It's really a shame I can't see past the glaring editing issues. For crying out loud, USE SOME COMMAS, would YA!? And your does NOT equal you are. Blatantly neglecting writing 101. 
 Drives. Me. Insane. 
 Especially since the story was actually pretty sweet and entertaining. If some of the repetition was edited out, and all of the punctuation and grammar was fixed. There were some classic lines, I laughed aloud, and I finished with the satisfied feeling good books are supposed to give. I may have rated it higher if someone, ANYONE took the time to edit the damned thing.