12 chapters in 
 I enjoyed the 1st book but there is something off about this one so far. First the book is suppose to be about Sophia & Sylvan, but in chapter 4 we are into a little D/s sex action with Olivia & Baird. Then we gotta get drama from Lock, Deep, and Kat. THIS IS SUPPOSE TO BE SOPHIA & SYLVAN'S BOOK. The extra couples action is annoying. 
 Sophia's meekness, fear, and insecurity is also not attractive. The internal dialogue is HIGHLY annoying. 
 back to the book....... 
 DONE!! 
 One word...RE-FUCKING-DICULIOUS!! 
 Sophia was a whiney pants scared of everything and her damn shadow. she was weak, indecisive, insecure, naive, and childlike. Not a good cocktail if you ask me. Yeah I know she had this huge trauma when she was a teen and she never really dealt with it and it effected her adult life but come the fuck on!! I can get on board with her fear of intimacy and relationships but everyone treated her and she acted like she was made of fucking glass. it was really infuriating. 
 the internal dialogue and internal questions got me really annoyed. The character would make an observation, then mentally voice that observation and then verbally dance around that observation and back to mentally scolding themselves for having the observation. 
 I'm all for a good dirty talker really i am but you can't tell a chick that you wanna lick her "sweet cunt honey" and in the next breath call your cock a "shaft". 
 I didn't like all the extra storylines going on. It was like the author threw in the other couples to have sex or sex like situations because Sophia was too fucking scared to get her swerve on herself. While the main couple did have one or two sexy non intercourse scenes they didn't end up boning until the end of the book. 
 for some reason the characters in this book were very unlikeable to me. wait scratch that. i did like Sylvan. He tried to do what he could to make Sophie's scaredy cat ass happy and make her feel safe and secure. He tried to be honorable and when push came to shove he did hulk out and kick ass and take names. The chicks in this book made me dislike the story enough that i don't really want to listen to the 3rd book. I may just take a break and put the 3rd book on play when i have absolutely nothing good to listen to. 
 story: 1.5 
 narrator 2