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 3.5 stars 
 "Mark Twain said, 'The two most important days in your life is the day you were born and the day you find out why.' 
 I don't remember the day I was born but I remember the day I found out why. 
 His name was Deuce. 
 He was my "why". 
 And this is our story. 
 It is not a pretty one. 
 Some parts of it are downright ugly. 
 But it's ours. 
 And because I believe everything happens for a reason, I wouldn't change a thing." 
 Eva has spent her entire life within the gritty world of motorcycle/biker clubs. Her father is the president of the "Silver Demons" club. 
 The book opens up to a 5-year-old Eva visiting her father in prison. It is here that she first meets Deuce. He is 23 years old. 
 Seven years later, they meet again, only now Eva is a blooming 12-year-old and Deuce is 30. It is here that things take a turn in the wrong direction. 
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 Okie dokie. What can I say about this book? First of all, I had some issues with it. I was so torn between love and hate. In the end, I landed in the grey area. It was very difficult to separate my personal feelings from my feelings about the book. I still don't think I can do that, but I'll try to be objective... maybe. 
 **Contains spoilers and bad language!** 
 First things first: The bad. 
 * Editing. Please please please do it! Editing is your friend! This book was such a hot mess in terms of editing. Egh! 
 * The language. I'm perfectly content with vulgarity in my books. I never really thought there could be too much of it... until now. I seriously want to go back and count every single fuck, bitch, and fuckin' - I know at least half the book would be taken up by the cuss words alone. It's BAD. There is such a thing as too much vulgar language. Yikes! 
 * Deuce. My problem with Deuce is not the obvious issue (his less-than-honorable feelings toward Eva when she is in her younger years), but with is hypocrisy. If you've read this book you'll remember a little scene in which, when Eva is twelve, and Deuce thirty, he almost loses his cool with a couple of young guys when he overhears them talking about Eva in a sexually degrading manner. He tells them, and I quote: "You respect women you little fuckin' shit. It was a fuckin' woman who carried you around in her fuckin' body, fuckin' birthed you and fuckin' loved you, and it's gonna be a woman who keeps you warm at night, who lets you inside her body and it's gonna be a woman who carries around your fuckin' children. You fuckin' respect that, you feel me? You fuckin' respect women, all of 'em, or I will end you." -- (Got a little taste of the lingo I was talking about, too, yeah?) Apparently this rule does NOT apply to himself. I can't even count how many times Deuce disrespected women in this book, Eva included! Not only does he call them "bitches" every time he even mentions a female, he also physically abuses them, violently AND sexually. He is not faithful to a woman he claims to love. He doesn't respect her feelings, wishes, or opinions. He speaks down to her, hurts her on purpose, and even kidnaps her at one point. You tell me, is this what respect is? I think not. I think the author should have left out that little "respect women" speech if she was going to make her main love interest this kind of man. 
 I think that's about it for my dislikes. Now I will go on to admitting things I probably should not. lol 
 Number one. This is probably the first time I have actually felt sort of ashamed for enjoying a book. I mean, this book is dark. It's something you would cringe at if it were real life. But holy crap, was it entertaining! The drama, the violence. Something was just constantly going on! 
 The characters were oddly likable aside from Deuce. I mean, at times, I was definitely turned on by him (can't lie), but most often I wasn't his biggest fan. I really enjoyed Eva. She was hard and soft at the same time. There were definitely moments I wanted to slap a little sense into her, but for the most part I really liked her character. Frankie is another thing I am ashamed to admit I enjoyed. I liked Frankie more than Deuce. And that is sad because he did some really really REALLY messed up things. There was just something about his insane sense of loyalty and devotion to Eva that made me like him. Sick, I know. 
 The romance was Hot, with a capital H. It wasn't your run-of-the-mill sappy romance, either. This is hardcore shit right here. Frankly, I don't even think this qualifies as romance. It's lust, just pure lust. Deuce and Eva go at it every time they see each other. It's definitely intense, sexy, and mind-blowing. Sheehan writes fantastic sex scenes, I will give her that. As for the chemistry between Deuce and Eva, I think it's more physical than anything. Maybe the fact that they live in the same gritty world of MCs just makes it seem like they should be together. They know the same things, they have been through the same things. Anyway, this book definitely left me craving more of this dark romance. 
 The storyline. There is a bit more to it than just love and lust. There is a little subplot going on about crime and punishment, if you will. It's was all very enthralling. I appreciated that the author threw something more into it than just sex sex sex. 
 Overall, Undeniable was a very entertaining read. It's dark, gritty, suspenseful, and mega-sexy. There's a bit too much bad language going on for me, and the love interest(s) are not really what you'd call great guys, or ideal men. The book needs some major editing, but it's easily overlooked once you get into the story. It's a tough book to put down! Be ready to get angry, upset, and turned on. It's a wild ride of a story. I recommend this book only if you have an open mind and enjoy very dark stories. I, for one, plan to continue this series! 
 *This book is absolutely NOT for people under 18 years of age. It is ADULT in every sense of the word. Contains sex, violence, language, and situations that may be upsetting to many people. Go into this read with extreme caution!* 
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 Book source: personal collection 
 Publisher: self-published