Please, review my startup - Mobiquus
trapper: That's pretty impressive. The demo needs a better loading screen (applets can do that you know, http://weblogs.java.net/blog/joshy/archive/2008/08/a_better_...).What is Mobiquus?
Mobiquus is a push-mail application for your mobile phone. 
>what is that? - I know but most people won'tIt works with any mobile phone that supports java and it has some features that make it unique.
>your second sentence should make me want to use it, more than the first. Technical specs need to come later after you have me.What does using your product give me? Spell it out.