This was a generally solid, enjoyable read. The magic system was interesting, although not fully described, and the interplay of religions added interest to society. It was a little bit too 'black and white' for my tastes, even though the good guys can get vicious, too. One or two of the characters were even quite likeable, and I especially enjoyed some of the strong women. But then I do like a girl who's good with knives. 
 There are a few typos, and the style has awkward moments (not least the prologue, as others have noted) but I would encourage you to push past these minor flaws if you enjoy an action-packed political fantasy.