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### Human: Here is a summary written by student f65084b37333 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy should include the elements of fear and pity through the characters actions . The characters actions should not be clearly portraying hiw they went from success to tragey. Tragedies also definitely don't include someone going from adversity to prosperity. A second element of an ideal tragedy is the fortune not going from bad to good, but good to bad. The change in fortune comes from bad choices made by the haracter portrayed throughout the tragedy. A third element of a tragedy is an opposite catastrophe. This refers to the good and the bad of the story. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.531367778754094 and the wording score is 0.583991473066364. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f65ebcf180b2 for prompt 3b9047: 'Ancient Egyptian social structure was based on power. Gods and nobles were at the top, with absolute power, wealth, and protection over others. Soliders, merchants,artisans,traders, and craftsmen were middle class and made money. But lastly, were slaves and captured prisoners that were worked (they worked on architecture like pyrimids) and watched over by soliders. The text states," Egyptian society was structured like a pyramid." This goes to show how people with power were at the top, the highest part of a pyrimid, and the lesser people were at the bottom, the base of a pyrimid.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.814316930077083 and the wording score is 0.54016377748168. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f66df088e06b for prompt 3b9047: 'In the ancient times there where social classes the most power full ones where the gods and the lowest class where the slaves who usually work for the noles . Also you where not able to moved from your social class.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.248807738780381 and the wording score is 0.383460058821202. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6712f96b962 for prompt ebad26: 'They would put it in a can or chop it up into sausage, or if it smelled "sour, and how they owuld rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters"'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.09352270025638 and the wording score is -1.42199155877431. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6820ba74101 for prompt 3b9047: 'The government in Egypt are very important because. They work hard to make sure the village is in top shape.They're also in charge of the structures in Egypt and making sure everyone in the village is doing good.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.687287542029713 and the wording score is -0.460885992888853. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f69b0a98d29c for prompt 3b9047: 'the achient egyptian social structure was probably the most fair social structure women and slaves could move up in the structre meanwhile in greece or somthing women had to take care of kids and cook and slaves had to work and work.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6a05f0b4e6f for prompt 3b9047: ' Boys who learned to read and write could become scribes, then go on to gain employment in the government. It was possible for a boy born on a farm to work his way up into the higher ranks of the government.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6cbf10a77bf for prompt 814d6b: 'The people involved in the experiment thought they were more important that other student. The experiment ended because the people involved started to descriminate against the people who weren't.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.739905110427988 and the wording score is 0.0013115215410194. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6ccd8e80e01 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed very quickly because of rules and actions that were seen outside of the classroom. When Mr. Jones' started applying rules, it started simply by standing up to ask or answer a question. Soon actions from the experiment were taken outside of the classroom in front of other people. Mr. Jones started to give instructions that had to be followed outside of the class. He transformed the class to be more disciplined and more of a community by, "resembling that of the Nazi regime and ordered class members to salute each other even outside the class. They all obeyed this command." Other students must have been interested when only a certain amount of them was doing this secret salute. Other students saw this as an opportunity to feel included in the secret salute and everyone started to join. Once everyone wanted to join the movement got had gotten out of hand. There were over 200 participants that joined. Mr. Jones started to lose control after so many people joined. The students became so disciplined and loyal to the project the control started slipping away from Jones, and he had to put an end to it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 3.20924836058688 and the wording score is 2.55011210796677. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6daf534131c for prompt 814d6b: 'Jones wasn't aware that his experiment would be so large in the end, he didn't expect so much out of it. It started off simple and only a few people. However as a few days went by it went from 30 to 200 people in a quick amount of time. All of these people listened to Jones and did exactly what he said and they weren't exactly thinking much of it. When he introduced the salute signal non of the students said no to it and they all did it, "Jones made up a salute resembling that of the Nazi regime and ordered class members to salute each other even outside the class. They all obeyed this command." Clearly they replicated what occured with the Nazis without even knowing they were doing it. This shows how out of hand the experiemtn got and it could have gotten worse if it was continued. However Jones thought it was appropriate to end the experiment. This was because it proved his point of how people willingly create superitority and sometimes without even knowing which could lead to bad things. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.735203671612992 and the wording score is 2.34657646611789. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6dc11c93f50 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle describes a tragedy as something that should illustrates pity and fear. "Imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation." This quote shows that Aristotle believes that in order for something to be considered a tragedy, pityand fear should be a shown reaction. It should also shock us. "it merely shocks us." This is also a quote from Aristotle basically summaraizing that a tragedy should come as something shocking and unexpected. Lastly, a tragedy, according to Aristotle, should include some form of misfortune. "Misfortune, fear of misfortune of a man like ourselves." This quote describes how Aristotle beleives that a tragedy should also come as a misfortune. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.68673422024107 and the wording score is 1.12669946522438. