disappointed. I loved the writing style - fun, flirty and extremely entertaining. My problem was with Coach Dan. He was overbearing and obnoxious. I couldn't believe how much of an arse he was to Phoebe. 
 There was an incident involving mistaken identity, Dan, Phoebe and Dan's ex-wife about half way into the novel. And I just couldn't get over how Dan handled the aftermath. I'm sorry but if you scare a woman that much - you don't make her a grilled cheese sandwich and try to seduce her right there in the kitchen. But apparently that's a move from Dan's seduction playbook. No wonder why he hadn't found the perfect little baby maker and had his 2.4 kids yet. 
 I liked the interactions between Phoebe and her half-sister, Molly. I hope that Molly makes some more appearances in the rest of the series. She's at that awkward adolescent stage that I can reminisce and relate to - being fairly awkward myself growing up. 
 I felt like there was a part of the story that was a little redundant - the part revolving the ex-player's father. The climax and resolution could have still been just as dramatic without him. It wasn't necessary. That could have been achieved using Phoebe's cousin, Reed. It just felt a little erroneous. 
 I will be reading another Phillip's story. I just hope all her leading males aren't as hard to bare as Coach Dan.