Okey, what the hell does 'frex' stand for? As in fuck? And does frexing means fucking? I am really confused here. Not really by the meaning of the word, I am confused because of two reasons: 
 1. Why do you invent a curse word? 
 2. Why do you use the word 'shite' instead of shit? What does it matter? 
 Also, I have many other questions. 
 1. Why does Amy keep whining? 
 2. Why does Luthor want to rape her? 
 3. Why is Victrie so stupid? 
 4. How can a 16-year-old boy run a ship? 
 And many more, that I keep forgetting because the things in this book that make me roll my eyes and annoy me are too many, and I keep forgetting details. 
 Most of all, why do you use words like 'gen' and 'com' instead of 'generation' and 'communication'? What's wrong with normal English? They used it in Star Trek, you know, the show you ripped your book off. Ups! I guess I wasn't supposed to say that. Bleh! 
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 Okay, okay, I will reluctantly agree that the book was much better than the first one and that it turned out better than I expected. 
 But still, the names of the characters bug me, it also bugs me how except Amy and Elder the other characters are just blatantly two-dimensional, and are there just because the author needs them to be, they don't feel real enough. 
 And also, the clues that Orion left could have been just one clue, just one video that would show everything, which kind of kills the whole plot. 
 I am still fascinated by the way many books that get published these days get published as a series, but I just wish that the books are not just fillers, and only the first and the last one matter. That is just money making and it makes me feel disgusted. 
 This one was obviously like that. No matter how much I like the series, I hate the fact that I can still see 'through the looking glass' and know that the author is making money off of people's amusement. It is just unfair. Write something awesome, not just a filler. 
 Also, this book would have been much more interesting if the characters were adults. 
 But that's just wishful thinking on my side. And yes, the things listed above still bug me, no matter what. None of the characters were redeemed. There seemed to be a lot of death in this one, but I didn't quite feel their deaths, or well, Amy and Elder didn't.