I was very annoyed with all the head hopping in this book. I was doubly annoyed with all the info the author felt needed to be in this book. I can get behind the need to introduce characters that will be in future books but damn, you don't have to introduce the entire cast for the next 13 or so books. I was also annoyed with the constant repetition. A character would be introduced, and then in the next paragraph of she would again state who the new guy is. WTF! ALSO!! seriously, guys don't look at another guy and think, "There's Jim. He's a very big and tall man. Very handsome, with piercing grey eyes, and a strong jaw." Dudes just don't do that, and each character described was done so that way and mostly through the eyes of another guy. Not that I have a problem with that, but c'mon!! 
 the "love story" was totally unbelievable. Roman loves Evie after two days, but yet in the beginning of the book we get a "this is where we are in the story, and now let's bring you to three weeks earlier to tell you how we got there". THAT MATH DOESN'T ADD UP!! There was no real passion between Evie and Roman until the one and only sex scene, and even that I'm not sure about since he practically fucked her to death. (view spoiler)[ WHICH I honestly didn't understand the whole dying thing. She didn't die really. One minute she's having her ultimate orgasm and the next she's got fangs and is a vampire. The part that doesn't make sense is if the vampires are born, why do they have to kill to make a vampire? they aren't the walking dead since they are born but their progeny are? (hide spoiler)] 
 I hate when an author doesn't have a clear vision of the vampire rules in their world. I didn't like the weaving in of so many glimpses of a story. 
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 I LOVE Antony Ferguson's historical narrations, but this story just didn't work for him. I guess it's because the characters are american and he is a Brit. ALL of his characters had an accent, he didn't even try to produce an american accent. The vampires could have gotten away with the accents but Evie was from Portland for goodness sake. 
 Not sure if I'll get the next books in the series, I was NOT impressed with this effort.