While this was better written than the first book, it still put me off because of the following: 
 1. Too many damn inconsistencies. One minute, Osborn's father told him to be honourable, and then the next, he told him to kill "easily" and "without compassion." Um, I'd like to know what dictionary he used because that seemed like a conceptual contradiction to me. 
 Also, the book mentioned that Breena knew nothing of sex - nothing beyond a kiss - but in a dream, she wantonly showed Osborn her breasts. And oh, apparently Osborn hated vampires (his family was killed by them).. but Breena's older brother was a vampire. LOL. That would certainly make family reunions interesting. 
 2. Osborn was an indecisive asshole, and Breena was an invertebrate who went with all his fucked up whims. 
 Osborn: I want you, Breena. 
 Breena (because she was a spineless chit): Oh, yes, Osborn, take me. Take me, lover boy. I don't care if you disrespect me by treating me like a whore, I lurve you. 
 (Torrid kissing ensues until Osborn suddenly stops.) 
 Osborn: I'm angry because (insert ludicrous reason here). Get away from me. 
 Repeat that scene for around 9000000000 times and you've basically covered around 90% of the book. Yawn. 
 My expectations for this series are so low now that I wouldn't be surprised if any of the characters sprouted an extra head at some point.