Review my (non-profit) startup, 20:20
jwilliams: Hi - Interesting concept.My first reaction was that the initial page is too wordy. I mean, I'm in software and I found it a somewhat difficult read. (I know it's not about the frontpage, but that's where I came in).I think you need a simple byline - e.g. "20:20 is all about X with Y"... Better yet, see if you can express this without text at all... Or have the minimal text, but have some images that invoke what you mean.I think the video is great, but I think some more fleshed out examples (not necessarily in the video) would help.Otherwise, I think it's an intriguing idea.Good luck with the concept!