Okay, I wanted to like this book a lot more than I actually did. It's such a popular series, and in some ways I can see why. Maybe I am too nit picky about small things. I enjoy some erotica as much as the next gal, but there are certain things that, as small as they may seem - can kill it for me. 
 I think the author could have elaborated a little bit more on the storyline, but alas, this book was quite obviously not meant to be taken too seriously. It's meant to be steamy, and that it definitely is. That's all well and dandy now, and the sex is definitely steamy, but I wish that she hadn't used the "womb clenching" phrase so much. There you are, reading along - and you're all "Yeah... OH YEAH... UH HUH!!" and she hits you with a WOMB CLENCH! I mean seriously, how many people do you know who would find that sexy? Come on now! 
 I am going to try my luck with book 2.