OK, I read the whole thing. And I read it on my phone, so I think I should get extra points for that. Since I was expecting the whole "I am a rich, handsome, immortal, psycho, oops psychic hero so I will always know what's best for you and make you do it no matter what" plot line, I managed to just ignore that. What I thought would be interesting is the world - these Carpathian dudes who aren't vampires, cause vampires is nasty, who are falling into darkness without women. How do they work, how will they find enough dames to have babies with, what's with the priest, etc. Well, we don't really learn the answer to those questions. 
 They aren't vampires, but they live off human blood. They talk to wolves and become wolves and owls (that one was weird), but don't seem to eat or mate as animals and apparently aren't out looking for other shape-shifters to hang with. 
 The creepiest part is the very end when Raven and Mikhail go off with about 5 of his bachelor buddies so the guys can wait for Raven to pump out a few girl babies who will grow up to be their mates (and one of those dudes is his brother). Ugh.