The writing was A+++ - loved the style and the voices used. Unfortunately, the actual characters and story left me with a lukewarm meh feeling. I think ultimately, my issues stemmed from a few plot points. I didn't like the way Holly was there to simply verify Jamie's hetero/bi-confused status. I had trouble swallowing (lol) the idea that Jamie couldn't figure out (view spoiler)[that the blowjob was the reason Wes stopped all communication. I mean, your best friend loses a bet, gives you a blowjob then stops talking to you? DING DING DING (hide spoiler)]. Wes was more readable of the two, and I liked his uncertain floundering combined with the vibrato he always tried to hold onto. 
 I really enjoy sport romances, and the hockey, playoffs, hockey camp etc - that was all done exceptionally well. Something about the romance, though, didn't flow for me.