Q:

Why is it still "unclear what you're asking"

This question was put on hold five days ago:
Is using the twin sieve to find all primes numbers better than the sieve of Eratosthenes?
After that I edited the question and tried to resolve all problems from the comments. I also highlighted the question, why was it closed?

A:

Ultimately, I think the post has two serious problems:

You don't have any sort of introduction or conclusion — the reader has to skip to the middle of a long post and pick out the highlighted question to have any clue what the point of anything is
All of the descriptions are very terse — while they may be adequate reminders for someone who already knows what this post is trying to say, it would take someone who doesn't a lot of work to decipher what is being done and why.

Also, the mention of twin primes is a problem; to a reader who is still trying to figure out what the point of everything is, that comment appears in a place (and with emphasis) where one might expect some sort of conclusion, and thus be thoroughly mislead.
I know I definitely wouldn't have bothered trying to figure anything out if I didn't already know the trick of sieving $6n \pm 1$ (or more generally of wheel factorization), so all I had to do is confirm that you were talking about something I already knew.

There's a reason that mathematicians are still expected to take writing courses; many of the guidelines on how to write essays apply to mathematics. For example, the importance of introductions — explanations of what will follow so the reader knows what to expect.
For example:

Find a way to phrase your question so that it can be mentioned at the very beginning of the post before wading through the details. (it is, of course, still fine to ask again after the details, if that makes sense in the overall outline)
Introduce the actors in each calculation; e.g. preface the computations at the beginning with something like "Consider possible factorizations of an integer of the form $6n \pm 1$". (also, don't use $p$ if you aren't referring to a prime number)

