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 Had so much potential, but the characters and the relationships made no sense. The random POV's of people just around the area were a little annoying. 
 I did not understand the relationship between Sam and Emily at all!! They met maybe 5 times and then she became obsessed with him. How heartbroken she became did not seem reasonable to me since they didn't seem to know each other that well. I would have liked to have seen more dialogue between everyone. The only relationships that made any sense and that you could see the development were between Sam and Riddle and Debbie and Riddle. 
 Emily was so unlikable, especially when you see Sam is going through so much and then we see Emily whining about how miserable she is and how her life is just the worst. When she said something about the old Emily being gone I just rolled my eyes. She was SOOOOO Overdramatic!! ABOUT EVERYTHING!! We didn't even know who the old Emily was for there to be a new one! 
 The narrative aspect was unpleasant as well. Sam was doing this, Sam began doing that, Emily did this and so on. blah blah blah. dialogue is good, dialogue is interesting. please use more. 
 Bobby was weird. He was just crazy and annoying the whole time. In the beginning he was okay, but then all of a sudden his character did a complete 180 and was a complete stalker. Everything that happened to him was well deserved but, again, it all seemed RIDICULOUS. 
 I just found this book to be full of unlikely occurrences and ridiculous relationships. I'm sure there's more I could say, but I can't remember what else even happened.