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### Human: Here is a summary written by student efb547b9954a for prompt 3b9047: 'They were good but in different ways.They put the gods first then the pharoahs and then others.They believed the gods controlled the universe, so the kept them happy.The pharoahs were believed to be gods in human form.The pharoahs directed the army in case of a foreign threat.Different social classeswere involved in this goverment because of the farmers and prisoners and raised animals, and boys on the farm..Most people had lots of money.People sold and bought things from artisans.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.659323023014141 and the wording score is 0.419790902813263. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student efbece8a16cc for prompt 3b9047: 'In the social pyramid of ancient Egypt the pharaoh and those associated with . Craftspersons made and sold jewelry, pottery, papyrus products, tools, and other useful things.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student efc4b912fd5b for prompt ebad26: 'They would change the color and smell to cover up the fact that it was rotten and when it could not be sold, it would just be cut up and repacked after being doused with chemicals. Some meat would also be turned into sausages or were doused with pickle to eliminate the odor.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.200552651744029 and the wording score is -0.580567927123172. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student efd59cb5ae2b for prompt 39c16e: 'Catastrophe, goes from good to bad, shocking/suprising. This is pretty much related to Hamlet because what happened in Hamlet was indeed a catastrophe and it went from good to bad. It was also shocking.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.611100137436418 and the wording score is -0.205064732821972. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student efd88c3ad254 for prompt 3b9047: 'The egyptian government had people who would control taxes and be able to have more say in things than most people. Then there were people like soldiers, craftsmen and physicians who were had less say in the government but had an important role in the social structure since they had more important things. The last part of the social structure was people like farmers and slaves. There majority of people in egypt were in this part of the social structure. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.853047479554271 and the wording score is 0.453089764319353. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student efe35408d8c8 for prompt 3b9047: 'Ancient Egypt had a government system this system was made up of many different jobs in the government. One of the jobs was the vizier which was the person to make sure all taxes were collected. Another job was soldiers they would fight in battles but during peace times they would be supervisors.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student efeb61411a90 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would use chemicals that masked scent, used hot iron rods to replace bone, and mix it with other meats, and combine them so that the spoiled meat would go unnoticed.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student eff5ba94b9b1 for prompt 814d6b: 'The third Wave developed over such a short period of time because everything was happening so fast. The experiment ended because it felt like it was slipping out of control.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.798338689522021 and the wording score is -0.208678093314985. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student effba61d66db for prompt 39c16e: 'Can be complex when its a perfect tragedy and should imitate and also excite the reader with fear. Then you got the kind of tragedy which stuff takes place first like the odyssey it has a double threaded plot.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.236802868237966 and the wording score is -0.798163955998856. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student effd762f1478 for prompt ebad26: 'Often time they would rub it with soda and put salt or seasonings on it to make it smell better they would also pickle it if they had to.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student efffba3e8d44 for prompt 814d6b: 'Mr. Jones wanted to carry out an experiment; he intended to see how easily people would follow a crowd and with how much dedication. The students quickly picked it up and were enthusiastic: possibly in part by the slogan “Strength through discipline, strength through community, strength through action, strength through pride,” which would make one think they can become stronger than before. Mr. Jones noticed and realised that the experiment had gone farther than intended. He gathered the students in the room, students who expected to see a presidential canidate of the movement announce the Third Wave's existence on television, and explained to them that this was an experiment to test herd decisions.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.47581453547214 and the wording score is 2.93121776666145. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f00153bea948 for prompt 3b9047: 'it was different by the eygpt was being and using a social structure as like a prya,mids to keep them in check and also made them like ranks.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f00a4938f0cd for prompt 3b9047: 'The system in acient egyptian was that that pharaohs believed gods in human form and absolute power they had over their subjects. It states that in paragragh (3-4)that Egypt believed they were gods and when they died there was a huge stone pyrimad built as their tombs. Next is the vizerier. Vizerier made sure that that taxes were collected. Priest it states that they were responsible for pleasing the gods. The Nobles grew wealthy from donations to the gods. And lastly the gods the gods controlled the weather and many people belived in all of the other things. People also thought they controlled the famine.