This story didn't do it for me, though to be fair, it may have suffered from me reading a particularly bad review before starting (amongst a bunch of good ones, I might add). I was looking forward to the book, but I kept coming back to the bad one and agreeing with it. 
 The language is mostly what killed this story for me, but the plot itself was a touch weak as well. Too much sex, and everything made them "so hard" or "so hot" I started laughing each time I read it. (See my comments while reading to see what I mean.) The overuse of "boy" really did drive me nuts as well. 
 I liked the changes in POV. It was well-enough done it didn't feel like head-hopping at all, except for the fact there were a lot of them--sometimes only a couple of paragraphs in one voice before the next swap. 
 I'm not sure if I can get past the voice of the author/characters to read another story in this series, but I'm rather intrigued by Dorian's character and wonder what his story will be. I just don't know if I'll be able to read it, particularly if his character/voice is anything like Alex's.