Different. Interesting. Meta. 
 Yay: I loved both stories. I loved the meta-ness of Darcy's story, reading about her experiences and her rewrite struggles even as I read the final version of the story she had written. 
 Nay: Darcy has very few obstacles to her success, which is a little strange. I feel like that works into the Meta-ness, and I'm sure if I read closer on a reread at some point I can look closer at that, but it'll be awhile before I reread. 
 Yay: Darcy and Imogen are super cute, even if they have slightly frustrating arguments (this is realistic, so I can't complain). 
 Nay: The development of their relationship...wasn't. It just happened. Like, from acquaintances to kissing in no time at all. Very strange. And while I like them as a couple, I would have loved to see the development instead of the insta. 
 Yay: I love Darcy's novel! It's so cool! And creepy. And different and weird and I really did enjoy it. 
 Nay: Not buying Yamaraj and Lizzie. And the first time we see Mindy was really weirdly written. 
 Yay: Eighteen year old making super bad decisions! Particularly with regards to money...which I definitely buy, I wasn't as bad as Darcy but I wasn't the smartest person when I was eighteen. Also, with that much money? Given to an eighteen year old? Yeah I'm not surprised she went a little overboard. 
 Nay: She never really seems to have anything bad happen because of her poor money management. Again, this might factor into the meta, or it might play in if Westerfeld is planning a sequel, who knows! And by "who" I mean "Westerfeld" 
 All in all, I really liked this. Not perfect, but different and interesting and very, very Meta.