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### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd640cb87dea for prompt 3b9047: 'The government taxed farmers wich was equel to 60% of thier yearly harvest. The farmers taxes were paid in the form of grain. The pharoah also directed the armies in case of any attackers came to attack them.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.16183772680023 and the wording score is -0.922502129311683. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd73a4c28843 for prompt 3b9047: 'at the very bottom of the egyptian system of government was slaves and farmers, the slaves were prisoners of war and as the text states ´´In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles.´´ on the other hand, farmers simpily raised animals. Kept the reserviours in good order and grew crops. Farmers also payed taxes in the form of grain to the pharoh that would contribute to if there ever was a famine, next were the peasants. They were just normal citizens that were under the rule of the pharoh. A bit more up the ladder was Soldiers. In the text it states ´´Soldiers fought in wars or quelled domestic uprisings. During long periods of peace, soldiers also supervised the peasants, farmers, and slaves who were involved in building such structures as pyramids and palaces.´´ now all the high ranking persons come next. Next were viziers. they were the pharohs cheif minister and worked as a supervisor. the vizier ensured the taxes were collected. Powerful nobles and Preists were right below the Pharoah in status. Only the Nobles could hold government posts, the Priests were responcible with pleasing the gods nobles were very wealthy from all the donations to the gods. All egyptians. yes, even the pharoahs gave gifts to the gods, lastly is the pharoah. they were the ruler and seen as a god. pharoahs were beleived to be gods in human form and were therefore worshiped. being at the very tip of the social hiarchy the pharoah was in control and nobody could subdue them. once the pharoah passed. huge pyramid like temples were made in rememberance and the pharoah was buried deep inside the pyramid '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.53522476431939 and the wording score is 0.827741450006912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd79b89a56c4 for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient Egyptian system of government is well organized. Different social classes were involved in this government because they all had to pay taxes. "Each farmer paid taxes in the form of grains, which were stored in the pharaoh’s warehouses. This grain was used to feed the people in the event of a famine."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd817041862f for prompt 814d6b: 'The third wave was a experiment by a teach on his students to see if they could be brainwashed to believe one is supirior to others. This experiment was also conducted so he could teach his students What was happening to them so they can learn from mistakes, and the reason it was ended was because of angry parents.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.734692900334543 and the wording score is 0.460966308945631. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd88473b59a2 for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient Egyptian system of government is like a pyramid. In the social pyramid of ancient Egypt the pharaoh and those associated with divinity were at the top, and servants and slaves made up the bottom. The Egyptians also elevated some human beings to gods. Their leaders, called pharaohs, were believed to be gods in human form.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.467721989566616 and the wording score is -0.0856529291942516. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd8e62ca27c1 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three tragedies should have niether a good or bad character but, there life falls apart from unluck. Also a tragedy should have a plot that goes from goo to bad. The last thing a tragedy should have is a plot that doesn't really have an ending but serves as a comedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0772666448403481 and the wording score is 0.424365334346972. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fd98f1e5d880 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of a tradgedy is that it should have a complex plot. It should make you feel pity for the main character and also scared for them. The main character should feel relatable in order to have pity toward them.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.456955959104999 and the wording score is -0.0425161740436652. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fda3c3fcff63 for prompt ebad26: 'to cover up the smell of spoiled meat they would rub it with soda. "The meat that was taken out of pickle would often be sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell." After they did that they would sell it to people to be eaten.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.365607841229535 and the wording score is -0.591787701635864. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fdbf54ef9222 for prompt ebad26: 'The factories used many methods to hide spoiled meat like rubbing baking soda on it "how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters" (Paragraph 2) Another way they hid the fact it was spoiled was by using chemicals. "it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption" (Paragragh 2). Another way they hid the fact it was spoiled was by filling the spoiled meat with more none spoiled meat "by plunging this needle into the meat and working with his foot, a man could fill a ham with pickle in a few seconds" (Paragraph 2) This quote shows they hid the fact meat was spoiled by putting more meat inside the spoiled meat. These are just three ways they hid the fact the meat was spoiled. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.08158424778789 and the wording score is 0.788488185955936. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fdc96dd9b05a for prompt 39c16e: 'For a tragedy to be any good, the story needs to be complex and inspire fear or pity within the reader. This is important because without these things the play feels uninspired, or dull.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.301962052042057 and the wording score is 0.0778567006247517. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fdcb75596edd for prompt ebad26: 'One of the ways that the factory would cover up spoiled meat was to use chemincals to mask the smell and to then incorporate that meat with other meats. "The meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose." (1). With this, they could sell any meat they wanted without it going to waste. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.618710325158282 and the wording score is -0.299635597576923. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fdd5cbe849f4 for prompt 39c16e: 'Ideal tragedies feature: 1. a main character who is not good or bad, 2. have one single issue that goes from good to bad, and 3. relate closely to a comedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fdd950c2406f for prompt ebad26: 'One way they would cover up spoiled meat was by cutting it up and putting it in sausage. "For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage." Also if ham was spoiled, they would just put it into other meats. They over all just treated the meat very poorly by letting it roll on the floor, letting mice run over it, and being very unsanitary. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.388378742233568 and the wording score is -0.718005416422111. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fde9026e86c5 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would have combined spoiled meat with other, more fresh meat and package them together. They would also remove the odors that are in the spoiled meat. The text reads, "[The spoiled meat is] Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions-a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat....." The text also reads, "...a machine consisting of a hollow needle attached to a pump; by plunging this needle into the meat and working with his foot, a man could fill a ham with pickle in a few seconds."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.750671140889605 and the wording score is -0.129480624778936. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fdfa74f5060c for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed by a California high school teacher named Roy Jones. The experiment was to eliminate democracy. He decided to end the experiment on the fourth day becsue it was slipping out of his control.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.842281449092654 and the wording score is -0.58125886755727. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fdffa41d7cdd for prompt 39c16e: 'It shouldn't be simple, it should have one plot, and the change of fortune should be good to bad due to an error or weakness'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe0824cee95c for prompt 39c16e: 'The first element of tragedy is having a character that can relate to everyone and be relatable. The second element of tradegy is to have a serious tone rather than a silly or hopeful tone. The third element is that the line between good and bad should be blurred so that the character isn't definitivly good or bad.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe19141afe12 for prompt 3b9047: 'The Egyptian's system of goverment was based of the statis the people were in , Like how ,"At the bottom of the socail structure were slaves and farmers." While ,"Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests." As well as ,"Only nobles could hold government posts."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.18539193846186 and the wording score is -1.38566071478225. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe1e3c528e24 for prompt 814d6b: ' The third wave experiment developed quickly because it seemed to be something that would celebrate success and strength of a community. For example, "Strength through discipline, strength through community, strength through action, strength through pride" (1). This motto illustrates the message and goal students wanted to achieve through joining the third wave. As more and more students participated, it rapidly increased students to get involved. For instance, "By the fourth day of the experiment, the students became increasingly involved in the project and their discipline and loyalty to the project was so outstanding that Jones felt it was slipping out of control" (4). The experminent eventually was ended by Mr. Jones, and he explained to the students what had happened. In summary, the "Third Wave" experiment represented societies tendency to conform, and how easily it is for it to get out of hand.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 3.02080316987911 and the wording score is 2.42119950312023. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe2b28bcd7f9 for prompt 39c16e: 'According to Aristotle, a good tragedy should evoke both pity and fear in the audience through the use of "unmerited misfortune." It should feature a character who is neither morally bad nor one who is "good and just." Third, this man's fortune should develop from good to bad throughout the work due to a frailty or a lapse in judgement. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.388378742233568 and the wording score is -0.718005416422111. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe2da9134f9d for prompt 39c16e: 'Imitating actions that excite pity and fear, is one of three elements of an ideal tragedy. It is a distinctive mark of tragic imitation. In the play, there should always be a change of fortune; good to bad, never bad to good. The downfall of the villian should only be visited once and not happen again in the play.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe32aa7ef095 for prompt ebad26: 'firs in paragrafh two it states " how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it" the second way states" it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.794026362056302 and the wording score is -1.54528685350164. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe3aad1bda6a for prompt ebad26: 'There would be meat that had tumbled out on the floor, in the dirt and sawdust, where the workers had tramped and spit uncounted billions of consumption germs. Meat stored on the floor in where water would drip from the roof and rats would around all over it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.767837427984929 and the wording score is -1.21853772447024. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe5f0452d429 for prompt ebad26: 'They used smoking the meat as a method. They used pickling and a hot flat iron. They would also use chemicals such as borax to make the meat seem like it wasn't really old. "Some of it they would make into "smoked" sausage – but as the smoking took time, and was therefore expensive, they would call upon their chemistry department, and preserve it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it brown" (paragrapgh 5). '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe6fac61dc49 for prompt 814d6b: 'Mr jones started the third wave as a experement on heard behavior. The school took to these heard behaviors very fast, and the third wave transformed into a large mass in just four days. Feeling that since the experement had already gained so much traction in 4 days, Jones thought it was best to end the experement quickly before some of the harsher fascist tendencies popped up. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.22108883316715 and the wording score is 2.26907021599346. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe705879b87c for prompt 39c16e: 'Misfortune, great error or frailty, and dead amoungst loved ones. These three elements Aristotle describes as ideal tragedies to keep the audience or the reader hooked and for the protagonist to overcome adversity. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.72985945253881 and the wording score is -0.362701767640889. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe72f23da2dd for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would cover up spoiled meat by covering it with chemicals filling with stronger pickles or searing the mold off with hot iron in the passage in the passage and writes and yet in sprite there would be hams and spoiled '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.964717727264813 and the wording score is -1.6283678131373. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe7356e172e9 for prompt 3b9047: 'No single person could manage all these duties without assistance. The pharaoh appointed a chief minister called a vizier as a supervisor. The vizier ensured that taxes were collected. Working with the vizier were scribes who kept government records. These high-level employees had mastered a rare skill in ancient Egypt — they could read and write. Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests. Only nobles could hold government posts; in these positions they profited from tributes paid to the pharaoh. Priests were responsible for pleasing the gods. Nobles enjoyed great status and also grew wealthy from donations to the gods. All Egyptians—from pharaohs to farmers—gave gifts to the gods.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.33395073461081 and the wording score is -0.593639488227027. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe7a1b1cd0c2 for prompt ebad26: 'they would use pickles they would stuff the meat with things and marinate them to take away the rotten smell. "And yet, in spite of this, there would be hams found spoiled, some of them with an odor so bad that a man could hardly bear to be in the room with them" "which were made of the oldest hogs, whose skins were so heavy and coarse that no one would buy them—that is, until they had been cooked and chopped fine and labeled “head cheese!” " it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.601196199914551 and the wording score is -1.46116301528049. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe87281e35f8 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would mix regular and spoiled meats together to cover up the spoiled meat. Most spoiled meat was "mixed with half a ton of other meat" (Sinclair 1). Mixing the meets together would make the bad smell go away and no one noticed it was spoiled meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe9aa53862e4 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristole believed tragedies should follow a hard pla, should copy actions which excite shame and fear, and should feature a character who is not very good and just and whose misfortune is brought about by some error or judgement or weakness.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.296443085954169 and the wording score is -1.13345281520838. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fe9b78f1d906 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use different strategizes to cover up spoiled meat, make it seem that it was supposed to look a certain way when it wasn't and even add other substances to make it turn the right color so that it looks good. Jonas who worked in the pickle room told the family how they would do things to the pickle so it wouldn't be so sour. Jonas said that "they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be waten on free-lunch counters." They used a different item to cover the odor of the pickle and just sell it to customers as if nothing was wrong with what they were selling. There were also people that didn't buy the meat becuase it didn't look good. One of the things they were selling were skinned hams which was made up of oldest hogs, and no one would buy them until they "had been cooked and chopped fine and labeled head cheese." They would trick people into thinking that it was something else by labeling a false name. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.92107137463706 and the wording score is 1.87942482712065. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fea0233aa136 for prompt 3b9047: 'The pharaohs were at the top help the most power. Nobles and Priests pleased the gods. Soldiers and skilled workers were considers middle class and sold stuff they made. Slaves and Farmers which were at the bottom had to pay a lot for the government. The text says "Each farmer paid taxes in the form of grains, which were stored in the pharaoh’s warehouses. This grain was used to feed the people in the event of a famine."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fea2b9408690 for prompt 39c16e: 'The three elements for an ideal tragedy Is a Character that is neither good nor bad but a Character that is a regular person that makes a great mistake that will lead to his/her downfall. The downfall has to be Catastrophic and make the audience feel sorrow for the character.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0024657138419762 and the wording score is -0.04543859410258. