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###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: A notable number of Chinese factories make piratical products by copying foreign products. ###RESPONSE:

A notable number of Chinese factories make pirated products by copying foreign products.

A notable number of Chinese factories make pirated products by copying foreign goods.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: They tend to copy other engineers' work and become less creative, which in turn, significantly hamper the engineering design innovation of the whole nation. ###RESPONSE:

They tend to copy other engineers' work and become less creative, which in turn, significantly hampers the engineering design innovation of the whole nation.

They tend to copy other engineers' work and become less creative, which in turn, significantly hinders the engineering design innovation of the whole nation.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: By reducing the plagiarism rate of Chinese institutes and gradually converting the conservative consumption concept of Chinese people, China can really make a big difference. ###RESPONSE:

By reducing the plagiarism rate of Chinese institutes and gradually changing the conservative consumption concept of Chinese people, China can really make a big difference.

By reducing the plagiarism rate of Chinese institutes and gradually converting the conservative consumption concept of Chinese people, China can finally make a big difference.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Appropriate facilities, efficient technology support and proper use of food are required to increase the food production in order to solve the food shortage problem. ###RESPONSE:

Appropriate facilities, efficient technical support, and proper use of food are required to increase food production in order to solve the food shortage problem.

Appropriate facilities, efficiency of technology support, and proper use of food are required to increase the food production in order to solve the food shortage problem.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: To be more accurate, in the developing countries, government should make a good plan to build irrigation canal and bank based on the analysis of local climate and geography. ###RESPONSE:

To be more accurate, in developing countries, the government should make a good plan to build irrigation canals and banks based on the analysis of local climate and geography.

To be more accurate, in the developing countries, governments should make a good plan to build an irrigation canal and bank based on the analysis of local climate and geography.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality of the sentence: Government should provide stable surroundings for farmers to plant food. ###RESPONSE:

The government should provide stable surroundings for farmers to plant food.

Government should provide a stable environment for farmers to plant food.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Besides the infrastructure construction, another advisable method to increase production is to mechanize the agriculture system. ###RESPONSE:

Besides the infrastructure construction, another advisable method to increase production is to mechanize the agricultural system.

Besides the infrastructure construction, another recommended method to increase production is to mechanize the agricultural system.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: Armed with machine, farmers can make the most of limited farmland and time. ###RESPONSE:

Armed with machinery, farmers can make the most of limited farmland and time.

A farmer who has an arm-powered machine can make the most use of his limited farmland and time.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: It is effortless to come up with the idea that we can use biological engineering way to change certain properties of plants. ###RESPONSE:

It is effortless to come up with the idea that we can use biological engineering to change certain properties of plants.

It is easy to come up with the idea that we can use biological engineering method to change certain properties of plants.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammar mistakes: Government should also make some regulations to urge experts to teach farmers how to farm scientifically. ###RESPONSE:

The government should also make some regulations to urge experts to teach farmers how to farm scientifically.

The government should also make some regulations to encourage experts to teach farmers how to farm scientifically.

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Having made a good plan to help farmers to produce more food, government must use the food properly. ###RESPONSE:

Having made a good plan to help farmers to produce more food, the government must use the food properly.

Having made a good plan for helping farmers to produce more food, the government must use it properly.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: It is an inhuman action to turn food into ethanol to feed cars instead of helping those starving people. ###RESPONSE:

It is an inhumane action to turn food into ethanol to feed cars instead of helping those starving people.

It is an inhumane action to turn food into ethanol to fuel cars instead of helping those starving people.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Standard of living has become higher and higher. ###RESPONSE:

The standard of living has become higher and higher.

The standard of living has been raised to a high level, and the higher it is, the higher it will be.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Undergoing this challenge, Vietnam will gain more power to catch up with the developed world. ###RESPONSE:

Overcoming this challenge, Vietnam will gain more power to catch up with the developed world.

Undertaking this challenge, Vietnam will gain more power to catch up with the developed world.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: Engineering design processes for innovations are very important to the industry of China. ###RESPONSE:

Engineering design processes for innovations are very important to the industry in China.

Engineering design processes for innovation are very important to the industry of China.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: However, nowadays, there are some problems hamper the engineering design processes for innovations in China. ###RESPONSE:

However, nowadays, there are some problems that hamper the engineering design processes for innovations in China.

