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### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9a82d5d9d5d for prompt 3b9047: 'each class had different people. the lower the class the harder they had to work. and the highest person of the social pyrimad was the pharoah'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.20457384774869 and the wording score is -1.16978365920044.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9adb7b42757 for prompt ebad26: 'As stated in the passage, they would replace the bone with an iron rod to get rid of the "bad part". They would let meat rot and sell it as head cheese. They wpuld rub the meat with soda so the bad smell would not be noticed.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.61194986616794 and the wording score is -0.162889048712082.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9ae7f23131d for prompt 3b9047: 'Egyptian society was structured like a pyramid. At the top were the gods and pharaohs, after them were thenobles and priests, after them were the soldiers and craftsmen, and the last ones were slave and farmers.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.301962052042057 and the wording score is 0.0778567006247517.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9b6ce895f4b for prompt ebad26: 'If the meat went bad, many factories would chop it into a sausage that would later be sold. Most of the times they would hide the digusting odor that the meat would obtain, such as rubbing the meat in soda to take away the smell so it could be sold later on. Some of the hams would be given an extra/second pickle in hopes that it would be strong enough to destroy the odor. The workers had called this as "giving them thirty per cent". They created odd processes as well, such as trying to "extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert it in the hole a white-hot iron". Lastly, they would also try and preserve the meat with borz and color it with gelatin for a browner color, and would even "stamp some it "special", and for this they would charge two cents more a pound". '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.61541774038396 and the wording score is 1.41791825312488.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9b7a7381e73 for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of Egyptian system of government were there were social classes. The top of the pyramid are pharoahs which are the leaders which were believed to be gods. The second highest are nobles and priests nobles are the only people who can hold government positions and pharoahs appese gods. The second lowest are middle class workers which make,sell,and trade. The lowest are slaves which are prisoners of war which built buildings and entertained higher level people. Different social classes were involved with the government by the nobles being the government. The pharoah being the head of the government. Then everyone else wasnt in the government. My evidence is in paragraph 2,6 "They had absolute power over their subjects.","Only nobles could hold government posts." My evidence shows how different social classes are involved in the government.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.83524222284948 and the wording score is 1.21738683887972.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9d86bfcbd7c for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristole believes that an ideal tragedy must have a well constructed plot,should excite pity and fear, and have a mian character that is not too great and not incredibly bad. A well constructed plot would be foced on one major issue that the story reveloves around. The tragedy must ecite pity and fear by showing how bad things can happen to people, but the main character must not be too great or incredibly bad, they have to be somewhere inbetween. If the main character was too great, the turing point would be too shocking, and if the character was incredibly bad their misfortune would not be pitiful or make us fear. Aristole says that to have an ideal tragedy it must include a well constructed plot, it should excite pity and fear in the audience, and have a mian character that is not too great and not incredibly bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.95852822975316 and the wording score is 2.22232010034986.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9da41e0d139 for prompt 3b9047: ' The Egyptian system was broken down likea pyramid. The bottom class people were the farmers and slaves. The middle class people where merchans and craftmen/women. The more of the richer class was soldiers. The richest class was piests and the noble men. And the highest class were the gods and pharaohs. Its was hard for the middle class and the silightly richer class to move up but not for the farmers. The farmer could move up from farmers to merchants or craftsmen. But the worst class to be in was the very bottom where the slaves where they would get beaten and they were stolen from their family and homes.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.643625564868572 and the wording score is 0.45708281784602.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9ede2f0903b for prompt 39c16e: 'Should "Imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation.", should start good and then end bad, and maintain one plotline (adds to the dreary).'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9fb973f7ec7 for prompt 814d6b: 'It started to grow because they saw other kids doind it and wanted to as wee. It ended because it got out of control they did as they were told to well.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.890893446019654 and the wording score is 0.215294189923691.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa145de9fb81 for prompt 39c16e: '1) The hero has to have some relatability to the audience. If the hero is 100% good and pure, or if a character is 100% evil, those characters can be viewed as one-dimensional and uninsteresting. People won't be able to connect themselves to those characters, making the overall story less interesting.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0294721751862414 and the wording score is 1.50876619495976.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa1e41cb23e2 for prompt 3b9047: 'Egyptian society was structured like a pyramid. At the top were the gods, such as Ra, Osiris, and Isis. Egyptians believed that the gods controlled the universe. .They could make the Nile overflow, cause famine, or even bring death and the egyptians also elevated some human beings to gods. Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects. After pharaohs died, huge stone pyramids were built as their tombs. Pharaohs were buried in chambers within the pyramids because the people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods, they entrusted their rulers with many responsibilities. The pharaoh directed the army in case of a foreign threat or an internal conflict. All laws were enacted at the discretion of the pharaoh. Each farmer paid taxes in the form of grain, which were stored in the pharaoh's warehouses. This grain was used to feed the people in the event of a famine.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa2cbbd17eba for prompt 3b9047: 'They were differnet by "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers. At the top were the gods, such as Ra, Osiris, and Isis Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects. Because the people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods, they entrusted their rulers with many responsibilities. Protection was at the top of the list. The pharaoh directed the army in case of a foreign threat or an internal conflict. All laws were enacted at the discretion of the pharaoh. Each farmer paid taxes in the form of grains, which were stored in the pharaoh’s warehouses. This grain was used to feed the people in the event of a famine.as a supervisor. The vizier ensured that taxes were collected. scribes who kept government records. These high-level employees had mastered a rare skill in ancient Egypt — they could read and write.Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests. Nobles enjoyed great status and also grew wealthy from donations to the gods. All Egyptians—from pharaohs to farmers—gave gifts to the gods.Soldiers fought in wars or quelled domestic uprisings. During long periods of peace, soldiers also supervised the peasants, Skilled workers such as physicians and craftsmen/women made up the middle class. Craftsmen made and sold jewelry, pottery, papyrus products, tools, and other useful things.These were the merchants and storekeepers who sold these goods to the public.At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers."And is the stages from high to low.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.131858225237481 and the wording score is -1.46312436429871.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa383b1fd739 for prompt 39c16e: 'As Aristotle describes, an ideal tragedy should have one single issue that's focused on. The tradgedy should go from good to bad with proof and emotion left on stage with a dramatic effect on the audience. It needs to have a plot with a man that is neither good nor evil whose life falls apart because of a mistake.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa405a1ca30e for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use several different ways to cover up spoiled meat and use it. One such way according to The Jungle was to, "The packers were always originating such schemes—they had what they called “boneless hams,” which were all the odds and ends of pork stuffed into casings; and “California hams,” which were the shoulders, with big knuckle joints, and nearly all the meat cut out." They would cut up the spoiled ham and mix it with several other types of meat to mask the smell of the spoiled meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.14151559696515 and the wording score is -0.802047447098467.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa5d5f39b236 for prompt 814d6b: ' The Third Wave developed over a short period of time because Jones made rules in order for it be a one-day experiment. For example, the text states," the first day's session ended with only a few rules. Here the reader understands, how Jones was able to make it shorter. Lastly, as the week went on, the class transformed into a group with a supreme sense of disapline and community. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa5d625c2643 for prompt 39c16e: 'A tragedy should be organized and arranged but not too simple in the terms of being predictable. The plot should make sense and have good elements. Tragic pleasure, keeps the audience on the edge of their seat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.248807738780381 and the wording score is 0.383460058821202.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa5e00d32ba3 for prompt 3b9047: 'the structure of the acient egyptian system of government is first off only the nobles could hold the government posts. of many different ways of rights people are treated.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.48752299907168 and the wording score is -1.12595596361576.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa60cb9cef3f for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of an ideal tradgedy is the downfall of a man who has made mistakes and those mistakes are why he is having a downfall.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa78c6faf979 for prompt 3b9047: 'slaves and farmers were at the bottom. the middle class was made up of skilled workers. the high class was made up of nobles and priests. the pharaoh was at the top.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.419499103988893 and the wording score is 0.300379099185542.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa8952879001 for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the Egyptian system of govenment consisted of; High nobles and Preist at the top, skilled workers, soldiers and crasftmen in the middle class, and unskilled workers, slaves and farmers at the bottom. This is shown, "Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests" (US History 6). The differnet social classes were invloved by the government by paying taxes to the governemnt, and cilmbing up the social ladder. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa8bf2eccd8d for prompt ebad26: 'According to paragraph two, Jonas had the workers cover up the smell of spoiled meat by rubbing the product in soda and distributing it to be eaten through free-lunch counters. Another way to hide its spoiled meat was found through pickling; however, it was not as affective as Jonas had hoped. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0818089611750242 and the wording score is -0.677791081330439.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa8c6503db1c for prompt 39c16e: 'A tragedy should be arranged not simply a complex plan and should have many actions with fear and pity. the plan normally follows thru in the first part and then it starts to change. single tragic has neither pity nor fear, it would work but it has no pity nor fear so it not as good.