Woah, what a book! It made my laugh so hard, and cry even more. Fantastic, I love it, even though it broke my heart. I was afraid that it'd end like An Imperial Affliction, like to Augustus's letter, but luckily not and it was perfect. <3 
 I can really only praise it. Ok, I hade some problems with abbreviation, because I'm a Finn and not familiar with all of them... But that's the only thing I can complain about! Maybe I'll reread it in Finnish when the Finnish version has been published (next month).