However, nowadays, there are some problems that hinder the engineering design processes of innovation in China.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: The price of the ordinary materials are suitable and almost the same as other countries. ###RESPONSE:

The price of ordinary materials is suitable and almost the same as that in other countries.

The price of the ordinary materials is suitable, and almost the same as other countries.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: These problems lead to a result that although there are good products, plastic conduit cannot exert its special functions because the workers do not have the necessary knowledge and still follows the outdated methods. ###RESPONSE:

These problems lead to a result that although there are good products, the plastic conduit cannot serve its special functions because the workers do not have the necessary knowledge and still follow outdated methods.

These problems lead to a result that although there are good products, plastic conduits cannot exert their special functions because the workers do not have the necessary knowledge and still follow the outdated methods.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: However, just like plastic conduit, there are many engineering designs which have not developed into perfect innovations in China because of the problems exist now. ###RESPONSE:

However, just like plastic conduits, there are many engineering designs that have not developed into perfect innovations in China because of the problems that exist now.

However, just like plastic conduits, there are many engineering designs that have not developed into perfect innovations in China because of the problems still exist today.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: In the board sweep of scientific history, scientists have made a lot of discoveries via research. ###RESPONSE:

In the broad sweep of scientific history, scientists have made a lot of discoveries via research.

In the board sweep of scientific history, scientists have made a lot of discoveries through research.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: Over the years, man has come up with many marvelous ideas and technologies which helped to simplify our lives by a huge leap. ###RESPONSE:

Over the years, man has come up with many marvelous ideas and technologies which have helped to simplify our lives by a huge leap.

Over the years, man has come up with many amazing ideas and technologies that have made life simpler for us by a huge leap.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: They even asked for more cards when they finished giving out what they have. ###RESPONSE:

They even asked for more cards when they finished giving out what they had.

They even asked for more cards when they finished giving them out what they had.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: The electric car is a large scale project where large amount of money is pumped into doing research in order to improve the car. ###RESPONSE:

The electric car is a large-scale project where a large amount of money is pumped into doing research in order to improve the car.

The electric car is a large-scale project that involves large amounts of money being pumped into doing research in order to improve the car.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Besides that, each individual part that make up the car is also expensive. ###RESPONSE:

Besides that, each individual part that makes up the car is also expensive.

Besides that, each individual part that makes up a car is also expensive.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: One similarity the two technologies share is that the process is tough. ###RESPONSE:

One similarity the two technologies share is that the process is tedious.

One similarity between these technologies is that they are both hard to do, but one technology can be done faster than the other.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: Besides, researchers have to repeat the same experiment hundreds of times until success. ###RESPONSE:

Besides, researchers have to repeat the same experiment hundreds of times until they succeed.

Besides, researchers have to repeat the same experiment many times until they succeed.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: Moreover, conventionally generated technology and innovation receive different attitudes from other people. ###RESPONSE:

Moreover, conventionally generated technology and innovation receive different responses from other people.

Moreover, conventionally generated technologies and innovations receive different attitudes from other people.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: The researchers of the innovation may receive poor feedbacks in the prior market research, or someone even regard the researchers as idiots. ###RESPONSE:

The researchers of the innovation may receive poor feedback in the prior market research, or someone may even regard the researchers as idiots.

The researchers of the innovation may receive poor feedback from the prior market research, or a person even regards them as idiots.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: However the engineer Mizoguchi persisted to research the laptop in a skunkworks environment, and finally he got the triumph and nowadays laptop is becoming essential in our daily life. ###RESPONSE:

However, the engineer Mizoguchi persisted in researching the laptop in a skunkworks environment, and finally, he got the triumph, nowadays, the laptop is becoming essential in our daily life.

However, the engineer Mizoguchi persevered to research the laptop in a skunkworks environment, and finally, he got the triumph and now, the laptop is becoming an essential part of our daily lives.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: As a most important aspect to contribute to the development of science and technology of the nation as well as improve living standard of people, engineering design for innovations plays a significant role in the current Chinese society. ###RESPONSE:

As a most important aspect to contribute to the development of science and technology of the nation as well as improve the living standard of the people, engineering design for innovations plays a significant role in the current Chinese society.