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.301962052042057 and the wording score is 0.0778567006247517.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa92a3aca667 for prompt 39c16e: 'The ideal tragedy would be complex, it would have varying elements of emotions, like pity or fear or happiness. Characters are also an important element of an ideal tragedy, the character should be likable and well meaning, so that their tragic ending is more meaningful. The plot is also another element of an ideal tragedy, the fortune of the character should change from good to bad, it should also include dramatic competition. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.519362908211679 and the wording score is 1.76561548788642.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fa9f8cd6014c for prompt 3b9047: ' A vizier was the highest official below the pharaoh. Their responsibilities included supervising the country, gathering information from lower supervisors, managing taxes, recording trade, and advising the pharaoh.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.00194459351196 and the wording score is 0.467502089497559.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fabc53826980 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy should involve a complex plot with many intertwining plot lines, a sense of pity and fear from the audience towards the main character, and have the characters fortune turn from good to bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student facd27b2cbfd for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed over such a short period of time because Ron Jones, a history teacher at Cubberley High School, conducted an experiment on his students to teach them about German mentality. Jones established rules in his classroom and developed an authoritative dictatorship to enforce his students to behave in a more orderly way. As once student began changing their actions and behaviors, all other students quickly joined. When the fourth day of the experiment came along, Jones felt as if he was loosing control of his students. This was because their involvement in the experiment was increasing and their loyalty, as well as discipline was becoming too much. As a result, Jones decided it was best if he just terminated the entire experiment.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.8297232567616 and the wording score is 2.42869635471285.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fafa6f0aebeb for prompt 3b9047: 'The ancinet Egyptians goverment system is at the very top is the Gods. The Egyptians belived the gods controlled the universe. Their job was to make them happy if not there can be terrible concsquensies "They could make the Nile overflow, cause famine, or even bring death." The next step down is the Pharoh, the Pharoh was "god like" to the eygptians. The pharoh had access to everything and power over everybody, the were a pretty big deal. The text even said, "They had absolute power over their subjects." It was the pharohs responsibilty to direct the army and all sorts of things to keep their kingdom safe. Then there are viziers, viziers are supervisors to ensure that texes were collected. Scribes worked with viziers. Scribes kept goverment records. they mastered a rare skill in Eqypt, reading and writing! Below the Pharohs are the Nobles and Preist, VERY powerful. only nobles could hold the goverment posts, those positions they profited from the tributes that they paid to the pharoh. Preist's jobs were responsible for making the gods happy. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.17293236566335 and the wording score is 0.239216658363737.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb0c9b9935eb for prompt ebad26: 'They would put more pickle into it to keep it from smelling bad.They would extract the bone and heat it up so it looked fine.They would also cut it up and then mix it with a bunch of other meat.They sometimes dosed it with "borax and glycerin and dumped into the hoppers and made over again for home consumption".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.140912434027827 and the wording score is -0.245279067913644.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb0d8ea10a36 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use and cover up spoiled meat whoud be, they added it to good meat, They would add chemicals to the moldy meat, and they would put the infected meat in grouprs with other meats.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.62764732431351 and the wording score is -0.125597133679325.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb1d4fdb9f4c for prompt 3b9047: 'pharaoh is at top, then noblemen and priests, next class is made up of skilled workers, then soldiers and at the bottom is the farmers and the slaves'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb20069b66d2 for prompt 3b9047: ' The structure of the ancient Egypitian system of government was like a pyramid. At the top wre the Gods, such as Osiris, and Isis. The Egyptians belived that the gods controlled the universe. Pharaohs were buried in chambers within the pyramids. Because the people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods, they entrusted their rulers with many responsibilities. Below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests. Nobles enjoyed great status and also grew wealthy from donations to the gods. At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers. Slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles. Farmers tended the fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb218bc12936 for prompt 39c16e: 'A hero's flaw, the turn around moment, like a eureka moment if you will. Then last is a moment where the hero is going towards tragedy in the story.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.63851133466335 and the wording score is -0.911973295233088.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb2e9cc17d59 for prompt ebad26: 'Some ways they would combined spolied meat or cover it up was to just combined it with the other meat. In paragraph 3 it says " Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference"(Sinclair). This goes to show that the meat industry did not care about what products they were putting out.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.328150986113429 and the wording score is -0.248892428406657.