3hrs 50mins into the book and I've discovered that Anna is really fucking annoying. She says she's "a scientist" all the damn time but she acts like a freaking baby. and the whole having her brother baby her is refuckingdiculous. this chick is like 25 or something so i can't wrap my head around it. The storming off when she's pissed when she was told there is danger out there and what happens? SHE GETS FUCKING KIDNAPPED!! 
 smh I can tell this is gonna a tough book to finish. OH!! and don't get me started on the lack of Sebastian York especially when he's listed as a narrator. They should have just said special guest by, or prologue/epilogue by cus yeah i was PISSED about that. 
 back to the book........ 
 Book done and SPOILERS FROM THIS POINT ON. DO NOT READ ANY FURTHER IF YOU DON"T WANT SPOILERS. 
 SO Arrow and Ana hook up as expected but he's very controlling. After their first time together she casually asks him what his plans are for the day and he flips out on her telling her that pussy doesn't question him pussy just does what it's told. Um...excuse the fuck outta me. naturally ana gets pissed and then she forgives him a little too easily in my opinion. Ana finds out that the guy who broke into her apartment was from the rival mc and that Rake and Arrow are hiding that from her. she gets pissed as she should but then easily forgives. jump forward. Tallan drops a bomb on Arrow and arrow doesn't tell ana about the news that concerns her and he starts to push her away. Ana tells him she loves him and he doesn't say it back. He still pushes her away. So one day at a party she finds a nekkid chick sitting on his lap and she leaves she sees a member of the "enemy" biker club and asks him for a ride. he takes her to tallan and tallan proceeds to tell her..... 
 SERIOUSLY THIS IS A SPOILER!!! 
 That his stepfather was her Rake's biological father and Arrow Killed him as revenge for them killing Mary (a girl he was with a few years a go. I'm guessing in book 1). SO Ana goes on this woe is me kick over A MAN SHE DIDN'T KNOW AND WHO ABANDONED HER AND HER BROTHER TO WHATEVER FATE WITH THEIR CRACKHEAD OF A MOTHER. and she pushes Arrow, her brother, and the club away so she can deal. are you fucking kidding me? All of that for a man she never laid eyes on let alone didn't even know his name? 
 I love a good MC romance but this just wasn't for me. Ana and her "she's so beautiful every guy can't stop looking at her" was just too stupid to supposedly be so smart. I don't know many scientists who go around threatening girls about how they'd kick their ass or break their arm for whatever offense. I'm sure there are people who LOVE this book/series, but it's just not for me. 
 Story 2 
 narrator 2.5 the female narrator had a youngish voice and it was kind of annoying in parts. I was and still am extremely upset about Sebastian York only having 4 freaking minutes of "airtime". I feel lied to and cheated. Even if I am curious about the others in the story. Where I would have muscled on because i'm a glutton for punishment I won't because Sebastian only gets like 8 sentences and his narration is what made me buy this book to begin with and it was not there.