As a most important aspect to contribute to the development of science and technology of the nation as well as improve living standards of people, engineering designs play a significant role in the current Chinese society.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: This phenomenon is partially a result of the social prejudice that the society respects those with power more than intelligentsias. ###RESPONSE:

This phenomenon is partially a result of the social prejudice that society respects those with power more than intelligence.

This phenomenon is partly a result of the social prejudice that society respects those who have power more than intelligentsia.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Improving the education system and developing right academic atmosphere are essential and urgent. ###RESPONSE:

Improving the education system and developing the right academic atmosphere is essential and urgent.

Improving the education system, and developing a right academic atmosphere is essential and urgent.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: Only removing the obstacles can engineers develop science and technology and design new things of innovations. ###RESPONSE:

Only by removing the obstacles can engineers develop science and technology and design new things of innovations.

Only removing the obstacles will engineers develop science and technology, and design new things of innovation.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: Because the project usually spends a lot of money, one should have a backup, such as a company, to give financial support. ###RESPONSE:

Because the project usually costs a lot of money, one should have a backup, such as a company, to give financial support.

Because the project usually spends a lot of money, one should have a backup, such as a company, to provide financial support.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: A conventionally generated technology and an innovation that was created in a skunkworks environment differ in organizational structure and time consumption, but similar in the doers and the purpose. ###RESPONSE:

A conventionally generated technology and an innovation that was created in a skunkworks environment differ in organizational structure and time consumption but are similar in the doers and the purpose.

A conventionally generated technology and an innovation that were created in a skunkworks environment differ in their organizational structure and time consumption, but similar in the doers and the purpose.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: In some cases, although the idea of the project was brilliant, the executives rejected the proposal due to the economic situation of the company. ###RESPONSE:

In some cases, although the idea of the project was brilliant, the executives rejected the proposal due to the financial situation of the company.

In some cases, though the idea for the project was brilliant, the executives rejected the proposal due to the economic situation of the company.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: In contrast, a project which is done in a skunkworks environment does not undergo the company's bureaucracy. ###RESPONSE:

In contrast, a project which is done in a skunkworks environment does not go through the company's bureaucracy.

In contrast, a project that is done in a skunkworks environment does not undergo the company's bureaucratic processes.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: As a result of the difference in organizational structure, a conventionally generated technology and an innovation that was created in a skunkworks environment also differ in time consumption. ###RESPONSE:

As a result of the difference in organizational structure, a conventionally generated technology and innovation that is created in a skunkworks environment also differ in time consumption.

As a result of the difference in organizational structure, a conventionally generated technology and an innovation that was created in a skunkworks environment also differ in time consumption.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Despite these differences, a conventionally generated technology and an innovation that was created in a skunkworks environment have two similarities. ###RESPONSE:

Despite these differences, a conventionally generated technology and an innovation that is created in a skunkworks environment have two similarities.

Despite these differences, a conventionally generated technology and an innovation that were created in a skunkworks environment have two similarities.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: For instance, hand phone is made in order to communicate with another person in the different place in an easier way. ###RESPONSE:

For instance, the handphone is made in order to communicate with another person in a different place in an easier way.

For instance, a handphone is made for communication with another person in different places in an easier way.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: A conventionally generated technology and an innovation that was created in a skunkworks environment are different but alike. ###RESPONSE:

A conventionally generated technology and an innovation that was created in a skunkworks environment are different yet alike.

A conventionally generated technology and an innovation that were created in a skunkworks environment are different, but alike.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: Though they are different in organizational structure and time consumption, but both still have similarities in the doers and the purpose. ###RESPONSE:

Though they are different in organizational structure and time consumption, both still have similarities in the doers and the purpose.

Though they are different in their organizational structure and time consumption, but both still have similarities in the doers and the purposes.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in this sentence: Since a company still have to consider a number of factors when making a decision, bureaucracy in the company will not be gone. ###RESPONSE:

Since a company still has to consider a number of factors when making a decision, bureaucracy in the company will not be gone.

Since a company still has to consider a number of factors when making a decision, bureaucratic in the company will not be gone.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: However, by looking at the efficiency of the skunkworks, it is possible for a company to reduce the bureaucracy in order to come out with more innovations. ###RESPONSE:

However, by looking at the efficiency of skunkworks, it is possible for a company to reduce the bureaucracy in order to come up with more innovations.