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb35fcc57845 for prompt 39c16e: 'Tragedies should be simple but complex, with a single issue. Making sure that there is a change in fortune from good to bad. Also inspring neither pity and fear.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb4246caeb93 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy are a character who is not necessarily good and just, and their misfortune is brought about through their own flaws or error. Also, the person will usually be of high social standing. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.157459620904918 and the wording score is -0.165811468770997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb44078fdb68 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory employees would rub chemicals on the meat to get rid of the horrible smell, then sell it on either one,two or 3 grade. Later on, the meat was only sold one graded due to the unsanitary conditions. Overall, the workers would use chemicals after working on the animal to take away the odor.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb4cd1caf090 for prompt 3b9047: 'In the article "Egyptian Social Structure" it is maily about being a soldier was only a temporary social status in times of conflict or war and the structure of the ancient Egyptian system of government. In the text it says, "During long periods of peace, soldiers also supervised the peasants, farmers, and slaves who were involved in building such structures as pyramids and palaces." This example tells us that soldiers supervised the peasants, farmers, and slaves who were invovled with bulding and the structure of thye ancient Egyptian system of government.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.153454049433642 and the wording score is 0.168544074280091.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb537e1b1e1e for prompt 3b9047: 'If you were on the lower part you would be a slave or a farmer having to do hard work. The higher you were at the top the higher your place was like a god or a pharoh.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb5e567d051b for prompt 3b9047: 'The pharohs ruled over everyone, they were considered gods. Nobles and priest were the next step below the pharaohs in the social pyramid. Only nobles could hold government post and the priest were responsible for pleasing the gods . Both positions profited from there social status. The soldiers fought in wars or quelled, during long periods of peace, soldiers also supervised the peasants,farmers, and slaves. The bottom of the social pyramid was the slaves and farmers , farmers paid the highest taxes . Farmers atleast had a chance to move up the social ladder. Slaves were prisoners from war and were forced to work and do what they were told. The pharohs are at the top of the social egyption pyramid and slaves and farmers were at the bottom.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.78208790958781 and the wording score is 0.911783480683268.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb67e9541c43 for prompt ebad26: 'If the factory had ever noticed any spoiled or mabye even rotten meat, either way they should just dispose of it immediately because if they sell it it would most likly get them in trouble because spoiled or rotten meat would most likely get people sick so rather then keeping it they should dispose of it immediately. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.21657871829111 and the wording score is 0.0118403556196139.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb6affb33d69 for prompt 39c16e: 'The change of fortune should be from good to bad not the reverse, this should happen because of an error. A tragedy should be complex, not simple. A well-constructed tragedy should have one single issue.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb7100220228 for prompt 39c16e: 'The 3 elements of an ideal tragedy, "imitate actions which excite pity and fear, "He must be one who is highly renowned and prosperous ", by some error of judgment or frailty."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.964717727264813 and the wording score is -1.6283678131373.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb7510d29efa for prompt 814d6b: 'It ended becasue it was getting out of control. according to the text it states "Jones instructed the students on how to initiate new members, and by the end of the day the movement had over 200 participants. Jones was surprised that some of the students started reporting to him when other members of the movement failed to abide by the rules." This shows how many students were into this project thats why they stopped it was getting way to out of hand.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.536299206438047 and the wording score is -0.674868661271524.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb7aa5203b02 for prompt 3b9047: 'Pharohs are on the top which means they were the best.Then right below is nobles and priests.Then at the very last spot is slaves and farmers.They were all involved in the goverment because they all played a important role.For example in the text it states In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles.Also in the text it states Only nobles could hold government posts; in these positions they profited from tributes paid to the pharaoh. Priests were responsible for pleasing the gods.The last detail i have is be cause the people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods, they entrusted their rulers with many responsibilities. Protection was at the top of the list. The pharaoh directed the army in case of a foreign threat or an internal conflict.This shows how they all played a important role.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.86294455153747 and the wording score is -0.0015290909730967.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb8d94582629 for prompt ebad26: 'They would mix spoiled meat with fresh meat to level out the smell and taste. If they didn't need to do that they would rub soda, or other substances on the spoiled meat to neutralize the rancid smell and taste. And if the meat got so bad that it turned white and moldy they would dose it in borax and glycerin.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb8e2a72477c for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient Egypt system is, pharoahs beign at the top the the vizier,then nobles, then, Solidiers,Then at the bottom is the slaves and farmers. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb91609e66a8 for prompt 39c16e: 'It needs to have a main character that the audience can relate to. Along wth that character needs to hve a downfall or several downfals. It needs to instrike fear and pity from the audience. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.595939424154249 and the wording score is -1.01015752048105.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fb9e4670de1b for prompt 3b9047: 'The pharaohs have the highest stauts below them are the nobels and priests. Nobels could hold goverment post and priests are responsible for pleasing the gods. At the very bottom of the social class are the farmers the farmers tended the feild, raised kept canals and reservoirs. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbadab11c19b for prompt ebad26: 'They would turn it into sausage or slap some chemicals on it to make it seem better. "whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.639882183724882 and the wording score is -1.38273829472334.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbafcc2cfd69 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use soda to take the bad smell from the meat. In the source, it states "sound sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten ". They would sell it later for people to have for free lunch.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.157459620904918 and the wording score is -0.165811468770997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbb024632682 for prompt ebad26: 'The way that the meat inderstys would cover up is if it spelled bad they would send it to the pikle area and brine it. Then they would send it to the sasage room to make sasages out of them. Then they will send it to the free lunch area for the people to change the color, the smell, and taste of it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbbe56344654 for prompt 3b9047: 'Ancient Egypt was composed of several social classes, ranging from lives lived in slavery to positions of absolute power. The following text explores the social structure and government of this ancient civilization.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbcf15f2d6ee for prompt ebad26: 'They would can it, make it into sausage, pickle it, cover it in soda, extract the bone, mix it with other meat, clean it with borax and glycerin, and even color it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.35556218334036 and the wording score is -0.955800990817773.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbd549bd7d82 for prompt 3b9047: 'Pharaohs at the top of the social pyramid, slaves at the bottom, some others in the middle. Egyptian social classes are different from ours because, well, slavery still happened (Egyptian Social Structure para 11). Also, theres the fact that there probably isnt a roll for the gods in our social stucture.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.452950387633723 and the wording score is 0.291839369007423.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbdaa788e1e6 for prompt 39c16e: 'The tragedy should only have one plot and not multiple, should go from good to bad and feature the downfall of someone, and it should not satisfy the audience like how a comedy does. It should also include misfortune.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbe97038b890 for prompt 39c16e: 'three elements of an ideal tragedy , as described by Aeistole would be the need for a single issue. Likewise it is needed for the change of luck to go from good to bad, and finally for the change of luck to come from a bug mistake, or something that was not ment to happen. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.584911203365046 and the wording score is 0.121684396209436.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbeb145080dc for prompt ebad26: 'When the meat was spoiled the would put it in cans withs some good meat, or cut it into sausage. " For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.671590083884143 and the wording score is -0.49817790792161.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbebb6fa376a for prompt 814d6b: ' The Third Wave was created because Jones wanted to show his students how people follow a crowd even when terrible things are happening. On the first day of the experiment, the students were told to do simple things which improved the efficiency of the class. But as the week progressed, the students started taking the project very seriously (in a bad way). Eventually, Jones felt the experiment slipping out of his control so he told his students that the president of the Third Wave was going to speak on televison. When the speech never happened, Jones told his students that the whole thing was an experiement that he created.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.825345150866286 and the wording score is 1.67200569417217.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbecbe1e26a5 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle truly believes that in order to be an ideal tragedy you must have "a well-constructed plot", "tragic imitation", or something that can "merely shock" you or someone (Aristotle 1).'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.921624696425702 and the wording score is -1.21361135478513.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fbfa363db173 for prompt 39c16e: 'The storyline should not be simple but rather complex. It doesn't satisfy the moral sense or yields forth fear or compassion. The change should not be from bad to good but from good to bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.504054561415386 and the wording score is -0.791628175446928.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc01cc19175c for prompt 814d6b: 'The experiment was ended to make sure it would not get out of hand, but it grew quickly as it vastly gained attentian because people wanted to be like others. It was like a new trend in a way. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.14092805856121 and the wording score is -0.500139256939828.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc0ebe243372 for prompt 3b9047: 'The pharaohs was treated like gods or human beings to gods. Then Nobles and priests was right below the pharaohs but Nobles could hold government posts priests were responsible to pleasing the gods. then below them was slaves and farmers slaves would work no stop because they didn't something bad or they were a pow and farmers were taxed heavily.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.210613934166593 and the wording score is -0.471414826967448.