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fea8a1f2e819 for prompt 39c16e: 'The first major element of an ideal tragedy is plot. The plot has a very big influence over the overall takeaway of the reader. because it is the core of the drama or novel. The plot needs to be good in order for the other elements to work together and make a masterpiece. The plot also needs to be clear and consice so that they audience is not lost or confused. Another element involves the characters. The characters are important becauset hey are what the audience can relate to. They pan out the novel or play, and they have the power to make the audience feel a certain way. Finally, an ideal tragedy needs a captivating ending. The ending if very influential to the audience because it is their last impression. Aristotle states that the ending should be diffeent for different types of plots. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.997243154696967 and the wording score is 1.88038589816135. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student feb3f9ce11e8 for prompt ebad26: 'To cover up the spoiled meat the factory would rub it with soda and they would use chemistry to give the meat any color and any flavor and any odor they chose. (paragraph 2). Man would fill ham with pickle. In the text it also says that "they would extract the bone, about which the bad part generally lay, and insert in the hole a white-hot iron. " The packers would also give the meat fancy names such as "boneless hams" "california hams" "skinned hams" and "head cheese". In paragraph 3 it states that "when the whole ham was spoiled that it came into the department of Elzbieta. Cut up by the two-thousand-revolutions- a-minute flyers, and mixed with half a ton of other meat." In paragraph 3 it also says that old sausage that was rejected and that was moldy and white would be dosed with boarax and glycerin and dumped into hoppers and made over again for home consumption. In paragraph 4 it says that they would make the meat into "smoked" sausage. They would also preserve the meat with borax and color it with gelatin to make it brown. In paragraph 5 it asays that the packers would stamp some of the meat as "special". These were the ways that the factory would cover up spoiled meat. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.07583529283104 and the wording score is -0.438967474074998. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student feb6945cfd4a for prompt 39c16e: '3 elements of an ideal tragedy would be to arrange it not a simple plan but a more complex plan. Another element would be the tragedy should imitate actions which excite pity and fear. And lastly, another element of an ideal tragedy would be that a character between good and bad suffer the tragedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student feb90f3798d6 for prompt 39c16e: 'The ideal tragedy should contain actions that induce pity and fear in the audience. The story should be centered around a main character that is neither a good nor a bad person. And, the main character's misfortune should be caused by a lapse in their judgment. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.328738524517365 and the wording score is -1.05329427563164. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fec7e0e788b2 for prompt ebad26: 'One way they covered up meat is they would rub it with soda to hide the smell. The would also pickle the meat to cover up the smell.They also would take out the bone and insert a white-hot iron. Aslo they chopped upspoiled parts of the meat and sold it as head cheese. sausage that was really moldy, chemicals were put in like borax ansd glycerin and it looked brand new. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fecc1ae4e10b for prompt 39c16e: 'A ideal tragedy should have a complex not simple plan, and it should moreover imitate actions that excite pity and fear, and it should be the distinctive mark of imitation. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fed295b68543 for prompt ebad26: 'They would put various seasonings and flavors in the meat to try and hide the smell and taste. The passage states "it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dmped into the hoppers." So it was also was dosed with chemicals.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.349060654352444 and the wording score is -0.671255300778511. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fed33a5f383e for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave gained over 200 members by the end of the second or third day. The project worked so well that the students were becoming more intelligent and had more motivation to actually be a part of the learning. It got to a point where Mr Jones didn't know what to do with this and eventually called it off by so he lied to students by announcing that the Third Wave was a part of a nationwide movement and that on the next day a presidential candidate of the movement would publicly announce its existence on television. Jones ordered students to attend a noon rally on Friday to witness the announcement. Where he told teh students that they were all part of a project to demonstrate how people willingly create a sense of superiority4 over others, and how this can lead people to justify doing horrible things in the name of the state’s honor.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.14122446550409 and the wording score is 1.12377704516546. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fed57efacfeb for prompt 3b9047: 'The government of ancient Egypt was a theocratic monarchy as the king ruled by a mandate from the gods, initially was seen as an intermediary between human beings and the divine, and was supposed to represent the gods' will through the laws passed and policies approved.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.703297984043404 and the wording score is 0.386382478880117. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fef3e85236e5 for prompt 39c16e: 'It has to be made on a complex storyline, with a plot that makes the audience feel pity or fear and these feelings must come from unmerited tragedy or shortcoming from human nature'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fefd4f143fbe for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed over such a short time period was because it stated to grow and grow. They stopped the experiment because it was getting out of control.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.782641231376452 and the wording score is -0.245970008347742. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff0f65eecf02 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle descirbes an ideal tradgedy as being one with a complex plan, one where the villian comes out on top, and it should inspire pity and fear in the readers.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.511077210733313 and the wording score is -1.58911454908633. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff186473ea0a for prompt 39c16e: 'A tragedy should have a complex plan not a simple one.A good plot should be the only plot there should not be two.It should also excite pity and fear.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.834945815906605 and the wording score is -0.593749050654083. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff198c41b379 for prompt ebad26: 'They would use many techniques to hide spoiled or rotten meat for people to eat like chopping it up into sausages, injecting it with a chemical called pickle, and even made them smell nice instead of rotten to cover it up'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.431733963400265 and the wording score is -0.956762061858469. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff1ecc9277c6 for prompt ebad26: 'They would run it with soda to take away the smell and sell it to be eaten on free lunch counters, OR they would chop it up and miz it into a couple tons of other meats so the odor was un-detectable. Old and moldy sausage would be dosed with borx and glyerin and re-used. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.050688599419699 and the wording score is 0.260164764093871. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff21b97ae290 for prompt 3b9047: 'The social structure greatly resembeld the Egyptians mighty pyramids; The smaller, more powerful and valued group at the top, and the larger less valued group at the bottom. The social structure had three different groups. At the top where the Pharoes, Nobles, Priests, and scribes who played large roles in the government. Scribes kept important governemnt documents, Priests where in charge of pleasing the gods, Nobles held certain government posts, and the greatest of all, Pharoes, where thought to be the ruler and or god of the land. "All Egyptians-from pahroes to farmers-gave gifts to the gods." Although some roles might have higher value than others, all people give gifts to the gods. The Middle class was made up of soldiers, craftsmen/ women, artisans, physicians and traders. Soldiers helped keep their community safe, craftsmen/ women created beautiful jewelery, artisans made pottery and other forms of art, physicians kept people healthy and traders sold goods and food. "Naturally, there were people needed to buy goods from artisans and traders. These where the merchants and storekeepers who sold these goods to the public." This evidence from the text demonstrats a way that the middle class can contribuite to the economic system of their community. The last, and largest social group, is made up of farmers and slaves. The farmers would grow crops to consume and sell and pay taxes to as much as 60% of their yearly harvest. The slaves who were captured in war, and would work on building projects and would be the servants to pharoes or nobles. Although some people are born into the lower class, you can still move up the social scale. "Families saved money to send their sons to village schools to learn trades...schools were run by priests or artisans." If the son succed in school he would go to get an important job in the government. In conclusion, that is the role of each character in the social structure and how they contribuite to the government.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.41216874628467 and the wording score is 2.26157336440084. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff297a640ede for prompt ebad26: 'They pickle it to get rid of the spoiled look then they rub it up with soda to take away the smell. Or they would use the spoiled meat in sausages. Another thing they did was salt the meat. The text stated, "Jonas had told them how the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose," (Sinclair 1). '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.659323023014141 and the wording score is 0.419790902813263. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff300e2210ff for prompt 3b9047: 'there were diffrent social classes. physicians and craftsmen/women were the middle class. farmers and slaves were the bottom of the social group. they all all worshiped the pharaohs because they believed that they were gods in human form. when the pharao dies, the people buile pyrimads to bury them.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.157459620904918 and the wording score is -0.165811468770997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff3251e1f495 for prompt 3b9047: 'Egypt was like a pyramid at that time period. On the bottom of the pyramid were the slaves, they were treated well so they don't quit. They were able to own propert, inherit money, and more. Next were The farmers, they raised animals, farmer food, and more. Then in middle class were the crafts men/women. They sell items and craft items for money. For example they make tools, pottery, papyrus, and more. Next is high clas/ upper middle class, there are priests and nobles. Most priests and nobles were scribes. Only nobles can hold government posts. Nobles grew wealthy from donations by the Gods. On the top of the pyramid is the pharaohs, there considered Gods. They rule there land and are like royalty.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.09726608140007 and the wording score is 0.496336081896995. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff37545b2805 for prompt ebad26: 'In paragraph two, they would use pickle meat and would rub it with soda to get rid of the sour taste. "Jonas had told them how the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell..." When the meat was bad they would use a stronger pickle which would destroy the odor that came with it. "And yet, in spite of this, there would be hams found spoiled, some of them with an odor so bad that a man could hardly bear to be in the room with them. To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor..." In paragraph three it states that when meat comes back over from Europe for being moldy and white, they would dose it with glycerin and borax and create new meat with it. "...there would come all the way back from Europe old sausage that had been rejected, and that was moldy and white – it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.52035518249828 and the wording score is -0.29299025459794. