What feels exciting in novellas, doesn't appear as charming in full length novels. 
 Miles/Oz's obsessive stalker act was really scary to be honest. Even when he appeared to be a normal guy trying to get Mallory's number, he came on way too strong. He's walking talking handbook about signs in men you should be wary of. 
 Once I got used to the idea of the fantasy though, it was the classic AR writing. It just took me longer than usual to let go of my inhibitions, relax and enjoy the plot.