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc0fe859a6e1 for prompt 3b9047: 'Have you ever wondered what it would be being a egyptian a pharoah or a noble or if you were unlucky a slave? EGYPTIAN SOCIAL STRUCTURE tells you all about the egyptian social structure.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.06559038269944 and the wording score is -0.202142312763057.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc2fde1b9663 for prompt ebad26: 'They would rub the meat so it won't smell. based on the text it stated "hwo they would rub it with soda to take away the smell" '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc3e0c350faf for prompt 39c16e: 'It's should be thought out and planned to be complex. It should trigger emotions that people can relate to in the audience. It should also include the down fall of a character.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.14493363003249 and the wording score is -0.834494799990917.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc43e2d2ba01 for prompt 814d6b: 'In only a couple of days students/members were already heavily following. They would discriminate non-members, and followed Jones without question. When their loyalty and discipline got too much, the experiment had lost control so it was ended.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc4d708ae50d for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy should have a complicated plot, should make the ready feel pity or fear, and should follow the perspective of a middle ground man who is not bad or good.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.964717727264813 and the wording score is -1.6283678131373.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc507af6e638 for prompt 3b9047: 'At the top of the pyramid were the gods, and that were believed to control the universe, and everyone made sure to try and keep them happy to aviod anything harmful. No one was put above the gods. Next is the Chain of Command, they have a rare ability, they could read and write. In the chain of command is the pharaoh, the vizier, and the scribes who kept records. Noble aims held government posts, and had the responsibility of pleasing the gods. Seoond to last on the pyramid include the soldiers, they fought, but when they weren´t doing that they supervised people on the bottom of the pyramid. Craftsmen/women, merchants, physicans, and storekeepers all made it to middle class as well. The bottom of the pyramid were slaves and farmers. They were all treated the worst.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.39124345351226 and the wording score is 1.5843503030028.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc5662196508 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy include imitating actions that excite pity and fear, a well-constructed plot, and highly renowned and prosperous personage or character. A tragedy revolves around two themes; pity and fear. The plot should transform from good to bad instead of bad to good, because that shows suffering, and otherwise it won't express the two main themes well. A higher-standing successful character is needed so the process of going through suffering would be more effective. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.4557171190242 and the wording score is 1.09597108562581.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc56a94ad4ce for prompt 3b9047: 'Each social class was involved in the government in different ways. The highest class controlled taxes and laws. The middle class mainly made things. The lowest class had farmers which tended fields, kept canals, and worked in the stone quarries.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc56b221b2a3 for prompt ebad26: 'The spoiled meat was used in a multitude of ways. Some of these were cut up and mixed into non spoiled meat, mixed with chemicals to get rid of the rotting smell and lastly put into sausage. The workers would not get rid of the spoiled meat so they decided to hide it in the meat that had not yet spoiled. This was to make more meat and in turn make more profit. The passage states, "Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions-a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no oder that was in a ham could make a difference." This is explaining how the workers believed if the rotten meat was mixed up in the good meat, the consumers would never notice the difference and they did not really care about the harm it could cause them anyway. Many more practices like this one were continued throughout the meat packing industry until "The Jungle" was published and TR set in new rules to help prevent dangerous acts like this from happening.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.78783686454465 and the wording score is 2.1392391407142.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc591a1093b6 for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure they were slaves and famers. The fate to captured prisoners in war to build projects, slaves that toiled from the discretion to pharaohs or nobles. Famers that are fields to rise animals, kept canels in order into paid taxes for 60% for alot of hay. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc91da70de91 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy should not be simple, but in fact, complex. AN ideal tragedy should go from good to bad. In addtion, an ideal tragedy should have dramatic competition because that results in the most tragic effects. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc9a0047fd60 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would take back moldy meat and just mix it in with normal meat. This way it would be hard to tell if it was bad. They also covered spoiled meat in chemicals to make it look better.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.248807738780381 and the wording score is 0.383460058821202.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fc9da5ff39e7 for prompt ebad26: 'Some various ways the factory would use and cover up spoiled meat consisted of pickling the meat and then rubbing it with soda to take away the smell then continue to use it for free-lunch counters. This sentence in paragraph two reads, "...taken out of pickle and would often be found sour, and how they would rub it with soda to take away the smell, ans sell it to be aten on free-lunch counters..." Another way the factory covered up spoiled meat was mixing it in with other fresh menats so tha tthe odor and the spoildness would be conceiled. "...and mixed with half a ton of other mean, no odor that was in ham could make any difference."