most of this story is unbelievable. unbelievable and pretty damn annoying. but I'm a glutton for punishment so I'm gonna torture myself with book 3. seriously Pete was ridiculous in his Sherlock Holmes, inspector gadget, 007 ways. UNBELIEVABLE!!! 
 story - 1.75 
 narrator - 2 
 seriously yeah Nichole from book 1 is described as unnaturally beautiful. ENOUGH!! Please don't mention it a bazillion times in book 3. ridiculous. Lots of repetition from book 1.