Well, the story really telegraphed itself early on for me, so I wasn't surprised in the slightest at the end. The relationship felt lukewarm to me and the end was too little too late. The pacing was pretty good, though I wondered about the needs for some of the scenes and details. 
 I guess the best way to sum it up was I just wasn't thrilled. It was decently good, which is why I'm giving it 4 stars, but if I were going by how I feel, it'd probably be 3. I just don't think it was that 'bad', so I'm giving it the "benefit of the doubt" star. 
 FYI, the last 6% is excerpt for another story.