I read the first hundred pages and then skimmed the rest. 
 This book is just so... Ugh. 
 1. The writing. Kelsey's way of narrating was just irritating. She said too much that was obvious and then wouldn't describe things. Suddenly a character would be doing something and you'd wonder, wait, when did that get there? Or, I thought they were standing in this room, not that one. 
 Also, her thoughts were needless. She would think something, but really, since the narration was in first person, she could have put it in past tense and it would flow much better than it did when she put it in italics. 
 The sentences were poorly constructed and the dialogue was stiff and simply didn't sound like anything people would actually say. It is a self-published novel and just is one more example of why traditional publishing tends to have better quality. 
 2. The characters were dull. Kelsey was boring and I disagreed with her on almost anything she had an opinion on. Ren was predictable and well, his identity was obvious. Kishan was better and had a bit more depth but even he annoyed me. 
 3. Kelsey's view on Romeo. I simply cannot respect a character who says that Romeo is "dreamy." Ridiculous, foolish, wimpy, and kind of pathetic? Yes. Dreamy? No. Sorry, Kells, but I just can't like you if you honestly think he's dreamy. 
 4. The plot was predictable as well. 
 I'm sure that some people would love this book. There are people who would find Ren to be wonderfully romantic and 'dreamy,' I'm sure. They'd love the romantic aspect and the adventure. However, I found it lacking on pretty much all fronts and could not get into it at all. I'm certainly not going to be reading the sequels.