Please help review my startup's messaging
patio11: 1)  Yes, but I'm a plugged-in savvy Internet user, not a plumber or baker.2)  I think your customers -- less-than-net-savvy local businesses -- might not make the leap that you and I made automatically: "... and success at online marketing will bring you more customers and make you money."3)  I think you will find you spend a lot more time evangelizing Internet marketing to your customers than you spend evangelizing EggZack, which might be problematic for you.  I think the core challenge is convincing them that this weird newfangled thing that they do on the Google with the webmails is actually going to make a difference in their bottom lines.