This story is kind of meh. It has a lot of potential but the writing style had it jump from one thing to the next so quickly that it was unbelievable. There's no transition from one thing to the next and Brynne's responses to everything is unreal. Not unreal in a "Oh wow that's so unreal!", what I mean is unreal as in "No way would a girl react that way". However, like I said, the story line has potential, so I'm opting to move on to the next one.