summary of the story: HES SO SEXIST AND A BIG JERK! OH LETS FUCK! 
 Jared's possessive act is extremely tiring and annoying as hell, the story itself is nice with the (not always consistent) world building, but the romance didn't really work for me... 
 He is a total bastard and suddenly he changes COMPLETELY only because he wants to fuck Sam... yeah realistic... and at a certain point HE practically admits he is still hate women and the other breed of vampires and says that they are inferior, UNLESS IT'S SAM OF COURSE. 
 SAM: "I hate possessiveness. OH GOD HIS EMBRACE FELT SO POSSESSIVE I LOVE IT, I AM SO HORRRRRRRRRRRRNY I MELTED BLAH BLAH" 
 JARED: "oh, you want this so much Sam. Oh yeah, you want me!" *seduction techniques* 
 And to sum it up, the final battle was extremely disappointing, it just feel flat.