Review our startup - Taxi Mogul, a persistent browser game
Mystalic: Okay, I'm going to rail into you.  This is only because it will help you out in the long run1) Your website looks like a slipshod piece of junk.  It's a crap blog format with some images.  Where's a video overview of the game?  A column showing recent scores and users?  A smoother interface?  Come on, there's tons of things you screwed up on.2) Where's the hook?  I need a 6 word hook, a tagline, something to say "Maybe I should keep reading about this."  Nothing.3) I don't give a damn about taxis, so why should I give a damn about your game?  At least with other games, I'm building a galactic empire or taking over the world.  Those far more attract to imaginative personalities that play these games.4) What's the reward?5) Your logo's a piece of junk built with standard templates in photoshop.  The lack of effort in your logo shows.There's an entire lack of effort on the front-end and a lack of hooks to get me to EVER play this.And what's the business model?  Advertising is going to make you money?  Not in this market.  Freemium is dying.This is jumping on an ancient business that's dying out rapidly.  The Facebook application is the only positive I have.Sorry if I was harsh.  This is how I feel, and I hope it helps.