Sigh. This was... terrible. A good attempt, but one that failed. Why, why, why, Indie Authors, do you not invest in an editor for your books? Someone who can tell you when your timeline is off, or your grammar is bad, or when you spell words wrong. And I don't mean your BFF who reads your book and is all: 
 They're wrong. It's not awesome. It's painful. And frankly, it's a ripoff to pay for a book and then have to trudge through page after page of a complete mess. 
 If you don't care about a messy plot, believability, annoying, dramatic characters or bad editing, this book is definitely for you. If you do care about those things, I would steer clear.