Not worth writing out a proper review, so here are random thoughts: 
 I do like how she rationally make it so literally everyone is against the girls. 
 Thane is annoying. It's not about you. Just spit it out. 
 Plot really jumps. 
 Plot twists became annoying and too drawn out. 
 You didn't even make them decide who gets to be mortal. 
 Do they all have to be in sappy relationships? Probably all cishet white ones. Not a good enough book to go back and check. 
 Too much of a neat box ending.