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff4ed38ef099 for prompt ebad26: 'in the first paragraph it says "either can it or chop it up into sausage", it also says that they rubbed the sausage with soda to take the smell away and they used a machiene to mix meats.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.20457384774869 and the wording score is -1.16978365920044. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff53b94f7ce0 for prompt ebad26: 'They would have piles of filthy meat on the floor which would get dirty over time, " There would be meat stored in great piles in rooms; and the water from leaky roofs would drip over it, and thousands of rats would race about on it." There would be workers who would also tamper with the products, "... where the workers had tramped and spit uncounted billions of consumption germs." There are also more but one thing is that they sell meat with bits of poisoned rates and other things, " ... rats, bread, and meat would go into the hoppers together." '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.328738524517365 and the wording score is -1.05329427563164. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff5b8d659ca6 for prompt 814d6b: 'Jones created a movement, which he caled "The Third Wave". He announced that the movement was aimed to eliminate democracy. One of the central points of his movement was that democracy’s main weakness is that it favors the individual over the whole community. Jones started his classes with strict disiplinary rules, improving all of their orderliness. He tested his students as more of them began to join, by creating a solute that resembled the Nazi regime, and a cathcy motto. All of the students were showing herd behavior. Brfore long, more and more students began to join, following the lead of their fellow classmates. By the end, the experiment became out of control, because students were getting too involved with the movement. Jones decided to end the experiment, and tell his students that none of it was real.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.04987634762863 and the wording score is 1.67304857275766. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff5e9e6068da for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle believed that the ideal tradegy should include the purgative power of tragedy and makes moral ambiguity the essence of tragedy. A perfect tragedy he says, should imitate actions that excite “pity and fear.” A perfect tragedy should be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.157459620904918 and the wording score is -0.165811468770997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff66def9f97c for prompt 3b9047: 'The society of ancient Egypt was shaped like a pyramid. I think this because when I read this text it talked about how the gods were on the top, the pharaohs were right below the gods and the slaves, nobles, priests, women, craftsmen and more were at the middle and bottom. The reason I think this is because when all of them are stacked it forms a pyramid because there are more slaves, nobles, priests, women, and craftsmen then there are gods and pharos. So there are more people in the middle and bottom than there are on top.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff78813d4f7b for prompt 3b9047: 'The ancient Egyptian system was structured like a pyramid. The gods were at the top mainly because they were "believed that the gods controlled the universe", as said in paragraph one. At the bottom were slaves and farmers. They were the weakest of all humans. The slaves were "forced to work on building projects", (paragraph 13) like pyramids. In conclusion, the Egyptian system was structured like a pyramid, the strongest at the top and the weakest at the bottom.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.531367778754094 and the wording score is 0.583991473066364. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ff7c7e70df07 for prompt ebad26: 'They used all sorts of chemical concoctions to make the meat seem fine, as shown in this quote, "also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose." This quote shows just how much power they had in the manipulation of people and meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ffc34d056498 for prompt 3b9047: 'The lowest classes are slaves and farmers slaves being people taken from war and farmers pay a huge tax. The middle class was the craftsmen and craftswomen and the physicians. The higher class was the Nobles, Scribes, Pharaoh's, Soldiers and the Preist. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.308447956496584 and the wording score is 0.0481711996116745. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ffd1576d2e1b for prompt 3b9047: ' they sorta made people start working on the structour theyed barley got paid.if they didget payed it was barley half of they actually had to get. one good ting is that the vizier's learned ho to read & write thats a really rare skill to masterin ainceint egypt.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.40817975173863 and the wording score is -0.4936034763879. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student ffe4a98093b2 for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragety has three elements that make it ideal. To start a great tragedy must start with a great man and story, then to follow with a great twist or massive change in events. Lastly a great tragedy can be so good that in the end the man comes full circle and ends up with a good ending.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student fffbccfd8a08 for prompt ebad26: 'The meat would smell sour but the would "rub it up with soda to take away the smell" and they then would sell this rotting meat. Hams would be found spoiled after being pickled so they would pump it with a "stronger pickle" to make the odor go away. They would sell ham that they had taken the bone out of and use a white hot iron to be sold a s a boneless ham. Meat would fall on the floor and was stored in unsanitary places until sold to the public. Meat was contaminated with chemicals to make it look fresh and not rotted. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.77159643366201 and the wording score is 0.547742436619102. |