Please review our startup - timzon.com
pedalpete: I'm not sure why this is, but when I first get to your site, i don't know what to look at. 
My eyes are being dragged all over the place, and I had to concentrate to read a single heading/paragraph.You'd think with the big lettering you've used, and the layout (which is good), this wouldn't be an issue.The 'call to action' isn't clear enough. 
Could be that I'm just having a strange day, but it isn't exactly clear to me what I'm supposed to do (and yes, I see the (ready to begin/sign-up), but something about your overall layout/design just isn't sitting right with me.Sorry, wish I could explain exactly why.