Ummm I only have a few things to say 
 1) Writing was drivel, story line was rubbish the sex was medicore and someone didn't do enough BDSM research. 
 2) Can we say Twilight fan fiction gone horribly wrong without even the fun of vampires to distract me? 
 3) If you wanna read real erotica may I suggest *ahem* 
 The Story of O by Pauline Reage 
 Lady Chatterley's Lover by D. H Lawrence 
 The Claiming of Sleeping Beauty Trilogy by Anne Rice 
 Juliette by Marquis de Sade 
 Little Birds or Delta of Venus by Anis Nin