I 've heard the writing was juvenile
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I have been putting off reading this series because, even though I enjoy erotica as next as the next girl, I've heard the writing was juvenile. It definitely drew me in and kept my attention. It works because it's not really about the sex, although his tastes are a big part of the story. It's more about how she forces him to grow as a man.  I love that Ana is the strength in the relationship and Christian knows that.  I love that there's a reason he is the way he is and she doesn't give up until she uncovers those reasons.  I love that she forces him to stop wallowing and grow the hell up, while he finds trust by demanding it from her.  Something about Ana and Christian's story works (obviously, given the success of the books), although the writing itself  could be improved upon. 