I loved the storyline, and I thought the details were perfect. My favorite part in the book was when they found out they were going to Antarctica. I loved the reactions you put in, and how they felt on the boat. I thought you could change one main is Total growing wings. I thought that was a very lame thing, like you were struggling for something to say. I also thought that you could've had a big showdown with Max and Gozen. Max has a history of this, in every book there is always a big fight between her and a super-villain. I like the pattern, so when you decided to change it, I was very disappointed.