Sentence 1: Except for the constant soft beating of the machine, it is quiet. 
 Sentence 3: Few visitors come to see what remains of the  once beautiful you 
 Sentence 4:  Most people are born with two but someone decided you only get one 
 Sentence 5:  Sleep little sister knowing that everything was done for you this day 
 Option 1: You lay still, never even a twitch,  with that awful thing in your thr. 
 Option 2: You lay frozen in time, in the casket mom picked out for you.