The premise left many holes and questions but I did enjoy the story. The team had such wonderful interactions. The main couple had instalust but it was sexy and workable. The author lost me in her timeline. One minute the couple is in bed cuddling the next they are driving down the highway. there were times when days or weeks went by and it was mentioned in an internal dialog section. LOTS of narrative and internal dialog. at one point i was amazed when the couple had a conversation longer than 3 sentences. 
 story - 2.5 
 narrator - 2.25 
 The narrator did a good job with what he had to work with. I'd love to hear him again with a different author.