The smut's well-written. The rest just seemed petty. 
 Now, let me explain. 
 At the beginning, I was super hooked, grinning like an idiot, because it was the ultimate meet-cute. But as I was nearing the end of the book, the problem that would seemingly cause everything to fall apart emerged. This was also the part where everything started to fall apart for me. Suffice it to say, I was disappointed. The part where it started to go wrong was when(view spoiler)[Brooke met with Scorpion and didn't tell Remington when Remington so clearly stated that if ever she was going to meet up with Scorpion, he should be involved and he should know, but she didn't and SHE CAUSED HER OWN PROBLEMS FOR HERSELF. The whole mess that would eventually come after could have been avoided if she just thought of the consequences of her actions for a second. It's common human decency to be honest with a person you care about!!! The guy had trust issues for fuck's sake!!!! She could have met up with her sister after Remington and Scorpion's final fight to avoid the whole mess!!!! It doesn't make sense!!!! Basically, I hate that the obstacle that Brooke and Remington need to overcome was caused by something stupid Brooke was about to do just because she couldn't wait a couple more weeks. There are plenty of other obstacles that could have tripped them, but no. This had to be it. It just seemed like lazy writing, to be honest. It just made everything too predictable and too shallow. (hide spoiler)]