I honestly really enjoyed this, surprisingly so. I felt like it could have been better with another once over edit though, I found many grammar and spelling errors and randomly added words - however I don't blame Marzia for that because I'm pretty sure English is a second language. 
 I'm quite satisfied and happy with the ending. It kept me engaged (despite the problem with the grammar and spelling, I find it harder to read when this happens). 
 I found it to be a light, quick, creepy (at times) read that would be perfect for Halloween.