Review my product - Server Density
rufo: (EDITOR'S NOTE: Oops. This turned into more of a treatise than I'd realized. I hope this is useful stuff, and not too nit-picky. I also see I'm the only one so far mentioning these things, and I'm interested anyway, so maybe I'm just being cranky. :-)Your video is great, and the site design itself is quite nice, but the content itself may need to be fleshed out and reworked a bit - I'm generally not a huge screencast watcher, and if I didn't have an interest in the product I might've clicked past almost immediately.For an example, I didn't realize that the screenshots were clickable at first glance. When I clicked on them I get a screenshot that's too large and zoomed out. Add some indicator that they're clickable, crop it down to what's really important (no window dressing) and make sure it'll fit on a window that's reasonably sized.I'd also consider some sort of in-line image display technique or gallery, so you can illustrate exactly what you want the potential customer to see and take away from the screen - when I click on the screenshot, the text explaining what I'm looking at goes away.Even the details themselves don't seem quite fleshed out enough. What data is being reported? In order to find that out, I have to go to the pricing page, then look at a footnote in difficult-to-read text at the bottom of the page. (In fact, get rid of the footnotes entirely. They make you look like you have something to hide - but nothing in the footnotes looks particularly bad.) Don't make me think - I might only give your page a few seconds to convince me, so tell me why your process snapshots are cool and useful if I'm trying to diagnose a problem (you do a better job of that in the video). Graphs, while handy, are boring on their own - tell me what data is being graphed, why your graphs are better, and why they'll help me keep my servers online.To borrow from Kathy Sierra, your goal is to make me understand how and why your product is going to help me kick ass - in your case, why your product will help me keep my servers running smoothly and my clients happy. A few bullet points (while really good to have! seriously, after I decide your product is intriguing, the next thing I'll want to know is what it does) isn't quite enough on its own to make me understand why I want your product.This all might be a moot point, however, since I already like the idea of the product itself, and that was after the lack of details basically forced me to watch your well-put-together video... so maybe it's working better than I thought. :-)