I thought this would be an entertaining, better-written fan fic than what can be seen on the web. 
 I was wrong. 
 The Americanisms, in particular, got on my nerves. The Potter universe is British, European at most, but in no way American. I simply hate it when someone try to "americanise" the Potter world, really... 
 Couldn't finish. My Kindle nearly got thrown away in the process too...