I liked the writing here. I liked the off-kilter scenes, the sense that something strange was happening, the general uncertainty and strangeness of the world. But that weirdness doesn't hold together in a coherent way. 
 Entirely possible that I wasn't paying attention to the plot well enough, or that it wasn't holding my interest enough, but... I dunno. It didn't work for me. I wanted it to; I liked the writing and the feel, but in the end I needed this to make more sense.