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fca51c5e9f08 for prompt 39c16e: 'There are three crucial elements of an ideal tragedy. First, a character that possesses a tragic flaw that leads to their downfall. Second, a well constructed plot that involves a change in fortune. Third, a discovery of one's true identity or a realization point. These elements support the complex characters and characterizations in a tragedy. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fcbb5464fd1d for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would rub soda on the meat, "giving them thirty per cent" method, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron. The author states, "they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell,"and "also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat,"This shows how they would try to fix they smell of the meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0888824040334871 and the wording score is -0.594710121694779.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fcc452e95629 for prompt 39c16e: 'It should excite pity and fear through an around okay main character, it should have a well-constructed plot that should be single rather than double, and end in a catastrophe so they do not resemble comedies.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.387791203829632 and the wording score is -0.584181287616185.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fccbe0bb7e0d for prompt 3b9047: 'there was the pharaos who were considered gods then there were priests, then there was soldiers that fought, the lastly there was the slaves without any right what so ever.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.938528793193441 and the wording score is -1.3016186841059.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fcd500f8d4bb for prompt 3b9047: 'Their society was like a pyramid, there was a top, bottom, and middle. on the top were the gods because they thought the gods were superier, evidence in paragraph 1, "Egyptions believed that the gods controlled the universe." In the middle were the nobles and priests. they were known to be very powerful, evience in paragraph 6, "Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests." in the lower part were the slaves and farmers. the slaves and farmers worked very hard. evidence in paragraph 11, "slaves toiled at the disrection of the pharaoh or nobles. also in paragraph 12, "farmers tended fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.41330960647724 and the wording score is 0.293573188027016.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fcee8f4c8131 for prompt 3b9047: 'the different social classes involved in thier government by showing what they needed to do so the top classes are god and pharaoh "At the top were the gods, such as Ra, Osiris, and Isis and pharaohs." and that the bottom were slaves and framers "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers and . In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.125751720745657 and the wording score is -1.05037185557272.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fcef5ed2940a for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tradgedy described by Aristotle are that it should follow a complex plan, it should imitate actions which excite pity and fear, and should include a character that is not "eminently good” and whose misfortune is brought about by “some error of judgement or frailty.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.125751720745657 and the wording score is -1.05037185557272.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fcfd02734f69 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory could inject spoiled meat with pickle, add even more pickle if it wasn't enough before, apply borax and glycerin, and mix newer meat with it. One example of these practices is in paragraph 3, where it says "it was only when the whole ham was spoiled that it came into the department of Elzbieta... mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0768775334910716 and the wording score is 0.586913893125279.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd092f32e1de for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tradgedy has to have a simple plot and end with the downfall of the main character in order to invoke the emotion of the audience. Another element is that the main character has to have his downfall because of his own judgement or error. If they die due to something natural or unavoidable, then it impacts the audience incorrectly. The main character must also be "renowned and prosperous" beforehand like Aristotle said mentioning Oedipus and Thyestes. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.17345348599337 and the wording score is 0.752157341963876.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd11844c5f20 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed very much over a short period of time because of the concept of being in such a great group was appealing to the students. The experiment was ended because students were becoming so loyal to the project that "it was slipping out of control".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd17a6626825 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave was able to develop so quickly over a short period of time because of a lack of individuality, as well as the desire to be a part of a larger group and serve a larger purpose. The students were reporting to Mr. Jones without being asked to do so and were eager to help with any Third Wave related tasks. They improved academically and disciplinarily to please Mr. Jones. They initiated new members and eventually increased their numbers to over 200. Mr. Jones did not anticipate that the movement would go as far as it did, so he had to terminate it to avoid it from spiraling out of control.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.3804608461254 and the wording score is 3.14613375120256.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd1eee475739 for prompt ebad26: 'Ways they would cover up the spoiled meat would be by chopping it up and using it for sausages, ham would be smoked, and insterting a white hot iron after taking out the bone, '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.09352270025638 and the wording score is -1.42199155877431.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd1f06b230eb for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would cover up spoiled meat using multiple methods. In the text, it says, "Jonas had told them how the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell." This shows how far they would go to cover up their antics.