Would free copywriting assistance appeal to you?
bkovitz: I would love to hear an expert's (free!) suggestions on how we can improve our copy on decisionero.  I believe very strongly that, especially on the web, short copy that gets the message across is crucial--and short copy is the hardest to write.Our current home page is the one I'm currently most eager for suggestions about, particularly the two paras at the bottom:http://decisionero.comThere are two other pages that present our message in a little more detail:http://decisionero.com/decisionero/abouthttp://decisionero.com/decisionero/originIf you'd like to post here to HN to demonstrate your style of analysis and feedback for others to see, please feel free.  Or, if you prefer, email me at bkovitz "at" acm "dot" org.