This book is a mediocre ex-cop detective / magic novel. Think Dresden files but incredibly over the top changes to the world, characters with undiagnosed multiple personality disorder, and a terrible handle of normal plot progression (you know you can use the first 150 pages of the novel to do something, right? ). 
 Worst of all is the name dropping. At no point does this book feel like the other knows anything about Cincinnati or spent more than 5 minutes reading a Wikipedia page. What was she thinking? You just ate? How about I offer you Graeters ice cream? (one reference!) We are going to the airport? Wait, I need to say "we are going to the Cincinnati-Northern Kentucky Airport", that way it will feel like I'm building setting! (two references!). I could go to the store I MEAN FINDLAY MARKET (three references). Oh yes and Children's Medical Center, Eden Park, and "Newport Mall" all get name dropped as well without any use of the setting. It honestly felt like she thought she had to make a bare minimum number of name drops so people would buy that it was set in Cincinnati. 
 All in all this is a great high school sophmore attempt at writing a novel, and one day when she's all grown up she might learn to not follow patterns in her rhetoric textbook blindly and write.something worth writing.