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6ee41ef0860 for prompt 3b9047: 'The different social classes were involved with the government in many different ways. The slaves and farmers were less involved with the government because they were lower onb the social status. The higher you were on the social status the more involved you were involved with the government because you worked more with the government. Also, if you were born lower on the social status you could move up and be high on the social status meaning you were more involved with the government. The text states,¨It was possible for a boy born on a farm to work his way up into the higher ranks of the government.¨'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.610711026087142 and the wording score is 1.21634396029422. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6ee527cfd58 for prompt ebad26: 'There were many ways that a factory would cover up spoiled meat. They would cover it in soda or smoke it. They would also keep the smell in one room. These spoiled meats were sold separately as skinned hams or California hams. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.548304076980462 and the wording score is 0.506755353548534. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f6f47f4c583a for prompt ebad26: '"They would rub it up with soda to take away the smell"(para 2 Sinclair). Since meats smells bad when it rots, they would take away the smell and still sell even with it being rotten. " now they would extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron. they had what they called “boneless hams,” Even though the bone had most of the bad, they could have still left some out which is very unsanitary and harmful to the consumers. The workers would even dye the food the color they should be to make it look more healthier. " what was cut up for sausage; there would come all the way back from Europe old sausage that had been rejected, and that was moldy and white – it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption"(para 3 Sinclair.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.24176851253721 and the wording score is 0.252667912501246. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7049a4b51d7 for prompt ebad26: 'in this case they wanted to sell all the meet, no matter what. They came with ideas for saving old meet like rub it with soda and sell it in places where it can be more cheaper. another way was that they choose the color, the flavor, and how it will be by a machine in which they save time ad increased the capacity, this is explained in the second parragrafe. later finally someone find a more ingenious way and they decided to take of the bond from the meat so it will last more time. they called the diferent tipes of meat by diferent nombers, for example, "boneless hams", " california hamns", " skinned hams" and head cheese". '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.905665047952546 and the wording score is -0.0091077501105194. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f70dee1b8334 for prompt 39c16e: 'The tragedy should be complex. It should have tragedy woven into the plot and be relatable to the audience. It should cause pity and fear that it could happen to the audience. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.558482569038143 and the wording score is -0.667262247251845. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f713ad614fd5 for prompt 814d6b: 'The reason it grew so quickly was because the students had already improved a lot so other people wanted to join in on the improvement.On the fourth day of the expirement Jones deceided to get rid of the movement because it was slipping out of his control.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f715ea2e7c98 for prompt ebad26: 'The workers used every part of the animal. They did whatever they had to do to make money. They let no meat go to waste no matter if it was dirty, rotten, etc. For example, "These rats were nuisances, and the packers would put poisoned bread out for them; they would die, and then rats, bread, and meat would go into the hoppers together. "'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f71b52c35c87 for prompt 39c16e: 'It should be a complex plan. It should have pity and fear. It should be well constructed. It should be for comedy. It shouldn't hurt people by them dying '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.31683163386317 and the wording score is -1.0428750039801. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f71cbbba26a4 for prompt 39c16e: 'The first essential to creating a good tragedy is that it should maintain unity of plot. ... This means that the plot must move from beginning to end according to a tightly organized sequence of necessary or probable events.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f734f7ad9971 for prompt ebad26: 'In paragraph two it says that they would often have meat that would be found sour so they would rub it with soda to take away the smell and sell it to be eaten. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f739e2908d61 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of a tragedy described by Aristotle is a complex and well-developed plot, which includes the ideas of pity and fear and shocks the reader. Another element of an ideal tragedy is the idea of misfortune and undeserving actions happening to a hero or good person. This allows the reader and other characters to pity the character undergoing the tragedy. The last factor of an ideal tragedy described by Aristotle is that the character is neither an amazing perfect man or a villain. Aristotle highlights the fact that even the best man has imperfections, and these imperfections may lead to misfortune or a tragic event. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.71867210926929 and the wording score is 2.68090425428672. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f742c9d8bf59 for prompt 39c16e: 'A tragedy should invoke pity or fear. A tragedy should not include story from riches to rags as apparantly it shocks the audience (his words not mine) and a tragedy should (before the tragedy happens) should be able to connect with the character.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.365607841229535 and the wording score is -0.591787701635864. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f75457f51aaa for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient Egyptians goverment system was that of social ranking, Pharaoh's were in the highest class because they were seen as "gods in human form" and there for all ancient Egyptians feared the pharao would bring distruction to their socitiy if he was upset. Craftsmen/woman were of middle class for there ability to make items to sell or give to the "god" that ruled over the Egyptians. Farmers where the lowest class in socitiy with them being out in the country they would be the hardest workers in ancient Egypt and where the most taxed people of ancent egyptian times.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.22108883316715 and the wording score is 2.26907021599346. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f75bbab16ee9 for prompt ebad26: 'They would put borax and chemicals on moldy sausage, mislabel things that were really just tough or spoilt meat, mix together spoiled meat, or even just can the spoiled meat '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f75c2ab601cd for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use spoiled meat to fill sausages and to preserve it, they rubbed chemicals onto it. In paragraph one they say "Whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage." '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.221105410092397 and the wording score is -0.835455871031613. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f75c31859d3d for prompt 3b9047: 'The different social classes were involved in the government because there was 3 classes. At the top, there was the Gods named Ra, Osiris, and Isis.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.40817975173863 and the wording score is -0.4936034763879. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f75d933514e6 for prompt 39c16e: '3 elements of an ideal tragedy according to Aristotle are that the resulting tragedy shouldn't be brought by bad actions, but by some error of weakness. It shouldn't resemble a hero falling from power, or a villain getting his comeuppance, but a simple and successful man from between those extremes, who makes an error in his judgement and fails, a person like the tragic Greek kings of old. Lastly, the plot should follow a single path, the transition should not be from bad to good, but rather good to bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.40779064038936 and the wording score is 1.50488270386015. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f77ae6b3b08b for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle says that an ideal tragedy should copy actions that insight pity and fear. He also says that it should include a man who is neither good nor bad and experiences misfortune because of a mistake. He explains that the change of fortune should be from good to bad for it to be an ideal tragedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0888824040334871 and the wording score is -0.594710121694779. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7858faa8d7f for prompt ebad26: 'The factory used a number of dangerous and disgusting ways to use or cover up spoiled meat. One disgusting and dangerous method they used for using spoiled meat was to simply cut it up and can it without even treating it. "For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage" (Paragraph 1). Another example of a disgusting and dangerous way the factory would use spoiled meat was to leave dead rats on the meat as the meat would go into the hoppers. "Rats, bread, and meat would go into the hoppers together" (Paragraph 4).'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.04987634762863 and the wording score is 1.67304857275766. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f78b7c46d20a for prompt ebad26: 'Meat factory workers would prepare rotten and diseased meat with better meats. Many of these meats would be minced and turned into sausage. Workers in meat processing plants would replace old and diseased meat with healthier cuts.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.248807738780381 and the wording score is 0.383460058821202. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f79073833ab8 for prompt 3b9047: 'The social structure was like a pyramid, more people were lower class and less people were higher class. It was not impossible to move up the pyramid, but it would take alot of hard work. The main classes were, pharoahs,priests,nobles,artisans,physicians,craftsmen,farmers,POW's, and slaves (Listed in descending order based on social status).'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.157459620904918 and the wording score is -0.165811468770997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7a73ad291cb for prompt ebad26: 'the various way that the factory use to cover up the spoiled meat was choping them up anf turn them into sausage. in the it state that, " For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.520601748292477 and the wording score is -0.712160576304281. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7b5d602b4bd for prompt 39c16e: 'The first element of a tragady mentioned by Aristotle is there should be a complex plan. The second element is there should be a single issue. Lastly the change of fortune should be from good to bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7c11bc1e2e1 for prompt 39c16e: 'As Aristotle described to get an ideal tragedy you have to make it to where people can view it on a more complex level that makes them feel frightened or commiseration. To make it even better have a specific plot that doesn't bounce off too new ideas, It should always start good and a bad ending. Lastly, try pleasing the audience more so they can feel what's happening during the catastrophe whether its good or bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7c5ba115c61 for prompt 3b9047: 'In their eyes different classes had different jobs and if you didn't do the job or do the job correctly they're would be servre consenquences such as getting brutaly beated or killed and they treated their pharoh leaders like gods so they did many many responsibilities in paragraph 3 it said "The pharaohs directed the army in case of a foreign threat or an internal conflict All laws were enacted at the discretion of the pharaoh. Each farmer paid taxes in the form of grains, which were stored in the pharaoh’s warehouse." This shows that if you disobeyed the pharoh you would most likely be killed'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.237390406641902 and the wording score is -0.504022748039439. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7ccfda36416 for prompt 814d6b: 'It developed so fast due to the students who spread it to their friends, it also probably was easily spread because it made the students feel like they were apart of something bigger. But eventually the experiment was ended due to how exstreme the students had become about it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.153454049433642 and the wording score is 0.168544074280091. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7d173be520f for prompt ebad26: 'One of the various ways the factory covered up spoiled meat were that they used chemicals to "give to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose." Another way that they covered up spoiled meat was that they used "a machine consisting of a hollow needle attached to a pump" and "by plunging this needle into the meat and working with his foot, a man could fill a ham with pickle in a few seconds." A third way that the factory covered up spoiled meat was that they preserved the meat by covering "it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it brown."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.07635641316106 and the wording score is 0.0739732095251406. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7deb59c52a7 for prompt ebad26: 'One method of covering up the fact that their meat had spoiled, the factory would rub it in soda. In paragraph 2 the author states, "Jonas had told them how the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell..." After their attempts to preserve it through pickling they just rubbed it in soil to cover up the rancide smell. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7e34d8cb38a for prompt 39c16e: 'the 3 elements of a ideal tragedy should be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan. immatate actions and be distinctive to mark of tragic imatation'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.09352270025638 and the wording score is -1.42199155877431. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7e9217a6e5b for prompt ebad26: 'In the second paragraph, they state all of the ways that they cover up spoiled meat. they would rub it with soda, covered it in chemicals, extracted the bone, and insert a white-hot iron, stuffed odds, and ends into casings to create a boneless "ham"'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.750933331217191 and the wording score is -1.13053039514947. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7f0a15c2e25 for prompt 3b9047: 'At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers. Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests. the pharaoh are at the top.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.973392536092455 and the wording score is -0.793589524465147. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7f3a6972199 for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of ancient Egyptian government filled in with the higher classes of the social pyramid. This is the case because nobles and pharaohs are high-powered government officials that also happen to be at very similar places in the government system. Pharaohs at the top and nobles leading down depending on their importance.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7f4f3c15aee for prompt 39c16e: 'An element of an ideal tragedy would be to excite pity and fear in the audience. The change of fortune, in an ideal tragedy, would go from good to bad. They usually involve characters who have done or suffered something terrible. Lastly, tragedies should be a complex plan with a well-constructed plot. They need to take the audience on an emotional journey.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f7fa2f3686e4 for prompt 39c16e: 'Imitate actions that excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation. Founded on the story of a few houses — on the fortunes of Alcmaeon, Oedipus, Orestes, Meleager, Thyestes, Telephus, and those others who have done or suffered something terrible. double thread of plot, and also an opposite catastrophe for the good and for the bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.2476668785878 and the wording score is -1.58454011755262. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f804fcdcd786 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave developed pretty fast when students started getting more of an understanding about democracy. The experiment took off fairly fast with the students when more people started getting involved with it and reporting to Mr. Ron. He soon had to let the student know it was an experiment when students started thinking more highly of themselves. He soon realized the students had taken this third wave to a certain extent where they thought of themselves as supirior and other students started joining in. He soon explained that he had to end it because of how people willingly create a sense of supiriority over others. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.14575115730538 and the wording score is 1.97107327181669. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8051a40d210 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed and grew over such a short time because of the sense of strength and superiority it gave the students. The students believed that this high level of discipline made them appear supreme to other students. Eventually other students joined in "The Third Wave" to also feel this sense of superiority. He ended it because it got out of control and students were becoming too involved and absorbed into the experiment.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.04865408447307 and the wording score is 1.29288913937796. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f806d9dd7ac7 for prompt 814d6b: 'Since people think that the third wave is better, everyone started to follow them on what they were doing. Also, since everything they were doing was going more than a day more people joined. The experiment had to end because Jones didn't want them to get too powerful because then something can happen and you don't want to repeat history.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f80b56f6e294 for prompt 3b9047: 'At the top of the social structure were gods, " At the top were the gods, such as Ra, Osiris, and Isis" (Para 1). Next was pharaohs, "Right below the pharaoh in status"(para 6). After pharaohs were nobles and priests, "Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests"( para 6) Next was middle class, in the middle class there were people like physicians, "Skilled workers such as physicians and craftsmen/women made up the middle class."(para 9). and at the bottom were slaves, "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers."(para 11).'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f80f99da7d8b for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient egyptian system of government was very based around god. they worshipped pharaohs and put them at the top of the social class, because they thought pharaohs were their god. "After pharaohs died, huge stone pyramids were built as their tombs. Pharaohs were buried in chambers within the pyramid". They thought pharaohs wer gods in human form, leading pharaohs to have complete power power over the people that worshipped. Other social classes, like viziers, were also important in the social class. they were responsible for taxes, "the vizier ensured texts were collected." they were the supervisor of the pharoah. Viziers were the second highest social class, being only behind pharaohs. after viziers and pharaohs, came scribes, who worked with viziers. they kept government records. They kept government records, and they had a rare skill that most people in ancient egypt didnt, they could read and write. "Working with the vizier were scribes who kept government records. These high-level employees had mastered a rare skill in ancient egypt-they could read and write." Right below pharaohs, were the nobles and priests. Only nobles could hold government posts. with this position, they profited from tributes that were paid to the pharaoh. Priests were in charge for pleasing the gods. Nobles enjoyed their great status and became rich from donations to the gods. all egyptians-from pharaohs to farmers-gave gifts to the gods. this lead to the nobles and priests profiting from the donations.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.11329214794715 and the wording score is -0.0960722008457905. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f80fdb12065e for prompt ebad26: ' The meat factory worked in unsanitary conditions and altered meat to cover up its spoiledness in order to fool the public and make profit. One of the ways the factory covered up the meat was by injecting chemicals that would change the smell, taste, and look of it. According to the text, "...how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any soft of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any ordor they chose" (Sinclair 2). Baking soda would be used on the meat to eliminate the terrible odor of the spoiled meat. The factory would also inject a pickle which would eliminate the smell of the hams as well. The author states, "To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor- a process known to the workers as 'giving them thirty-percent' " (Sinclair 3). A needle filled with stronger pickle, compared to the pickle they used on freshmeat, would be injected to the ham. The text states, "Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions-a-minute-flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference." Spoiled ham would also be mixed in with fresh meat in order to trick the public into thinking they woere only purchasing fresh meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.92229363779261 and the wording score is 2.25958426050036. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f81621f273f0 for prompt 39c16e: 'An Ideal tragedy creates a feeling of pity and fear, includes a well constructed plot, and has a specific origin. Creating a feeling of pity and fear through the story's tragic events and qualities makes the tragedy. The story has to be more than just shocking to the viewers or readers. A well constructed plot includes one issue, a change of fortune from good to bad, a large mistake and a tragic and dramatic ending. Finally, an ideal tragedy has a specific origin. The big founding stories are those from Alcmaeon, Oedipus, Orestes, Meleager, Thyestes, Telephus. The tragedy can also be originated from ayone who suffered from or experienced something tragic. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.57968864422004 and the wording score is 1.71326290784933. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f824191aceec for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle says the perfect tradegy should be complex not simple. some tradegy's he discribed were- the shock of a good man is brought from prosperity to adversity, a bad man who makes it good because there is no tragic, a villain who is brought to punishment'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.670740355152621 and the wording score is -0.5403535920315. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f828010b8a63 for prompt 39c16e: 'that the public is identified with the character since in this way they will feel an emotional attachment, that a bundle of emotions is handled where it always has haughty and that there is a double plot where the positive and the negative are not known
'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.921624696425702 and the wording score is -1.21361135478513. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f832a8f11197 for prompt ebad26: 'The Factory would use various ways to cover up spoiled meat. One of the ways they would cover it up is by chopping it up into sausage. The narrator says, "For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage. " (Sinclair 1). Another way the factory would cover up the spoild meat was, "the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell..." (Sinclair 2). Jonas, a person who had worked in the factory told them they would do this instead of throwing the meat away. The factory would also cut up the moldy meat, meat dropped on the floor, rats, and other going bad foods, put them into the hoppers and made over again to sell. Finally, the narrator says, "Some of it they would make into "smoked" sausage – but as the smoking took time, and was therefore expensive, they would call upon their chemistry department, and preserve it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it brown. All of their sausage came out of the same bowl, but when they came to wrap it they would stamp some of it "special," and for this they would charge two cents more a pound." The factory would mix everything together and sell for a higher price, tricking the people into beleiveing that it was a higher ranked meat. This is all of the ways that the factory would cover up the spoiled meat. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.66402973731096 and the wording score is 0.62136519564392. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f832f992df2b for prompt 3b9047: 'Pharoah is highest in the social structure. Everyone thinks he is a god. Next come the priests and noblemen; they collect taxes and run the money. Then in the social structure come the craftsmen who make and build material that society needs. Below the craftsmen are the farmers and slaves. The slaves were usually captured prisoners of war. The farmers had to pay the government 60% of their profit each year. It was not impossible to get out of your social structure.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.264116085576674 and the wording score is 0.590527253618292. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8423dd35f9b for prompt 3b9047: 'The Ancient Egyptian Social Pyramid has social groups such as the pharaoh, vizier, high priests and nobles, priests, engineers, doctors, scribes, craftsmen, slaves and farmers. "Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form. They had absolute power over their subjects." This is an example of the invovlement in the government. Pharaoh had power over their own subject, and also were buried in chambers within the pyramids.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f84390533c74 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave was able to develop so quickly since people love to jump onto the ship where there is a strong leader. And once there's a small group going, the group becomes large and quicker over time. This is what the experiment was trying to test. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8452ffa3291 for prompt ebad26: ' Ways you can use,cover meat is like they choped up the spoiled meat and but it in sausage then im pretty sure people wont realize it "whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage." that is my eveidence'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.62764732431351 and the wording score is -0.125597133679325. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8563157e013 for prompt 3b9047: 'Both Egyptain and nobles where responsible for pleasing the gods and that the taxes will get collected.No single person could manage all these duties without assistance. The pharaoh appointed a chief minister called a vizier'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.40817975173863 and the wording score is -0.4936034763879. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f859a717dfaf for prompt 3b9047: 'The slaves in Egypt basicially woshiped the higer class people, only because they were higher class. In the text it states, "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers." In conclusion, the slaves and farmers worshiped the higher class people.