The idea here -of two couples who are friends and aren't sure who should date whom-- was cute but the execution seemed too silly. Everything was laughing and tickling and throwing snowballs. The characters acted like they were 8 not 18. Maybe that's the genre? But I wanted some more serious reflection at some points about what these characters were doing and why, especially since some of it was baffling. Two friends try to break up friends of theirs who are dating -- they know that's mean, but they do it anyway. That seems to need more than just a gushy journal entry to explain.