Sentence 1: I was writing in my journal when my room mate passed by. 
 Sentence 3: I agreed with him once I stepped back to look at my writing 
 Sentence 4:  I took some handwriting courses online 
 Sentence 5:  After two weeks my handwriting was beautiful 
 Option 1: He noticed that my handwriting was very elegant. 
 Option 2: He noticed that my handwriting was very sloppy.