Well I dug deep with this one and got Kindle Unlimited to read some other self published reverse harem style books (this one included) and I have to say that although some of the plot was pretty interesting and kept me reading the editing, or lack thereof was what kept me from really liking it. I kept getting swept up in poetic musing and what seemed to be made up words. Words that did not make any sense at all. I think there is a cultural boundary since the author appears to be European or at least her writing style but the story takes place in Seattle. She kept slipping in words and phrases that are not common in the US and further confused me. (What the hell is a singlet?) 
 The was Seraph reacts to the boys is pretty odd as well. Shes hot and cold, and just accepts when they barge into her life and take over her every move. She drinks at parties when the boys hand her beers but her father was an abusive alcoholic. (Am I the only one that found that a bit baffling?) I kept reading beyond the Mary Sueness of Seraph and just kept reading hoping the plot thickened. We got very little development and even more questions. Silas was my only reason for finishing the book and although I might kick myself in the rear I'm going to see if the second book gets better.