I like this book. Dani's annoying immaturity is toned down quite a bit which makes it more readable than I thought. It does leave me confused though. I think we can all agree it's more than a little creepy that older guys get obsessed with her. And I'm not clear why Dani and Dancer aren't dating. I mean, I'm sure I dated 17 year olds when I was 14. In high school it's fine. Does push it when one's in college and the other still has a few years to go in high school, but 3 years is really an acceptable age difference. However, what's not made clear is why they're all so obsessed with her. Christian I can sort of understand. For some reason he's latched onto her as a sort of saviour. She's his last shred of humanity. Aside from that, she comes across as a child so I'm entirely unclear as to why the guys think they'll want the woman she'll grow up to be. Her personality may be entirely different in a few years since it's hard to see anything but childish exuberance. 
 What bugged me the whole way through is that Dani is constantly eating candy bars, but hardly ever drinks water. You'd think she'd be constantly chugging water because she's running around everywhere, but no. Even Dancer, at one point, says because she consumes so much her bladder is always partially full which would only make sense if she actually drank. I'd think she'd be wearing a camel back bladder thing to constantly drink. I'd need a drink desperately if I just crammed 3 candy bars into me. Not to mention, she probably constantly needs BMs because she constantly eats. Although possibly her low fibre diet of candy bars means she's so constipated she rarely goes. Let's try not to think about the state of her teeth, shall we?