Read this in one night. There's amateurish writing but I'm inclined to believe it's good because I consumed it in one sitting. I also downloaded book 2 without reading a sample. I'm fairly confident the author's writing will become more mature in the rest of the series. I give this a 3.9 because it's just shy of a good four stars, but I'm inclined to put 4 instead of 3 in the hopes there's more character development. 
 Also, this book was way too short lol. Probably for the best since I need sleep :P