i don't really enjoy the multiple point view of a storytelling. 
 i don't mind 2, like the main characters. But in here i think most of the characters had a part that was told from their angle. At first this was not good for me, but i got used to it or the switch between characters wasn't so often at the end. 
 i don't know since i focused more on the story towards the end, which means the story got to me after all, although the beginning not so much. 
 i was a bit turned off by how the male figure was described, it seemed to exaggerate the male features like his upper arms were as big as her thighs, idk maybe she was a skinny girl :D, and so on. or maybe the author indeed wanted to portray the male as big as i am imagining it 
 But i guess in overall i liked it :D.