So uh. I accidentally read all of this in one evening. Not that it was particularly difficult... also, I'm nothing if not a pro at reading fic on the internet. 
 I'm sort of helplessly charmed by all of this. Not that it wasn't without its flaws, but none of them were so glaring as to be off-putting in the slightest. 
 I found the sheer number of characters thrown at me a bit overwhelming. And the lack of any real identification or description besides their names (and codenames, to make things more confusing) made it hard for me to differentiate them. I picked it up as we moved along though. But it was a struggle. 
 And yeah, things get ridiculous on occasion, but I'm willing to suspend my disbelief because it's fun and good. 
 Anyways, I'll definitely be reading the rest. I've been promised good things to come about characterization and again there's the bit where I'm helplessly charmed. 
 (Also thank god, this is the kind of fiction I want to read all the time. Where there are hijinx and plot and characters that are incidentally gay. Hallelujah!)