At 88% I started skimming. This book is mind-numbingly long and boring. After getting through it all, I ended up skimming the grand finale. Total waste of my time. 
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 How is there a secret society within a secret society without anyone in outside secret society knowing about it?? [Pg88] wow...talk about confusing and absolutely having no bloody sense. I mean, I'm pretty sure someone within the society had to know about it, or otherwise the stupid idiot wouldn't be blabbing it out to this girl. 
 She writes too internally. I really don't want to read pages-and-pages of her inner monologue thank you very much and I just found it so boring. 
 Could do with a good editor. As in cutting all the unnecessary words describing something. Sentences were also super long that it was just messy and confusing. 
 One bad phrase: He might have looked relaxed with his hands shoved into the pocket of his jeans and his legs crossed at the ankles. But anyone who walked by him knew he could strike at any given moment. [Pg 109]...Okay!! What the hell is right with this sentence? It's too long, there could've been one or two more commas and IT DOESNT BLOODY MAKE ANY SENSE. Why would someone know that he could strike at any given moment???? He's not a snake coiled up ready to attack, most people tend to just walk by people without a second thought, not 'oh god, that guy looks like he's going to attack someone'. 
 Also, didn't she just met this new guy and suddenly she's all in love. I mean, come on!! This is so unbelievable that it makes it impossible to get into the story. 
 Why are all guys sexy or hot or models? And the main guy just has to ride a motorcycle. I wish she was a bit more original. How cool would it have been if he drove an old green mini? It wouldn't have taken away his hotness, it would have made him a lot more likeable. 
 "Ron was stupid hot, as in the kind of hotness that made you want to do stupid, fun things you'd most likely regret later, but that didn't mean I trusted him a hundred percent." 
 Why are they all talking about sex and getting laid? I don't mind the main character thinking about it and doing whatever, that's fine. But then two other character talk about it in quick succession just gets boring. I mean they have all this drama with a secret world that might go up in flames, but yet they still want to talk about the hot cutie and getting some action. 
 Just started chapter 12 - this book seems to drag everything out, we keep getting boring everyday details of what she gets up to. I really don't want to keep reading these over-and-over again. This book turned into a chore to pick up, because I knew nothing was going to happen and I'd be slugging through the same old thing over-and-over again. Not something you want a reader to think, the only reason I read it is because I want to see the ending- to see what I think is going to happen happens. 
 Is it just me, or does the cover of this book just totally not suit the story inside? 
 "I've been fooled by a Winchester wannabe." - These stupid references are making me hate the book more. 
 they weren't just kissing or touching. Oh no, they were doing much, much more. - what age are you?? This is ridiculous, I'd rather be told what they're doing than this crap. 
 They were everywhere and there were so many of them. At least thirty - ...what?? How the hell does she count thirty when she's in a busy nightclub and you also do not lead with 'there were so many of them' when you're actually going to give the number...stupid writing. 
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 I gave it one star...Because I'm a tiny bit curious on book two, but I'm not sure if I'm going to pick it up.