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The origin story of the Duulo-Vraktor bloodline has been passed down for generations. It all started with Mitne, a dragon deity with glossy rainbow scales. He was the guardian of the forest and kept the natural balance. Mitne had long transcended past pride many years before time or history was a concept. For this reason, he regarded everything in the forest as his equal and took his time building meaningful friendships with all life. 

Elves, often being a very traditional race, lived in harmony with the forest and their friend. Many generations of elves learned much from Mitne and he cherished the elves' sincerity and mistakes in their short lives of around 750 years which to him was like the blink of an eye. All they had ever known was peace as far as they could remember. 

Those who stumbled onto the forest would be in natural awe of Mitne and those who came with bad intentions had their hearts purified at the sight of him and their souls soothed when he spoke to them. For the first time, those people felt the shadows in their heart lifted, seeing the world with fresh eyes. Finally they could hear nature's timeless song: the gentle wind that makes the grass whistle, a drop of dew falling from the leaf of a tree onto a rock and dirt, the dancing leaves and petals as they fell and were swept up again. One sobbing person worked up all his strength to ask Mitne, "I have done much evil for the sake of my own greed and lust. I came to plunder your forest yet your presence lifted all the clouds in me, like I am a newborn again. How have you done this?"

Mitne never looked away from the man. He always listened mindfully. The great dragon closed his eyes not to ponder the question for he knew the answer. He just listened to nature's timeless song for a moment longer with the man. "Thank you.", said the man.

Mitne replied, "I gave you a taste of the essence of true divinity. If there is still some good in one's heart then it cleanses all impurities. True evil is very rare. If no goodness is left in a creature, then darkness will attempt to consume the divinity and fail. Darkness promises power and when it's overwhelmed by the light, which is the very thing it abandoned for power it will cause the mind to go mad from fear and die. In these cases I cleanse the souls and they enter the cycle of rebirth."

The man had just been given insight into the great order and broke down crying.

"You have grasped the true weight of your own guilt. Your tears are a testament to your sincerity as you mourn the futures of others that you took. Punishment is not the answer to atonement. Live by finding your own path to divinity."

"Where do I start?"

"Anywhere. Fill the world with flowers so that others may hear nature's timeless song as you have today."

He had found his resolve and walked onward without looking back out of respect for Mitne. He knew Mitne regarded him as a friend, something he never imagined could happen before that day, so he went out to become someone worthy of the trust of a real friend.

Many tribes had populated the forest over many centuries. One day Mitne went to each tribe to announce he was leaving. The news was really sudden. There was no great conflict or grand reason. He just said it was time to go. He told everyone, when he goes, the egg of his nextborn will be created. The day of departure came and everyone made a circle around his favorite resting spot and smiled so the last thing he would see before returning to the gods would be joy in the faces of all his friends. 

He knew how their hearts truly wept. He was honored, his last words: "I am always with you all, my dear friends." 

Time and space twisted and distorted and flashed and he was gone leaving a rainbow scaled egg behind.

A young prodigious diviner forth saw the hatching of the next forest guardian was to be on the very next day.

By the egg's will, only the youth from all life of the forest had been summoned to come that night to witness the awakening. As the sun set and the moon reached its peak on the starry, black canvas, the young diviner strummed her harp, the youth played their forest flutes, and the forest creatures howled, and roared, and watched as the egg slowly cracked and a beautiful, colossal creature emerged. 

Everyone went silent. The new rainbow dragon looked around at every creature for a while and finally broke the silence with a greeting.

"I am Duulo." 

As a diety, Duulo was born with great knowledge of himself, his name, and his purpose. Mitne's rainbow scales would sparkle poetically from each of the sun ray's kisses, while Duulo appeared to shine his own hue beside the moonlight.

"My father has kept this forest in a state of everlasting peace for as long as it has existed. The creatures of the forest are strong and many beyond this forest have been saved and feel indebted to my father. His gift to his friends was the strength to overcome your own battles. I will guide you to fully realizing that strength but your battles are your own to fight. So youth of this forest, you all will one day set out to see this world and grow in a new way, so hone your path until then. Carry on this message after you make your way back home."

