3 Stars 
 While an enjoyable, entertaining read. The novel felt like it was missing something essential- a spark- that made it more. A lot of potential in the story itself. With a bit more worldbuilding and backstory, I think this could be a 5 star read. The writing & editing were impressive for a free novel. 
 I will read more by this author, especially since I'd love to see if the story is expanded upon in book #2.