This book was super cheesy, but I still enjoyed it for what it was. Yeah, there were a few things that bothered me...like: What! Is! With! All! The! Exclamation! Points!!!!!!! Why is every conversation being shouted? Even during sex? Especially during sex! I just...don't understand it. So this one could definitely (in my opinion) use some editing, but it hit the mark on what I was looking for, which was a new adult with a sports angle and some not-terribly-bad smut.