However necessary it might be to the plot, it's so frustrating to read novels in which the main character acts less than is acted upon. Come on, Mae, instigate something! 
 Also, Dave Eggers has an Ayn Rand problem. He seems to be immune to her philosophy, at least, but the style is pure ham-fisted Fountainhead. 
 The topic is a good one. I guess I'm adding a star in recognition of a worthy study.