title: 帮忙翻译一小段英文亲爱的老师小朋友们,早上好!我是大九班的朱锦森 
desc: 亲爱的小朋友们,早上好!我是大九班的朱锦森小朋友,今天的升旗仪式由我们大九班主持,升旗仪式现在开始,护旗队进场
  
  以上能不能这样翻译:
  Good morning! Dear teachers and students, I amm 
  Zhu Jinsen from big nine class. Today, we take charge of the flag raise. Let's begin the ceremony. Now, welcome our flag escort!
answer: 修改如下:
  
  Good morning! Dear teachers and students! I am 
  Zhu Jinsen from No.9 elder class. Today, we take charge of the flag raising. Now the flag raising ceremony is begin. And, welcome to our color guard!
  