There's some seriously clunky prose going on in this book. Here are a few examples that I highlighted: 
 My lung and throat feel like their bruised. So apparently she only has one lung, as well as the incorrect use of their. 
 His eyes amplify. Huh? 
 His blonde hair glimmers in the sunlight and hands in his ash eyes. I'm not even sure what this is supposed to mean. 
 His eyes enlarge. I get what the author means with this, but bad word choice. 
 His voice perpetuates my body with heat. Again, the word choice doesn't make sense. Perpetuate means to prolong the existance of something, and I'm not sure how that fits here. 
 "Did they have black-winged feathers?" Black-winged feathers? Or black-feathered wings? 
 Cameron's voice intervenes my thoughts. Again, bad word choice. 
 Like a shadow, he transpires in the doorway with the light of the house shining behind. Again, transpire is the wrong word choice. It doesn't make sense in this context. 
 He conceals his body over mine and my words evaporate into the night. Conceals his body over mine? Conceal is synonymous of hide. He could conceal her body under his, but not his body over hers. 
 These are just some examples. There are plenty more in the book. In fact, at times it felt like it was overflowing with words used incorrectly, like the author had used a thesaurus and just picked whichever word looked good to her. It was most off-putting for me as the reader because I kept having to rebuild her sentence structure while reading. 
 As for the story itself, it was ok (hence the 2 stars). It was a bit on the obvious side though, with no unexpected twists or turns. The best friend was more like a frenemy than a friend; the was a double dose of love/lust at first sight (one of my pet peeves); the sex scenes were on the clunky side and just didn't work very well for me... 
 At the end of the day I'm not really sure how I feel about the story. I want to read the next installment, but at the same time I'm not sure I feel particularly fulfilled by this one.