However, by looking at the efficiency of the skunkworks, it is possible for a company to reduce the bureaucracy in order to come up with more innovative ideas.

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: Annually, millions of funds are being pumped into the R&D sector to encourage innovations to offer solutions to the pressing challenges Singapore faces. ###RESPONSE:

Annually, millions in funds are being pumped into the R&D sector to encourage innovations to offer solutions to the pressing challenges Singapore faces.

Annually, millions of funds are being pumped into the R&D sector to encourage innovation in solving pressing challenges Singapore faces.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: One problem faced by engineering design in Singapore is the various restrictions due to socio-political system of the country. ###RESPONSE:

One problem faced by engineering design in Singapore is the various restrictions due to the socio-political system of the country.

One problem faced by engineers in Singapore is the various restrictions due to the socio-political system of the country.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: In recent years, the core objectives of the country's research and development project have been directed in the area of clean energy and water technology. ###RESPONSE:

In recent years, the core objectives of the country's research and development projects have been directed in the area of clean energy and water technology.

In recent years, the core objectives of the country's research and development projects have been directed to the areas of clean energy and water technology.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: As a result, innovation process is interrupted at the stage of research and development with the absence of supports and attention. ###RESPONSE:

As a result, the innovation process is interrupted at the stage of research and development with the absence of support and attention.

As a result, the innovation process is interrupted at the stage of research and development with the absence of support and attention.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Aside from the lack of resources for the research and development stage, difficulties may be faced in finding suitable target group for the innovation result within the country. ###RESPONSE:

Aside from the lack of resources for the research and development stage, difficulties may be faced in finding a suitable target group for the innovation result within the country.

Apart from the lack of resources for the research and development stage, difficulties may be faced in finding suitable target groups for the innovation results within the country

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: The low population of the country disables experimentation on a large scale basic which eventually may cause inaccuracy in the result. ###RESPONSE:

The low population of the country disables experimentation on a large scale which may eventually cause inaccuracy in the result.

The low population of the country disables experimentation on a large scale, which ultimately may cause an error in the result.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Indeed just earlier this year, a team of National University of Singapore researchers find themselves facing this problem. ###RESPONSE:

Indeed just earlier this year, a team of the National University of Singapore researchers found themselves facing this problem.

Indeed, just earlier this year, a team of the National University of Singapore researchers found themselves facing this problem.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: However, a problem was faced when they attempt to test out the chair. ###RESPONSE:

However, a problem was faced when they attempted to test out the chair.

However, a problem was faced when they attempted to test out the chair.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: They could not get access to enough deaf children locally for the test thus had to travel to Sri Lanka for the test out. ###RESPONSE:

They could not get access to enough deaf children locally for the test and thus had to travel to Sri Lanka for the test.

They could not get access to enough deaf children local for the test, thus had to travel to Sri Lanka for the test out.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Hence the process of engineering design is hampered by the lack of resource not only at stages of research and development, but also in the diffusion of the innovation. ###RESPONSE:

Hence the process of engineering design is hampered by the lack of resources not only at stages of research and development but also in the implementation of the innovation.

Hence, the process of engineering design is hindered by a lack of resources not only at stages of research and development but also in the diffusion of the innovation.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: In the 21st century, everything develops in a very fast pace. ###RESPONSE:

In the 21st century, everything develops at a very fast pace.

In the 21st century, everything has developed at a very rapid pace.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: The serendipitous discovery of new ideas therefore, sometimes comes out during the trials. ###RESPONSE:

The serendipitous discovery of new ideas and misplaced link words sometimes comes out during the trials.

The serendipitous discovery of new ideas often happens during the trials.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: Similarly, the discovery of laptop benefits the individual, the society and the world. ###RESPONSE:

Similarly, the discovery of the laptop has benefited the individual, society, and the world.

Similarly, the discovery of a laptop benefit individuals, society, and the world.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: Therefore, it is a quite safe design for us to use. ###RESPONSE:

Therefore, it is a safe design for us to use.

Therefore, it is a very safe design for us to use.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: In brief, the two products, laptop and penicillin, are either generated through a long period of research or a serendipitous discovery, they are both made out to meet the people's requirements. ###RESPONSE:

In brief, the two products, the laptop, and penicillin, are either generated through a long period of research or serendipitous, and they have both been made to meet people's requirements.

