Astrid's Description: As usual, I do not want to give away what was in the previous book. I will just say you continue to follow Jessa and her four boys. 
 Now let me start this off with some numbers: 
 Times she used "yeah" and "sure" to write something like this "Yeah, I know I am a badass..." -160 
 Times author said someone or thing, was badass or awesome- 25 
 Times author swore- 186 
 Times one character flipped off another character- 18 (Thought this would be a larger number due to grouping) 
 Number of times I was thrown for a loop and had no idea what would happen- 0 
 I was very disappointed with this book. You know I felt that the first book was okay, and that it was the new ideas the author brought to the table that had me reading more. This book was sloppy, predictable, and the main character began to annoy me. She spends most of her time talking about how great she is. Then she walks right into a trap that you can see from a mile away. On top of all of that, we got to have some of these "gems". 
 "Despite my shitted off stance..." 
 *source Dragon Mystics by Jaymin Eve page 24 
 Her what stance? Can anyone tell my what a "shitted off stance" looks like? 
 "And all of them appeared to be distrustful and suspicion." 
 * source Dragon Mystics by Jaymin Eve page 55 
 You mean suspicious? 
 We also get several hand fulls of words that need an "s" or are past tense when they should be present. Oh, and I cannot forget that the characters that flip-flop on their personality when it is convenient for them to do so. Like this guy that seems almost monk like and then out of nowhere he flips another character off. The author literally says that it wasn't his personality type. Like COME ON! 
 Allow me to jump back to the swearing number. If you have read my blog for a while, then you know I have no problems with swearing in writing. I have a problem with it when it is used as a crutch. When it keeps an author from having to dig deeper for words to describe something or someone. This was the problem for this book. One of the characters (who I might add is talked about but is not in this book and only in one or two scenes in the first book) is described as Jessa's BEF (bitch enemy friend). The creativity is dead in this book. It was a bummer. 
 I stopped reading 88% of the way in. I could not take anymore of the terrible writing.