As the sun rose Duulo curled up and went to sleep.

His message came as a surprise to many in the forest. The diviners confirmed that if the forest didn't prepare and heed Duulo's words that for the first time in their history they would not be ready for the battles to come.

Duulo woke up every night and many came to him for advice. Trade opened up to the neighboring villages and kingdoms. The artisans, great sorcerers, bards, storytellers and many more built up great influence. 

The young diviner prodigy watched the moon every night while strumming her harp and Duulo would join her. This continued for hundreds of years. The forest and it's folk had succeeded and grown. Finally it was time for all the youth to set out.

Duulo told that it too was his time to go, that the forest was now in the hands of it's creatures.

The young prodigious diviner was named Ernaya. She was blind from birth but saw the world through various futures because of her gift. Duulo has been quietly in love with her for centuries. He would not be bound by divine duty. Although many dragons are splendid shapeshifters, Duulo did something even Ernaya nor even the heavens could foresee, he reincarnated as a mortal, freeing himself from his duty. He also healed Ernaya's eyes and changed her fate. They went on countless adventures together. Duulo never hid who he was. The forest people came to accept Duulo's choice and love for Ernaya. Their family name became known as the Duulo-Vraktor with a lineage that lives to this day. Elves of Duulo's blood continue the pilgrimage that their ancestors once took, seeking their own answers to freedom. The dragon blood manifests itself at it's prime in those who discover the price that freedom comes at and their children are also blessed with strong dragon blood as well.

