My friend and I are having way too much fun with our crappy new adult reads. I read them, find the best lines, and then we laugh over the ridiculousness. This series, though, started off better than I thought. I didn't completely hate the characters which is a step up. 
 However, I had my grievances. 
 1. The names. 
 Please, for the love of everything holy, stop with the ridiculous names! It never fails in the new adult genre to feature names nobody has on the entire planet. Jax? Kane? Give me a break! 
 How about Chris? Matt? Brian? Something normal! 
 2. The same story lines. 
 Having read nearly everything by Abbi Glines, I now see a pattern. Her books are entirely the same; use the same cursory words, feature the same one-dimensional characters, and the same boring plots. 
 Boy meets girl. Boy doesn't think he's good enough for girl. Girl doesn't think boy likes her. Girl will, of course, be a virgin. Boy and girl will have sex for the first time. Boy won't wear a condom. Misunderstanding. Boy and girl eventually get back to together and live happily ever after. 
 I think this author's problem is more about trying to write as many books as she can to get them out quickly. Perhaps if she waited, focused on writing the best possible book, she could potentially create something better. 
 3. The insta-love. 
 People DO NOT just fall in love after five seconds. Meeting someone and then wanting to take care of them is not normal. Just no. No. NO. Let them go out for tacos a few times before declaring love! 
 4. The lack of research. 
 "'Remember, slow sips,' she warned, and then continued to work over me." 
 Okay, this was said to someone who had been in a coma for days. A COMA. Clearly Glines has never dealt with someone following a coma, but I have. That doesn't happen. Perhaps a fifteen year old will believe this, but I will not. People do not get to eat, drink, or really do anything following a coma until it is written off by a doctor. The nurse doesn't just hand someone water and hope that they'll be fine. She may not have a gag reflex yet. There would be multiple tests done before she would even look at a glass of water. 
 Now, if the author maybe did some research before writing about something, she would know this. It annoys me that she just writes without really giving a shit. 
 All this being said, I didn't dislike this one like I have her other books. It had his moments and it was entertaining. If this was given more thought, more passion, this could have been a better book.