Can't do it. I tried. I really did. I gave it 90 pages, which is a lot more than I normally give books to hook me in. I couldn't do it. 
 Writing Style 
 I couldn't get into the writing style. I felt like it was a lot of Remy telling me what I should be feeling in response to what was going on in the story. 
 "I felt hope." 
 "wild embarrassment sent my faze flickering back to the view of the harbor." 
 "my irritation resurfaced." 
 "rage consumed me." 
 I don't want to be told what to feel by a narrator, and the fact I was constantly being each feeling she was feeling instead of being shown the feelings through reactions. 
 Also, she kept flipping back and forth between names for characters; father with Ben and mom with Anna. In some cases, this doesn't bug me. It really bugged me in this case because the writing style is already awkward, and trying too hard. 
 The dialogue was so odd. It was way too formal for every character. 
 Characters 
 Not likeable. Asher is an ass, and Remy is just annoying. I knew there were a lot of comparisons to Twilight before I dove in, (mistake number 1) but I was willing to give the story the benefit of the doubt to try it out. 
 Fail. 
 I couldn't separate the two because there are a lot of similarities, even to the point where I stopped. 
 Remy is a bland character who feels robotic. Asher is mysterious and "sexy." I don't need to point out every similarity because it's already been done over and over again, but nothing about the characters drew me in. Nothing about them made me give a damn about them. 
 I should have stuck with the reviews and skipped it.