If you want to spend your time reading the same sentence fifteen times just to try to understand it, than go ahead and pick up this book. It sounds like a fifth grader wrote it. No, in fact, a fifth grader could probably do it better. 
 If you have a story to tell, then tell it right. Get your shit together, get an editor or edit it yourself, but just edit it. Nothing is worse than a could-be book that burns and crashes because of stupid mistakes like comma placement. 
 And to the fact that this book got so many raving reviews despite the grammatical context; I'm disappointed. Until there's an edited version, don't bother reading this. It's liable to make your head explode.