[(Likes)] 
 * Writing (easy to read, not dry) 
 * Idea (even though it wasn't a new idea, but it's still cool to read a new story based on this idea) 
 * Story 
 [[Dislikes]] 
 * Character's a bitch, the author isn't 
 * Beginning 
 * Ending 
 * Not full potential (if this happened to me, I'd do so many things! And I'd do things that would remain, changes on myself. More like groundhog day. But it wasn't used well in this story, and literally nothing happens in the second chapter!)