What a debut. The start of the series had all I like reading about. :3; Hot sportsmen, feelings and hot, steamy interaction and a bit angst. But luckily a HEA :3 
 I pretty managed the first person present tense narration, have to say it fits. The switch of getting one chapter from Derek's point of view followed by Jason's made the story very vivid. :) 
 Gave the story 5 out of 5 stars. :3