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jlm382: The main issue with the homepage is that it doesn't immediately capture my interest to learn more.  Your buttons on the bottom "invest in us" are large -- bigger than the actual body text!Instead, why not make two or three super important points that describe your product, and have that take up the majority of the body?You could also A/B split test multiple version of the homepage, and track which versions lead to more people ultimately trying your product, or clicking on more pages.Hope this helps.