Well, duh, I read this as soon as it came out. 
 And it was fun. Not perfect. It was like someone printed out a really good fanfiction and I got to read it on the beach on paper rather than from my glowing laptop with the lights of my room turned out to convince my parents that I was asleep. 
 In fact, one of the things that I liked most about this story is that the 3rd generation were very similar in character to one of my favorite fanfiction series ("Lessons Learned" https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4260581/1/). On that same note, I was disappointed by the lack of Teddy Lupin and Victoire Weasley, especially since much of the first scene was taken directly from the epilogue, so it felt slightly weird that these characters weren't included. 
 I know that many were irked by the Trolley Witch, and I may be in the minority who actually found this amusing and totally Rowling-esque in conception. It would have been much better if it had been given proper prefacing and not just been thrown in as a one-off. Like I doubt that the Weasley twins wouldn't have mentioned an encounter with her unless it was somehow a part of her job. And I feel like just jumping off of the train was a very easy way out of this situation, and certainly other miscreants would have attempted this. 
 (view spoiler)[ Delphi was my main issue. I knew from the moment she walked on the page that there was more to her than met the eye. The fact that she was Voldemort and Bellatrix's love child is just a bit too convenient. Also, can you imagine Voldemort having sex? Like, he doesn't care about anyone and he is so far removed from his physical self that the act seems beyond his capabilities. On a personal note, gross. Does that mean Bellatrix made out with him? Yuck. (hide spoiler)]. 
 It was fun to jump back into this world, but I am not necessarily going to shape my own views of these characters based on this story.