If she had not smoked, if she had not taken gin, it would have been better, he thought; but she did both. Once, in her absence, he intimated to MacTurk that "that woman was a dram-drinker."

If she had not smoked and taken gin, it would have been better, he thought; and once, in her absence, he hinted to MacTurk that "that woman was a dram-drinker."