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.643344782459079 and the wording score is -0.0883052186465683. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f85ab102d845 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory didn't really seem to care in the passage it says that old sausage that had been rejected would be dosed with borax and glycerin and dumped into the hoppers to be made over again for home consumption. Also the man who would fo all the shoveling had no trouble lifting out a rat. It was a very unsanitized factory the workers there didn't even have no place to wash their hands before they ate.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.297956480570781 and the wording score is 0.41221224367584. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f86804fd539a for prompt 39c16e: 'The three elements of an ideal tragedy are having a complex but well-constructed plot, a change in fortune from good to bad, and end in an unhappy ending. The character the tragedy is happening to should have a good life at the beginning but at the end should be terrible - good fortune to bad fortune. The plot should have actions of fear and pity along with having the main character rich and powerful to start off. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f86fb99008a6 for prompt 3b9047: 'there was a lot of different social classes in the ancient egyptian system such as vizers pharors and famines for example in paragrah 4 it states that ( No single person could manage all these duties without assistance. The pharaoh appointed a chief minister called a vizieras a supervisor. The vizier ensured that taxes were collected.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.07261303201737 and the wording score is -0.999628686402458. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f881a4095fdf for prompt ebad26: 'whenever meat was spoiled they would chop it up into sausage. whenever the meat came out of the pickle with a sour smell they would rub it with soda to take the smell away and only sell it on free lunch counters. The meat that was rejected from Europe which was always white and moldy would be dosed with borax and glycerin, dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.467721989566616 and the wording score is -0.0856529291942516. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f884d0bd1c59 for prompt ebad26: 'The workers used vinegar, and other things to help change the smeel or shape of the meat to make it seemed unspoiled. They could rub it with soda to get rid of the smell or invent new and different "types" of meat to get away with sanitation problems. sinclair wrote, "there would be hams found spoiled, some of them with an odor so bad that a man could hardly bear to be in the room with them. To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor" (Sinclair 2.). The packing companies would go outof way to make sure nothing was ever "spoiled".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.814316930077083 and the wording score is 0.54016377748168. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f89859077b83 for prompt 3b9047: 'They were involved in the government because the pharaohs were considered gods. Pharaohs is the leader, that works hard, they had to take of Egypt. When they died they had a huge tomb for their bodies. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.61194986616794 and the wording score is -0.162889048712082. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8a284def0f2 for prompt 3b9047: 'Different social classes were involved with the goverment because they had complete control over it. The passage states,"Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests. Only nobles could hold goverments posts." The pharaohs were at the top of the social class and below them were less powerful jobs. At the bottom were farmers and slaves that were captured or in dept. The Chain Of Commands states," working with the vizer were scribes who kept goverment records." This states that even the most richest-powerful people still worked for the goverment unless its a god or a pharaoh. As stated, the goverment had the most power and control over the social class.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.830014388222652 and the wording score is 0.502871862448923. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8b1d1198158 for prompt 39c16e: ' A perfect tragedy should be arranged on the complex plan, meaning it shouldn't be too simple of a story. Also, it should cause actions which include pity and fear, since this is the main response of tragedies. An ideal tragedy shall have a well-constructed plot, which should be single rather than double. This means that the fortune should go from good to bad, since it is called a tragedy for a reason.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8c92d62a680 for prompt 3b9047: ' The different social classes were involved because they all have a part to play a vital role for the government.In the article it states¨At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers. Slavery became the fate of those captured as prisoners of war. In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles.¨'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.388378742233568 and the wording score is -0.718005416422111. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8ce87c39761 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy should have a complex plot that evokes pity and fear from its audience. This would mean that a tragedy must not show a bad man under misfortune (because a bad man deserves it) and not a good man under misfortune (because it is unpleasant). Thus, the plot should also maintain unity with its focus on a single issue, where a change of fortune goes from good to bad. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8d025d35f71 for prompt 3b9047: 'Ancient Egypt had three main social classes, upper, middle and lower. The upper class is for the rich and wealthy. The people in the lower or middle class could move to a higher position.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.564001535126031 and the wording score is 0.544047268581291. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8df96617e72 for prompt ebad26: '"It was only when the whole ham was spoiled that it came into the department of Elzbieta. Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference." Shows an example of them covering up spoiled meat. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.58024196600868 and the wording score is -1.04744943551381. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8f00676027e for prompt ebad26: ' The disgusting industry would use every piece of the pig to make money and they would not care for the quality of the meat, such as if the meat was spolied they would simply chop it up into sausages and sell it as stated in paragraph '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.746927759745915 and the wording score is -0.796174852098381. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8f9158d2d89 for prompt 39c16e: 'The three ways that make an ideal tragedy is that it has characters someone can relate to, the characters must be neutral and fall from grace, and it should be complex rather than simple.