It's a het. romance that just happen to have two gay guy in it. Not my kind of story. 
 Lou's hand was buried in Ray's hair at the nape of his neck. His other arm encircled Ray's waist, bringing the smaller man even closer. Lou nibbled on Ray's bottom lip and trust his tongue in as Ray gasped. 
 Please. 
 It's cliche, cheezy, not interesting, Lou's the perfect virgin bride and add to that that Ray do not seems to have moral problem to invade Lou's dream... 
 I love this writer normally, but that one, no.