Tips for James Dashner: 
 It is okay for characters to actually be able to speak for themselves and let the reader feel the emotions you're trying to portray. 
 Its okay for people to get to know each other before they fall in love with each other. I can only speak for myself but I don't mind waiting more than 3 chapters for them to fall for each other slowly. 
 Stop making up stupid and unnecessary words. 
 Something's are really difficult to imagine dude. And seeing that you wrote a fantasy novel, imagination is very important. I find it somewhat hard to try to picture a big transparent slug with metal claws like a spider. And it moans. A sexually aroused slug. 
 Sigh. 
 2.5 stars.