I...can't...believe...this...piece...of...garbage...exists..................... 
 I could discuss the awful grammar (i.e. read the first sentence of this review for a quick example), terrible spelling, overuse of curse words, lack of plot, whiny and unredeemable characters; but I feel like most of the accurate reviews have already done that. 
 Instead, let me show some captions and notes I made while I got through this book: 
 1. "Yep! Once I had all that empowering shit boiled up in my small 5'5 118 pound body..." 
 Seriously? That's how you let your readers know physical attributes? 
 2. "He must have been at least 6'2 230 pounds. I know this because Jefferson was 6'1 and 220 pounds." 
 Yup. One star. 
 3. "I mean I know you are third in the class but they might not let you walk!!!" 
 This bitch is third in the class? Sure she is. Also, why the eff is her friend talking to her that way? Pretty sure she already knows what she is graduating as and there are better ways to inform the readers. 
 4. "Football was all I had." 
 How many times will he say that? 
 5. "What the fuck was that?" 
 This was written by a twelve year old. 
 6. "It was a pure sweet innocent smell." 
 First, commas. Second, how many ways can one chick be innocent? The smell of innocence sounds like something a pedophile would say. 
 7. "You're very desirable princess and trust me when I say this, Gunner is interested." 
 What the hell?! This feels like a very incestuous statement. 
 8. "Oh my gosh YES! I'm SO full and SO tired!" 
 Idiot. 
 9. Hells yeah! This is like my all time favorite movie!! Ari's little brother and I watch it all the time. You don't like Cars? I can't believe it?!" 
 Bigger idiot. 
 10. "I would lay down my life for this girl!" 
 You met five minutes ago, dude. 
 11. "I would never leave her....ever." 
 Are you effing kidding me? 
 12. "I was going to kick my ass if I hurt her in a dream." 
 And I'm done. 
 No, seriously, I had to stop reading it and skipped to the end. I was so infuriated I almost threw my tablet. Almost. 
 Look, I normally don't like to leave scathing reviews or cut people down for loving something. However, and this is a big however, I do not understand a single positive review for this. This reads like bad fanfiction. Not just fanfiction, but EL James fanfiction. 
 Not a single character is worthy of adoration. 
 Gunner was a whiny douchebag who cried at the drop of a hat. 
 Ellie was an insecure idiot. Her backstory was supposed to endear me to her, but her attitude upon growing up just made me hate her. She cried over everything yet ignored situations warranting a freakout reaction. At the end, she apparently broke up with him because she saw him with his cousin and didn't give him the benefit of the doubt. Instead she acted like a psycho, screamed words a toddler would say throwing a tantrum, and then made out with some other dude. Based on the reactions of the people around her, she did that numerous times. 
 Jefferson was in love with his sister. He called her honey, baby, and sweetheart at any given opportunity. No twenty something guy would talk to his sister that way. 
 Any other characters aren't even worth discussing. 
 I just can't. 
 No. 
 Don't ever read this.