This one was better than the first two. Rowdy is obviously LF's favorite hero from the series since he got a huge part of the first two books and yet the other guys barely get a scene or two in this one - even at the very end when they rush in to "save the day." I really hated his man-whoring that continued even after he's attracted to Avery. His excuse is that she's saying no and not wait. huh? And they never talk about safety or risks - yes they use condoms, but early on she's talking about getting on the pill as if pregnancy is her only worry- after he's had one night stands with every woman in the bar. Also, when he introduced Alice he doesn't say - "hey Avery this is Alice, Reese's wife". He says "this is my friend (who he's got his arms around), I'm not sleeping with her!" Then later Avery apologizes to him for being angry. That's just stupid! 
 I did like how Avery was strong enough to get out of her bad situation on her own, how she kept turning him down (starting in previous books), but also how once she decided she loved him, she told him and wasn't all conflicted and weird about it. 
 Once again, the other women were just as annoying as they'd been in their own books. Alice and Pepper are both nutcases and I can't get behind them at all. The set-up for the 4th book was strange also - like a cop is going to pull someone into an undercover situation with no prep! 
 Anyway, if the library has the last one, I'll read it and then I'll go back to skipping LF's books for authors I like much better.