I do not like books that don't give answers. I don't like feeling like I have to buy the next book because my curiosity of who did it wasn't answered in the first book. I wasn't crazy about how the story dragged on and kept cutting in and out of Bella's own fictional story she was writing. It confused me at times because I didn't know if it were the main characters or the fiction characters in bella's head. Lots of questions left unattended. How were Blacks dreams tied into Bella's story? 
 story - 2.5 
 narrator = 2.75 (would have been better with a male narrator)