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.365607841229535 and the wording score is -0.591787701635864.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd23f49b5b0f for prompt ebad26: 'Some various ways they would use for chopping it up into sausages and the way they would cover it up is being shoveleved into carts. "This is no fairy story and no joke; the meat would be shoveled into carts, and the man who did the shoveling would not trouble to lift out a rat even when he saw one – there were things that went into the sausage in comparison with which a poisoned rat was a tidbit"(Sinckair 4).'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.296443085954169 and the wording score is -1.13345281520838.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd263c52d800 for prompt 3b9047: 'In the text "Egyptian Social Structure" by USHistory.org, it is talked about Egyptian society and government. As it states in the text "The pharaoh appointed a chief minister called a vizier as a supervisor." The vizier's job was to ensure that the taxes were collected. The vizier were high-level employees that had mastered the rare skill in ancient Egypt which is to read and write. The nobles and priests were also very important in ancient Egypt, the nobles were the only ones who could hold government posts. The priests had the job of pleasing the gods. The farmers and slaves were at the bottom of the list, as they did not have the same freedom as others. The top of the list is the pharaoh, the pharaoh had the most power in the government, they were believed to be gods in human form. In conclusion the article is about government in ancient Egypt and society.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.95829824088421 and the wording score is -0.216445075514208.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd272e43c4e0 for prompt ebad26: 'they would use the pickle to get the smell to go away. If the meat was bad the would take out the bone and letted it diffent. The would make up way rename to meal so people would buy it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd30a4215407 for prompt ebad26: 'The meat factories would often get spoiled meat and wouldn't care so they had to make ways to cover it up. They used to rub it with soda because it would help cover up the smell and then they would also put pickles into it to make it seem like it had a reason to taste sour. Another way was to make the ham boneless and then insert a hot iron. The text says "they would extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron. "'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.591007996470297 and the wording score is 0.919280332275892.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd3f139ec5d2 for prompt 3b9047: 'Egytian society was structured like a pyramid. Pharoahs were ranked at the top. Below the pharoahs were nobles and priests. Skilled workers such as physicians and craftsmen/women made up the middle class. At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd4a9d7adf4d for prompt 3b9047: 'On the top would be the pharoh or aka he ruler , then the government officials and priest then the soldiers , the the scribes then the merchsnt or traders then the peseants and farmers and on the very bottom would be slaves. They all lived very different lives and some were more fortunate than others. In the text it says "social mobility was not impossible. A small number of peasants and farmers moved up the economic ladder. Families saved money to send their sons to village schools to learn trades."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd4aed21ec64 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave started with jones telling the kids to do it then after that they came up with a motto and a catchy wave. Now once the kids did the motto and wave outside that lured the other kids to start because they don't want to be left out. this eventually leads to all of the kids looking like they support the nazi regime because they are doing the nazi wave. The expirimwnt finally ended because jones had enough information and told them it was an Experiment .'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd4e78db281c for prompt 3b9047: 'so at the top were the god and the gods controlled the universe. and nobles colud hold government posts. and craftsmem /women made up the middle class. chief minister called a vizier. and soldiers fough in wars or guelled.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.878888575477238 and the wording score is -0.966329824896367.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd521b9e29fc for prompt 814d6b: 'TThe Third Wave developed over a short period of time because the students that started in it began to salute each other and show pride in the group. This encouraged other students to want to be a part of something that seemed popular and powerful. The experiment was ended because the teacher began to lose control and the students were getting too serious about the rules and membership of the group.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.65903189155308 and the wording score is 2.34561539507719.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd54dc70e649 for prompt 39c16e: 'The character must be a man of commonality such that he is relatable, his downfall must be brought about by his own mistakes rather than vice, and the plot must be focused on the tragedy of his descent.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.842281449092654 and the wording score is -0.58125886755727.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd5874729486 for prompt 3b9047: 'Some nobles we're scribes who kept the records then came the preist who worshiped the gods then after that the chief vizier collected all the taxes and the pharaoh ruled them all'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997.

### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd58d92c8fab for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave was started as an experiment in one class and ended up spreading throughout the whole school because when one person does something everyone else tends to follow their actions. The teacher that started the experiment decided to end it because people were being discrimnated for not being apart of the movement.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0144705843843918 and the wording score is 1.13618542071748.