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 To be honest, I have read worse, and it is actually a pretty decent novel- but maybe I just expected too much 
 **Spoiler alert** 
 Elements of the story that could be IMPROVED: 
 1. Better dopplegangers- 
 Daemon is honestly just another Noah Shaw copycat (from unbecoming of Mara Dyer) BUT NOT QUITE. Idk if it was just post infatuation of the latter character but seriously I loved Noah better. 
 Noah was not just an asshole, he was an asshole with class- Noah was just not a hot guy, he was gifted with humor. He was just not an asshole and a hot guy, he was a combination of wits and sex appeal, that IS VERY INFERIOR TO DAEMON. [Sorry :'( ] 
 2. Overuse of words "hot" and "body" 
 The woman was just too body-obsessed, and practically salivating over Daemon's body most of the time.... Now, if I have to hear another description of this alien guy's "hot body" I think I'm going to puke. I think the description was just waaay overdone. 
 3. ASIDE FROM THE OBVIOUS, what is there? 
 Again, there is just too much of the statements, "there is something odd about the D siblings", "why are they fast?", "there is something wrong about him" 
 The synopsis had given away the mystery of their so called 'alienness' so please tell us something more. Give us something MORE to be curious about. There is no need to theorize- they're ALIENS!! I'm begging you for more mysteries... 
 The ending was not much of a cliffhanger but I'll hang on to it in a while because maybe it could still salvage an alien story-retold with potential. 
 THERE IS HOPE! Kudos Armentrout! [kisses]