In brief, the two products, laptop and penicillin, are either generated through a long period of research or serendipitous discoveries, respectively, they are both made out to meet the needs of people.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: Although they may not be the best outcome to fulfil the people's needs, they still lead the world to a technological innovation. ###RESPONSE:

Although they may not be the best outcome to fulfill people's needs, they still lead the world in technological inventions and technological innovation.

Although they may not be the best outcome for fulfilling people's needs, they still lead the world to a technological innovation.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: From the huge one with the simplest function to today's lovely and multi-functional one, electronic dictronary have been refined again and again. ###RESPONSE:

From the huge one with the simplest function to today's lovely and multi-functional one, electronic dictionaries have been refined again and again.

From a huge one with the simplest function to today's lovely and multi-functional one, electronic dictronary has been refined again and again.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: Last but not least, the price of electronic dictronary is also influenced by students. ###RESPONSE:

Last but not least, the price of electronic dictionaries is also influenced by students.

Last but not least, the price of an electronic dictionary is also influenced by students.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: As students do not have job, they have to ask their parents for money. ###RESPONSE:

As students do not have jobs, they have to ask their parents for money.

As students don't have jobs, they have to ask their parents for money.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: It can be seen that as technology develops, electronic dictronary will be more and more helpful to students. ###RESPONSE:

It can be seen that as technology develops, electronic dictionary will be more and more helpful to students.

It can be seen that as technology advances, electronic dictonaries will become more and more useful for students.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix all grammatical errors: However, there are also occasional chances that R&D workers fortuitously discover an invention when they were actually pursuing something else. ###RESPONSE:

However, there are also occasional chances that R&D workers fortuitously discover an invention when they are actually pursuing something else.

However, there are also occasional chances that R&D workers fortuitously discover an invention when they were actually pursuing something else.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: This development received great responses from people throughout the US as it signifies one big step towards solving existing environmental problems such as the global warming. ###RESPONSE:

This development received great responses from people throughout the US as it signifies one big step towards solving existing environmental problems such as global warming.

This development has received a great response from people throughout the United States, as it signifies one big step toward solving existing environmental problems such as global warming.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality: The conventional innovation process requires the engineers to first identify a human need before the research officially begin. ###RESPONSE:

The conventional innovation process requires engineers to first identify a human need before the research officially begins.

The conventional innovation process requires engineers to first identify a human need before the research officially begins.

###INSTRUCTION: Grammar improvements: On the other hand, a serendipitously discovered product is not the preset goal that the researchers want to achieve. ###RESPONSE:

On the other hand, a serendipitously discovered product is not the preset goal that that researchers want to achieve.

On the other hand, a serendipitous discovery of a new product is not the set goal that researchers want to achieve.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: One of the main differences between conventionally generated technology and skunkwork product is the speed of generating the product. ###RESPONSE:

One of the main differences between a conventionally generated technology and a skunkworks product is the speed of generating the product.

One of the main differences between conventionally generated technology and skunkworks products is their speed at generating the product.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors in this sentence: While conventional research requires the researchers to do large amount of reports, discussions and management procedures, skunkwork provides pathway to develop an invention quickly without being constrained by bureaucratic processes. ###RESPONSE:

While conventional research requires the researchers to do a large amounts of reports, discussions, and management procedures, skunkworks provides a pathway to develop an invention quickly without being constrained by bureaucratic processes.

While conventional research requires the researchers to do a lot of reports, discussions, and management procedures, skunkworks provides a pathway for developing inventions quickly without being constrained by bureaucratic processes.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The specified team was given resources and freedom to develop and make changes as they see any problem in the invention. ###RESPONSE:

The specified team is given resources and freedom to develop and make changes as they see any problem in the invention.

The specified team was given resources and freedom to develop and make changes as they saw any problems with the invention.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: For instance, a conventionally generated invention, electric refrigerator was produced to meet the needs of human. ###RESPONSE:

For instance, a conventionally generated invention, the electric refrigerator, was produced to meet the needs of humans.

For instance, an ordinarily generated invention, an electric refrigerator, was produced to meet the needs of humans.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this text: This invention also makes a lot of profit to the company. ###RESPONSE:

This invention also brings a lot of profit to the company.

