I'm torn between liking this and not liking Mac. She is so terribly girly and innocent it made a good chunk of this book unbearable. At the same time I enjoy watching her transition into a more well rounded/potentially bad ass character. I saw potentially because she is still very much a prissy girly girl. There is nothing wrong with liking pink and wanting to look good, but when she is constantly talking about how all the problems in the book that arise are "not her issue/fault" and she won't deal with them or acknowledge them then eventually you're going to get tired of reading about it.