NOTE: I received this book for free on a read-to-review basis. This didn't influence my opinion in any way. 
 WARNING: IT'S FEMINIST RANT TIME! 
 This book had a pretty predictable plot and predictably insecure characters, but I probably would have rated it two stars if it weren't for one thing ... 
 Apparently this is Lilly's insult to two cheerleaders: "What do you call that look exactly? Oh wait [sic--there should definitely be a comma there according to your favorite grammar Nazi] I know! That's the 'I'm easy' look, got it, you nailed it by the way [sic]." One, what is with the slut-shaming? I may not dress/act like that, and Lilly may not dress/act like that, but that doesn't give either of us the right to shame other people for how they dress or their sex lives! If they choose to dress like that, that's their decision. If they choose to have lots of sex, that's their decision too. Two, I know this will bother nobody except for me, but grammar! Studying for the SAT Writing section has permanently scarred my life and made me a (mostly) unashamed grammar Nazi, and my missing commas radar was crackling like crazy! Commas matter, people. 
 And this: "What girl thinks she looks good all the time? Well, I can think of at least two who probably do." Guess who Lilly's talking about? Yep, the two "slutty" cheerleaders who are her worst enemies forever. Lilly criticized them for how they dress and their sex lives, and now she's critizising them for confidence? So she thinks all girls should walk around with no self-confidence and wait for boys to compliment us like she does? Ugh! 
 Also: "I walk through the line grabbing some fruit, a small salad and a cheeseburger. I know; what a combination." Um, no, that's not really extraordinary. I would eat that for lunch! (Minus the salad because ... *shiver*.) What does Lilly usually eat for lunch--an apple? She's a dancer, and I know from personal experience how much food dancers need. Answer: a lot. 
 Don't worry; it just keeps coming! "I remember him [Lilly's love interest] saying he knew who I was before we officially met at Drakes party [sic--you see what I mean?], but only now am I realizing how much he actually watched me without my knowing. I feel slightly disadvantaged by this." Really? You only feel "slightly disadvantaged"? How about seriously creeped out? 
 And I could not picture their dancing at all: "I throw myself into the air. My center flies forward. My arms and legs are out behind me. I fold into a crouch right before I hit the floor on my hands and knees. I fall backward with my back arched, my legs bent under me, my arms and hands stretched out, reaching above me." First of all, if you landed a jump on your hands and knees, you would get bruises, no question about it. And second, what is that weird bendy thing she does? If you tried to fall backward with your back arched, you'd probably get a concussion. After all, your head's going to hit the floor pretty darned hard! Nothing makes sense. Also, she wears a leotard- with nothing else to practice. Dancers were leotards and tights or shorts! If I walked into dance class wearing just a leotard, I'm pretty sure my friends would stare at me as if I were naked. Which I pretty much would be. 
 After getting almost-raped: "I think maybe I was waiting for Luke [Lilly's brother]. You know? That some other part of me knew he would come for me." These are the times when I wish every YA heroine were as badass as Karou, Penryn, or Allison. Because you, Lilly, don't have to wait for your brother to come and rescue you like he's your knight in shining armor! You might, someday, be able to, maybe, have some self-reliance and not have to rely on men! I know, scandalous, isn't it? 
 (view spoiler)[And look at this gem: "I don't bother with the lock. Luke never locks the door when it's just him in the house." So your super-over-protective brother doesn't bother to lock the door? Somehow I don't think that's very smart. (hide spoiler)]