This invention also makes a lot of profit for the company.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammar mistakes: These methods do work, but only minority of the population is doing it, and results could only be seen after many years of efforts. ###RESPONSE:

These methods do work, but only a minority of the population is doing it, and results can only be seen after many years of effort.

These methods do work, but only a small portion of the population is doing them; and results may only be seen after many years of effort.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: Research has shown that whenever a volcano erupts, it releases large amount of dust and gaseous chemicals causing a thick layer of haze to form around the planet, thus reducing the average temperature of Earth by almost one degree Fahrenheit. ###RESPONSE:

Research has shown that whenever a volcano erupts, it releases a large amount of gaseous chemicals, causing a thick layer of haze to form around the planet, thus reducing the average temperature of Earth by almost one degree Fahrenheit.

Research has shown that when a volcano erupts, it releases large amounts of dust and gases into the atmosphere, which causes a thick layer of haze to form around the planet, thereby reducing its average temperature by nearly one degree Fahrenheit.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: Although the description of the designing process is simple and clear, the implement of engineering design is rather complicated and requires several crucial qualities. ###RESPONSE:

Although the description of the designing process is simple and clear, the implementation of engineering design is rather complicated and requires several crucial qualities.

Although the description of the design process is simple and clear, the implementation of engineering design is quite complex and requires several crucial qualities.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: First of all, Chinese education system largely destroyed students' creative thinking skills. ###RESPONSE:

First of all, the Chinese education system largely destroyed students' creative thinking skills.

First of all, the Chinese education system has mainly destroyed students' creativity skills.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors: As a result of the impulsive atmosphere, Chinese government focused too much on economic development but input too little on technological research. ###RESPONSE:

As a result of the impulsive atmosphere, the Chinese government focused too much on economic development but too little on technological research.

As a result of the impulsive atmosphere, the Chinese government focused too much on economic development but not enough to implement technology research.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: The lack of innovative thinking skills and the indifference to the creative work have already hampered Chinese engineering design. ###RESPONSE:

The lack of innovative thinking skills and the indifference to creative work has already hampered Chinese engineering design.

The lack of innovative thinking skills and the indifference to creativity has already hindered Chinese engineering design.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: To promote creative-centered research and design, China have to transform greatly in these two dimensions. ###RESPONSE:

To promote creative-centered research and design, China has to transform greatly in these two dimensions.

To promote creativity and design, China has to transform dramatically in these two dimensions.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: With concised understanding of the problem and important information, the design will move to the next stage of creating solutions. ###RESPONSE:

With a concise understanding of the problem and important information, the design will move to the next stage of creating solutions.

With a concise understanding of the problem and important information, the design will move from the next stage of creating solutions.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix disfluencies in the sentence: The skills which needed in the design process cannot be gain from such an education system. ###RESPONSE:

The skills which are needed in the design process cannot be gained from such an education system.

The skills that need to be gained from such a system are not available from such an educational system.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove grammatical mistakes: China has already find ways to solve these problems, but solving these problems needs time. ###RESPONSE:

China has already found ways to solve these problems, but solving these problems needs time.

China has already found ways to solve these problems, and they need time.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: However, this time, the one who destroys the earth is no more the god but human beings themselves. ###RESPONSE:

However, this time, the one who destroys the earth is no more God G but human beings themselves.

However, this time, the one who destroys the earth is no more the god but human beings themselves.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammar of this text: In such situation, time is of essence. ###RESPONSE:

In such a situation, time is of the essence.

In such a situation, time is of essence.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: The designers of the 3-D printer had ensured that their product appeal to a large consumer group by boosting its functionality. ###RESPONSE:

The designers of the 3-D printer have ensured that their product appeals to a large consumer group by boosting its functionality.

The designers of the 3-D printer have ensured that their product appeals to a large number of consumers by increasing its functionality.

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality: Besides, it is also influenced by the potential profitability of the corporate manufacturer. ###RESPONSE:

Besides, it is also influenced by its potential profitability for the corporate manufacturer.

Besides, it is also influenced by the potential profitability of the corporate manufacturer.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar errors: There is therefore a need for a more environmentally friendly way to generate the energy for our use. ###RESPONSE:

There is, therefore, a need for a more environmentally friendly way to generate energy for our use.

