Damn good story. It was a little heavy on the porn. I don't get offended but I am susceptible to boredom and I almost DNF'd a few times because.... well, how many times can a chick jerk off before plot and character development demand a return to the story? The answer: Often. 
 I stuck it out and fortunately the story came back quick enough just when I thought I was digging through a pile of Penthouse letters in search of a Golden short story. Or a even a shiny penny would have been rewarding. Luckily, it moved on. 
 This is clearly marked as Erotica, meaning I have no business reading it in the first place. I did however hear about it through the horror grapevine and it fits the genre. All you organized people need to shelf this as horror so I don't have to. 
 If the porn were cut in half I would have enjoyed the story just as much if not more. Probably more. I think there is a reason why Penthouse letters are shorter than the length of novels. But I'm a guy. No need to elaborate on this equation of the story since, like I said, I am not the target audience. But I could be. If the author writes something with more story and less porn, I look forward to it, but not if it alienates the Erotica reader base. Genre readers are genre readers including myself but this bridged into horror so, ... 
 It was so well done that I hate to see it relegated to one of the lesser genres and get stuck there. Horror, thriller, mystery... this had it all. 
 Plus tons of porn. 
 With all those negatives, I still go 4 stars Damn good read.