I am enjoying the series. I found this book had a decent enough plot line. I got confused because when Zsadist and Bella had their daughter in his story; John hadn't changed. In this book John changes, and Zsadist and Bella were expecting because the book kept referring to Bella being on bed rest and there was no allusion to this being their 2nd child. I was confused at the end because I felt cheated in the transformation of Jane because I wasn't too sure what she was, how she got to be what ? she was, and what exactly was the result for the Scribe Virgin. Also, I didn't know if Vishious was happy. I will keep reading because I am hoping it will be cleared up in the next book; and it is about time Phury gets some happiness of his own.