There is therefore a need for a more environmentally friendly way to generate the energy we use.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix errors in this text: However, it is not likely that they will be able to replace the current infrastructures of fossil fuel generators at a quick rate due to high start-up costs, and in some cases geographical constraints. ###RESPONSE:

However, it is not likely that they will be able to replace the current infrastructures of fossil fuel generators at a quick rate due to their high start-up costs and in some cases, geographical constraints.

However, it is not likely that they will be able to replace the current infrastructure of fossil fuels with a quick rate due to high start-ups and geographic constraints.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Switching from gasoline vehicles to the 'zero-emission' electric vehicles will significantly reduce the carbon emission of these countries, hence the resurgence of electric vehicles and their technology. ###RESPONSE:

Switching from gasoline vehicles to 'zero-emission' electric vehicles will significantly reduce the carbon emission of these countries, hence the resurgence of electric vehicles and their technologies.

Switching from gasoline vehicles to the 'zero-emission' electric vehicles will significantly reduce the carbon emissions of these countries, hence the resurgence of electric vehicles and their technology.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix the grammatical mistakes: Due to the limited resources in Singapore, the commercialization stage may not be able to execute. ###RESPONSE:

Due to the limited resources in Singapore, the commercialization stage may not be able to materialize.

Due to the limited resources in Singapore, the commercialization stage may not be able to execute.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar in the sentence: In Singapore, moving on to the commercialization stage of the design process is not easily achieved without going through tough brain storming. ###RESPONSE:

In Singapore, moving on to the commercialization stage of the design process is not easily achieved without going through tough brainstorming.

In Singapore, moving from the commercialization stage of the design process is not easy but it can be done successfully with a tough brainstorming.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical errors in this sentence: However, if eco-car is to proceed on with the commercialization stage in the engineering design process, the problem encountered by my home country is the capital cost. ###RESPONSE:

However, if the eco-car is to proceed to the commercialization stage in the engineering design process, the problem encountered by my home country is capital cost.

However, if an eco-car is to be promoted as a commercial vehicle, the problem encountered by my home country is the capital cost.

###INSTRUCTION: Make the sentence grammatical: The high retail price of car will significantly affect the decision of committee to commercialize the product as consumer would not pay much for it. ###RESPONSE:

The high retail price of the car will significantly affect the decision of the committee to commercialize the product, as a consumers would not pay much for it.

The high retail price of a car will significantly affect the decision of the committee to commercialize the product as consumers would not pay much for it.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammatical mistakes in this sentence: With a population of only about 4 million, coupled with lack of natural resources, Singapore has no choice but to make the most of what resources are available. ###RESPONSE:

With a population of only about 4 million, coupled with a lack of natural resources, Singapore has no choice but to make the most of whatever resources are available.

With a population of just about 4 million, coupled with a lack of natural resources, Singapore has no choice but to make the most of what resources are available.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammar: Hence the significance and importance of research in Singapore. ###RESPONSE:

Hence, the significance and importance of research in Singapore.

Hence, the significance and importance of research in Singapore are as follows:

###INSTRUCTION: Improve the grammaticality of this sentence: Maybe it would be take a few more years before the eco-car have a potential to be marketed. ###RESPONSE:

Maybe it would take a few more years before the eco-car has the potential to be marketed.

Maybe it will take some time before the eco-car has a potential to be marketed.

###INSTRUCTION: Fix grammaticality in this sentence: After all, the simulation done on computers cannot be compared to what the students experienced. ###RESPONSE:

After all, the simulation done on computers cannot be compared to what the students have experienced.

After all, the simulation done on computers cannot be compared to what the students have experienced.

###INSTRUCTION: Remove all grammatical errors from this text: The success of the design will be based on the yearly race competition held on an international level. ###RESPONSE:

The success of the design will be based on the yearly race competition held at the international level.

The success of the design will be based on the annual race competition held at an international level.

###INSTRUCTION: Update to remove grammar errors: To sum up, lack of skilled labour and inability to re-create computer simulation in real life are not the only 2 problems commonly faced in engineering design process in Singapore. ###RESPONSE:

To sum up, the lack of skilled labor and the inability to re-create computer simulation in real life are not the only 2 problems commonly faced in the engineering design process in Singapore.

To sum up, a lack of skilled labor and an inability to create a computer simulation in real life is not the only problem common in the engineering design process in Singapore.