Not everyone returns, but in honoring this tradition none regret seeking the answer.
이 이야기를 가져와서 개선하세요. 이야기는 동일하게 유지하되 주변 환경, 감정, 생각을 더 의미 있게 묘사하여 사람들의 머릿속에 그림을 그릴 수 있도록 하세요.듀울로-브락토르 혈통의 기원 이야기는 여러 세대에 걸쳐 전해져 내려왔습니다. 이 모든 것은 윤기 나는 무지개 비늘을 가진 용신 미트네에서 시작되었습니다. 그는 숲의 수호신으로 자연의 균형을 유지했습니다. 미트네는 시간이나 역사라는 개념이 생기기 훨씬 이전부터 과거의 교만을 초월했습니다. 그래서 숲의 모든 것을 동등하게 여겼고 모든 생명체와 의미 있는 우정을 쌓는 데 시간을 들였어요. 매우 전통적인 종족인 엘프는 숲과 그 친구들과 조화를 이루며 살았습니다. 여러 세대의 엘프들이 미트네에게 많은 것을 배웠고, 미트네는 눈 깜짝할 사이에 지나간 750여 년의 짧은 삶 속에서 엘프들의 성실함과 실수를 소중히 여겼습니다. 그들이 기억할 수 있는 한 그들이 아는 것은 평화뿐이었죠. 숲을 우연히 발견한 사람들은 미트네에게 자연스레 경외감을 느꼈고, 나쁜 의도를 가지고 온 사람들도 미트네를 보면 마음이 정화되고 그의 말을 들으면 영혼이 평온해졌습니다. 사람들은 처음으로 마음의 그림자가 걷히고 새로운 눈으로 세상을 보는 것을 느꼈습니다. 마침내 그들은 풀이 휘파람을 불게 하는 부드러운 바람, 나무 잎에서 바위와 흙으로 떨어지는 이슬 한 방울, 나뭇잎과 꽃잎이 떨어졌다가 다시 쓸려 올라가는 춤추는 모습 등 자연의 영원한 노래를 들을 수 있었습니다. 흐느끼는 한 사람이 온 힘을 다해 미트네에게 "나는 내 욕심과 정욕을 위해 많은 악행을 저질렀습니다. 저는 당신의 숲을 약탈하러 왔는데 당신의 존재로 인해 제 안의 모든 구름이 걷히고 다시 갓난아이가 된 것 같았습니다. 어떻게 이럴 수 있죠?"미트네는 남자에게서 눈을 돌리지 않았습니다. 그는 항상 주의 깊게 그의 말을 들었다. 위대한 용은 답을 알고 있었기 때문에 질문을 숙고하지 않고 눈을 감았습니다. 그는 그저 남자와 함께 시간을 초월한 자연의 노래에 잠시 더 귀를 기울였을 뿐이었죠. "고마워요." 남자가 말했다.미트네는 "진정한 신의 정수를 맛보게 해드렸습니다. 마음속에 선이 남아 있다면 그것은 모든 불순물을 정화합니다. 진정한 악은 매우 드뭅니다. 피조물에게 선함이 남아 있지 않으면 어둠이 신성을 삼키려고 시도하지만 실패합니다. 어둠은 힘을 약속하고 힘을 위해 버린 바로 그 빛에 압도 당하면 마음이 두려움에 미쳐 죽게됩니다. 이런 경우 나는 영혼을 정화하고 그들은 재생의 순환에 들어갑니다."방금 위대한 질서에 대한 통찰력을 얻은 남자는 울음을 터뜨렸다."당신은 자신의 죄책감의 진정한 무게를 파악했습니다. 당신의 눈물은 당신이 빼앗은 다른 사람들의 미래를 애도하는 당신의 진심을 증명하는 것입니다. 처벌은 속죄의 해답이 아닙니다. 자신만의 신성에 이르는 길을 찾아 살아가세요.""어디서부터 시작해야 하나요?""어디서든. 다른 사람들이 오늘처럼 자연의 영원한 노래를 들을 수 있도록 세상을 꽃으로 가득 채우세요."그는 결심을 굳히고 미트네에 대한 존경심에 뒤도 돌아보지 않고 앞으로 나아갔습니다. 미트네가 자신을 친구로 여긴다는 사실을 그날 이전에는 상상도 하지 못했던 일이었기에 그는 진정한 친구의 신뢰에 걸맞은 사람이 되기 위해 나섰습니다.숲에는 수 세기에 걸쳐 많은 부족이 살고 있었습니다. 어느 날 미트네는 각 부족을 찾아가 자신이 떠난다고 알렸습니다. 정말 갑작스러운 소식이었죠. 큰 갈등이나 거창한 이유도 없었습니다. 그는 그저 떠날 때가 되었다고 말했을 뿐입니다. 그는 모든 사람에게 자신이 떠나면 다음 아기의 알이 만들어질 것이라고 말했습니다. 떠나는 날이 다가오자 모두가 그가 가장 좋아하는 휴식 공간 주위를 돌며 미소를 지었고, 그가 신에게 돌아가기 전 마지막으로 보게 될 것은 모든 친구들의 얼굴에 가득한 기쁨이었습니다. 그는 그들의 마음이 진정으로 울고 있다는 것을 알았습니다. 그는 영광스럽게도 마지막 말을 남겼습니다: "사랑하는 친구들아, 나는 항상 너희와 함께 있으리라." 시간과 공간이 뒤틀리고 왜곡되어 번쩍이며 무지개 비늘 알을 남기고 그는 사라졌습니다.다음 숲의 수호자가 바로 다음 날 부화할 것을 예언한 젊은 천재 점술가가 나타났어요.알의 유언에 따라 그날 밤 숲의 모든 생명체 중 젊은이들만이 깨어남을 목격하기 위해 소환되었습니다. 해가 지고 달이 별빛이 가득한 검은 캔버스 위에 가장 높이 떴을 때, 젊은 주술사는 하프를 연주하고, 젊은이들은 숲의 피리를 불고, 숲의 생물들은 울부짖고 포효하며 알이 천천히 깨지고 아름답고 거대한 생물이 나오는 것을 지켜보았어요. 모두 조용해졌어요. 새로운 무지개 용은 한동안 모든 생명체를 둘러보더니 마침내 인사로 침묵을 깼어요."나는 듀울로다." 듀울로는 다이티티로서 자신과 이름, 그리고 자신의 목적에 대해 잘 알고 태어났어요. 미트의 무지개 비늘은 태양 광선의 입맞춤마다 시적으로 반짝였고, 두울로는 달빛 옆에서 자신만의 색을 발하는 것처럼 보였다."아버지는 이 숲이 존재하는 한 이 숲을 영원한 평화의 상태로 유지해 왔어요. 숲의 생명체들은 강하고 많은