I thought this was creative and really enjoyable but had some issues with the end. Obviously you know going in that it is an origin story for the Queen of Hearts, but I had hoped something other than her own stupidity would decide her fate. 
 Instead it was just this odd situation where she knows exactly what could happen if she takes certain actions and then she takes them anyhow insisting to herself that it will all work out. Of course it doesn't and then when the things she was already told would happen happen she flips out and becomes evil. 
 It just took away my ability to be moved by what happens to her and the others involved. I was just like 'Whelp! What did you expect?'.