I didn't think this was a particularly amazing start to a series if I'm honest. The plot wasn't so bad, I mean fairly unbelievable, but in all honesty a lot of the books I read are so that wasn't really an issue. 
 It was the writing that bugged me more than anything. I am instead of I'm, we are instead of we're. To me that made the dialogue between characters seem pretty false, it was like they spoke perfectly and realisticly that just isn't the case. That was the biggest problem I had with the book, but it really did make a huge difference. 
 I also found some of the characters annoying, mainly Jax. He was a nice enough guy but how he reacted really pissed me off at times. Like wanting to fire various employees because they did stuff to Sadie that wasn't even bad. I just wanted to tell him to get a grip and grow up. 
 I'd give the rest of the series a chance though, I've read While it Lastswhich is the third book in the series and I liked that a lot more than this. So even though this book had various issues, and I don't think I'll be reading it again, I'm going to check out the second one in the series and hope it's better.