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.921624696425702 and the wording score is -1.21361135478513. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f8fff9642867 for prompt 3b9047: 'Slaves and farmers were at the bottom of the social stucture they did all the hard labor. Next were the Soliers and middle class people, who fought in war and were craftsmen/women and physicians. then there stood the nobles and priests. Nobles were the the pharaoh's assistants they held postd porfited from tributes and paid the pharaohand priests were pleased the gods. And second from the top of the social system is the appointed pharaoh helped amage all the duties of the chief mimister. And finally at the top of the social system is the cheif minister, they were the main rulers and were seeen as gods.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.440019660878631 and the wording score is 1.13326300065856. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f906b5407400 for prompt ebad26: 'A way the facotry would use or cover up spoiled meat would be to pickle it. In the text it says," To pump into these the packers has a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor- a process known to the workers as "giving them thirty per cent"( Sinclair 2). This would mask the odor and allow for the food to be sold. The workers just did their job so no matter whar if the meat was spoiled they had this way and others to cover it up. All in all, the main way the factory would cover up spoiled meat would be to pickle it and act like its normal. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.402562805762525 and the wording score is 0.790367727429356. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f908d94d764b for prompt ebad26: ' If the meat was moldy and white, it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers and made over again for home consumption. There was meat on the floor that had dirt, sawdust, workers tramped and spit germs on it and the rats would be all over it, they would poision the rats and the rats, posioned bread and meat would got in together.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.200552651744029 and the wording score is -0.580567927123172. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9123ca54780 for prompt 3b9047: 'The social structre went gods at the very next under them where pharaohs who where belived to be gods that lived amongs them. Below them were nobles and priest, nobles could hold goverment posts and priest whomst was reaspondsible for pleasing the gods. Under them where the skilled workers some examples are physicians and craftsmen. At the very bottom of the social structure was the farmers who made crops and raised animals for the socitiy and slaves who did all the physical labor. however unlike most social structures it was possible to move up in the socitity.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.78208790958781 and the wording score is 0.911783480683268. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f91725be2379 for prompt 39c16e: 'The first element is perfect tragedy and it is when a man goes from prosperity to adversit. The second elment is a well developed plot that has a tragedy. The third element it second class tragedy. It has more of a comedic ending than a perfect tragedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.0888824040334871 and the wording score is -0.594710121694779. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f91c0bf770a4 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave experiment started as a way for students to gain more understanding of historical movements in the past, like the Nazis. It started out by implementing simple but strict rules in the classroom. By the end of the first week, students liked being part of an exclusive group. Jones, the teacher and leader of the experiment, added a hand gesture, similar to the Nazi solute, and advised the students to greet each other with the geture, even outside of class (Paragraph 2). The experiment grew, with more and more participants, with the students' disipline growing as well. Jones ended the experiment because it was getting out of control. He told all the students that he had been trying to teach them how easily they could be pursuaded into joining a group that promoted higher status. The experiment worked because often, when people join a group, it is because they want power and believe that they are superior to others.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.92544948053237 and the wording score is 2.63611548766134. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f94176adc6bf for prompt ebad26: 'The factories would cover the bad meat in pickles. When they took it out of the pickles they would rub it with soda to get rid of the smell so that the factory could sell it so it could be eaten on free lunch counters. Factories would also put a needle in the meat and pump it with pickle. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.157459620904918 and the wording score is -0.165811468770997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f94535567be6 for prompt 3b9047: 'The system of the ancient Egyptian system of government was mostly able to read . The social classes involed in the goverment was if you were able to read and write . IN the text it says ,"a born boy in a farm can work the goverment if they could read and write" This is important because you needed to read and write to join.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f94a0ef64b3d for prompt 39c16e: 'One key element of an ideal tragedy is the main character has to be of higher authority, such as a prince or a king, because of this the audience will feel more pity for when the other key element of a tragedy, downfall, happens to them. When the down fall occurs the audience will have a bigger reaction to it. The last key element on an ideal tragedy is the resolution of the play, which could be either a happy or unhappy ending. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.285025753815689 and the wording score is 1.01289012599015. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f968b665bb56 for prompt 3b9047: 'the eygypt system was really tough especially being a slave t was super hard to be a slav because you had no power what so ever.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f968e92229ee for prompt ebad26: 'They wanted to be able to use everything that they had to make more money so they would do different things to keep the meat good. One of the things that they would do was put the meat into pickle juice and that would make it fine to eat. In the first and second paragraphs, it talks about how they took the meat out of the juice and if it was sour they would rub it with soda to get rid of the smell. In conclusion, they would do whatever they could to sell more of their products.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.782609029917822 and the wording score is 1.42472416428341. