arty was very wrapped up in her life at Bobbie-Sue Cosmetics, until she meet Keegan. The first part of the book when she was describing how she came to be bitten was hard to take. She talked way too much about makeup and I couldn't follow all that well. Though I think When Keegan retells the story I see it in a different light I like how he remembers the night. He says he caught her sent and was distracted, wail he was watching her ass and did not see the Muffin her dog coming at him. Then he tried to remove the dog from his lip, wail he was still in wolf form, at the same time Marty reached to get her dog and he accidently nipped her; there by radically changing her life for the better only she would not realize it at first. He tries to come to her and explain what has happened and she thinks he is nuts but when she gets kidnapped and grows a tail; well sort of, she grows what is suppose to be a tail. She realizes that he is telling the truth and has to believe him, and has to ask for his help. 
 She finds she is falling for this impossible man. He tries to force everyone to accept her and play nice. I love the fact the Marty dose not just run to him to fix it all she wants to earn the packs respect on her own without being shoved down their throats. Even though she knows Keegan just want to protect her she is not willing to just lay down and obey. But her biggest problem is Alana O'Brian she was chosen to be Keegan's mate, while Keegan had no intentions of ever making her his mate, she was very upset that this new ex-human is now taking her passion in the pack and in the multimillion dollar company she so desperately wants. I think Alana was a conniving B#*$%. I didn't have much in the way of patients for her. 
 If it is not hard enough just trying to stay safe ,away from the loons who are trying to kidnap her , then trying to figure out how to fit in she has a big issue; she can't seem to figure out how to shift in to werewolf form the most she can muster is a small undignified tail. This stresses her she so desperately wants to fit in, to have this family life she has never had. I thought I was nice how much she wanted to just fit in, and how much his family accepted her and willingly took her in their home and life. It's going to be tuff but if she can survive without anyone kidnapping her I think she might have a chance. 
 I thought the book was cute. I was nothing heavy duty but it was fun. I think the Marty was a little annoying at first I did warm up to her a bit more after a while. Keegan was hot the total alpha male and I loved how he just knew since the first moment he smelled her that she was the one. I also loved how open he was to tell his family how he felt about her. The ending had a small twist that I did not see coming.