Not the strongest start... 
 There was too much telling going on - characters announce how they feel and dish out cold facts about what happened. If you want me to care about a characters death, show me who they are first - help me understand this need to avenge her. Get me to hate the people that did this to her and get me to care about his girlfriend before she brakes his heart. His anguish made me yawn. 
 I feel nothing; didn't sympathize with the characters and that weakened the plot and my overall interest. DFN.