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f973e7b996df for prompt 3b9047: 'Social mobility16 was not impossible. A small number of peasants and farmers moved up the economic ladder. Families saved money to send their sons to village schools to learn trades.17 These schools were run by priests or by artisans.18 Boys who learned to read and write could become scribes, then go on to gain employment in the government. It was possible for a boy born on a farm to work his way up into the higher ranks of the government. Bureaucracy19 proved lucrative.20'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f97523be1fb1 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle would concur generally as I would like to think. In spite of the fact that this thought of misfortune zeroed in on a greater amount of what the crowd gets from the closure as opposed to the character gets. He says the crowd should have sympathy and dread dependent on the character.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.936785409707871 and the wording score is -0.408518567126049. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f97545c9849a for prompt 3b9047: 'The Pharaoh was the leader of the government. The Pharaoh would appoint a vizier, who would help the Pharaoh and collect the taxes. Only nobles could hold other government positions.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.14493363003249 and the wording score is -0.834494799990917. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f975d68cdce2 for prompt 39c16e: 'As described in the text "A perfect tragfedy should, as we have seen, arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan". Another tradegy would " a virtous man brought prosperity to adversity: for this moves neither pity nor fear; it". And at last another form of tradegy would be"one who is highly renbowned and prosperous-a personage like Oedipus,Thyestes or orther illustrious men of such families".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.217687377025056 and the wording score is -0.801086376057771. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f978d3fc79b9 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would mix the good and the bad together so they could sell it. In the text it stated, "With what had been told them by Jonas, who had worked in the pickle rooms, they could now study the whole of the spoiled-meat industry on the inside, and read a new and grim". This quotes shows that they mixed the spoil meat and good meat together. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f97c10249bb4 for prompt 39c16e: 'A tragedy should include a downful of a man who is not extremly good and not extrememly bad. It should shock the audience. A tragedy should also have a single issue and a well constructed issue as well. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f97dded8b0f5 for prompt 39c16e: 'The character should go from good to bad luck. The tragedy should show the character with good luck to ending in bad luck. A good tragedy will have a single plot. The plot should focus on one main thing not a multitude of minor plots. A good plot will not have an opposite catastrophe for the good and bad. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.248807738780381 and the wording score is 0.383460058821202. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f97fc63ac1e3 for prompt ebad26: 'Certain ways the industry would hide or rid the smell of spoiled meat is too for one rub such meat in soda to rid the smell. Such as"meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell". One other main way they cover up the spoiled meat is they cut up tons of meat mix the spoiled meat in and no odor is traced of the spoiled. For example,"Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat, no odor that ever was in a ham could make any difference".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.702059143962605 and the wording score is 0.667072432702024. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f984771d6a5e for prompt ebad26: 'In the factory to cover up spoiled meat, the workers would put cleaning product in the meat mixer and color it with gelatin and make it brown, According to paragraph 5 it states the "they would call their chemistry department, and preserve it with borax and color it the gelatin to make it brown." Also, they would lie about what the meat was actually called for example they put a hot white iron into the pig with bones and they would use old hogs.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.531367778754094 and the wording score is 0.583991473066364. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9900a85f4ad for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would cover up spoiled meat by, " whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage." (paragraph 1) The factory would also chemically change the meat to look and taste better, "all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose. " (paragraph 2)'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.467721989566616 and the wording score is -0.0856529291942516. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9906eb38fac for prompt 3b9047: 'The lower classes would be like slaves and farmers. The middle class was like regular freemen. Upper class was preists, artisans, and/or kings. You could move your class up or down on the scale. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.798338689522021 and the wording score is -0.208678093314985. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f991d1e108cc for prompt ebad26: 'One of the way they would cover up spoiled meat is by rubbing it with soda to get rid of the smell. In paragraph 2, it explains that soda is used to cover up the smell and they also use chemicals to give the meat a fresher look and taste, when in reality it is still spoiled. Paragraph 1 also explains that they chop up the meat and mix it in with the sausages since sausages are not really one part of an animals, its multiple different meats combined in one. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.344665971531891 and the wording score is 1.34817898519967. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f99e9e55e03f for prompt 3b9047: ' The structure for the ancient egyptian system is tombs for the dead in ancient egypt was in a pyramid, and depending on your class that's where the body's would be buried. At the top of the pyramid was the pharohs who were the highest of class all the way to the bottom where the slaves were burried. Without part of the pyramid the pyramid wouldn't be complete and without one of the classes in there society part of the society would be incomplete.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.890893446019654 and the wording score is 0.215294189923691. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f9a51c73c80c for prompt ebad26: 'The meat was covered by being shoveled into a cart. The meat was stored in great piles in rooms. In paragraph 4 it states that " the meat would be shoveled into carts, and the man who did the shoveling would not trouble to lift out a rat even when he saw one – there were things that went into the sausage in comparison with which a poisoned rat was a tidbit". That was the only way they covered up the meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.388378742233568 and the wording score is -0.718005416422111. |