This was good. I like the action, if not the spelling and the way it was written (I like proper grammar too much), but it made sense with the character she was writing about. I didn't enjoy that the dialogue wasn't in quotation marks, as it made it a bit hard to find it, and forced me to pay too much attention to when it was going to start and who was saying what instead of the actual words and the meaning behind them. Other then the writing style, I liked the fast pace of the novel and the different betrayals, and the chaal. Definitely the chaal and DeMalo, I really liked DeMalo. The main character Saba, is quite cruel and ready to betray somebody, but I guess it's because of how secluded and niave she was. Her parents never really taught her better so she was an ass to her sister, and dodn't like getting help, as all she wanted was Lugh. I enjoyed that she started to change and become, if not a better person, one who was able to accept that she needed help and should let some people close to her. The concept of the heartstone was pretty cool and had me jumping up and down nearly shouting YES! YES! YES! whenever it warmed. Jack was too secretive I think and I don't want him to let her down because I am just starting to like her. I love Ike, even more than I love DeMalo. He will forever be my favourite character, and is also the only time I cried. 
 You know, all these Dystopian novels coming out have some real kickass female characters that have to open their hearts and not be so stupid. And that's is the reason I keep on reading them. GO GIRL POWER!