What I liked: 
 I liked that Nox was an apha but was still reasonable 
 I liked that this wasn't a story with instalust/love 
 I loved Boo & Rock 
 I adored the funny way Lily cursed 
 I loved when Nox talked dirty 
 I liked the banter between the couple and friends 
 I LOVED THE BATHROOM SEX 
 What I didn't like: 
 I didn't like all the damn tears and blushes from Lily...seriously What the hell!! 
 I didn't like that whole nieve vibe she had going on. She was 23yrs old in present day and was clueless about sex. CLUELESS. 
 I'm just sick of the whole Virgin trope 
 I didn't like (view spoiler)[ Nox losing his leg and ultimately taking a blow to his ego and self esteem (hide spoiler)] 
 I don't like that the answers to WHY were just glossed over 
 The threat seemed so paper thin. 
 NO answers to a lot of whys. LIke what happened when the house alarm went off 3-4 times? what was the threat? 
 Narrators - him - 2.25 her - 2.75 
 story - 2.5