the characters were never really defined
Why is the character dumb?
I tried this book because it averaged well and it was free, well that was a mistake. The writing was choppy and poor and the characters were never really defined. I also felt that the authors style of writing was that of a high schooler. At first I kept reading because I thought it was exciting but I quickly grew irritated with how the author tried to portray the characters and situations by telling you how to feel ex) so and so said this in an exasperated tone... the situation in the book should  portray that tone without the author telling you .  anyways I tried to keep going but I just can't put in any more effort to read such poor quality. 