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.793407261838069 and the wording score is 0.117800905109825. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f011e8915ddf for prompt 814d6b: 'well, the experiment was a demonstration of how democratic states are not usually protected by the influence of fascism which is the belief in absolute control of all people by a single dictator. The experiment ended because he realized that it was slipping out of control. because the students had become extremely involved in the project with the discipline and the student's loyalty to the project.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.547065236899663 and the wording score is 0.546699558033608. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f01fd3f09cab for prompt ebad26: 'They would mask the scent of spoiled meat with chemicals or actually end up using it secretly. "For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage. "'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.61194986616794 and the wording score is -0.162889048712082. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f03ba64bc3fc for prompt 3b9047: 'Egyptian society was structured like a pyramid. Pharohs were on the top, and noble's and priests were right below them. At the bottom of the heap was slaves and farmers. Slavery became a fate as prisoners of war. Farmers were taxed heavily, to be exact..60% of their yearly harvest, which is A LOT of hay.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.050688599419699 and the wording score is 0.260164764093871. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f046d7f38b64 for prompt ebad26: 'The factories would can the meat or chopit up in to sausage if it couldn't be used. The text states, "...whenever meatwas so spoiled thatit could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage" (Sinclair 1). If the meat would smell they'd rub it with soda to take away the smell and sell it. They would take the smelly and spoiled hams and pump them in a strong pickle to get rid of the odor. According to the text" To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor..." Even if the meat was bad, they didn't care, and sold it to others no matter how harmful it could be. The meats that had a smell they would use things like borax to cover it up. The workers were pretty selfish, just trying to sell their product without thinking about how it can affect others. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.6113965443793 and the wording score is 0.828702521047608. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f04df5120881 for prompt 814d6b: 'Because people where listening and, they decided to take action, so that's why so many students joined because, they went from 30 students. To 43 students and, the teacher tought them how to get new members and, by the end of the day. They had over 200 people. It ended so quickly because, they were showing bad things towards the state's honor. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.153454049433642 and the wording score is 0.168544074280091. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f059d35922c7 for prompt ebad26: 'In the text it says, " The meat was taken out of the pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it wuth sida to take away the smell, an then sell it to be eaten on free lunch counteres." They would also put much more on the meat to cover it up. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.776512236812572 and the wording score is -0.383759435798078. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f05ca36ce6c9 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements that make an ideal tragedy. The first element is the tragedy should be on a complex plan. This means it should copy actions that make the reader feel pity and fear. The next element of an ideal tragedy is it should be a well-constructed plot. This means it should only have one issue rather than multiple. The final element is it should end unhappily. This means there shouldn't be a happy ending there should be something sad that brings the mood down.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f06122acf5bf for prompt 3b9047: 'The Egyptian System of government was people such as slaves were at the bottom, while people such as, kings/queens Nobles, and Priests were at the top'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.01297281430117 and the wording score is -0.66433982719293. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0631c7c24a7 for prompt 3b9047: 'There were many levels to socity "No single person could manage all these duties without assistance." (4) Because to this the Gods and the Paraohs were thouht as powerful and roled over all. next in line there was Vizers, Scribes, Nobles, and Priested these were peaple that did the kings work and made profit from it. Ater them was the solders and skild peple this was like the middile class who traded items and protected the nation. at the bottem was the Farmer and slaves and they did all the dirty work and provided food for the rest of the Comity.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.02194403007169 and the wording score is 0.453199326746409. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f06668e3066c for prompt ebad26: 'The meat for canning and sausage was piled on the floor before workers carried it off in carts holding sawdust, human spit and urine, rat dung, rat poison, and even dead rats.They would also dump arsenic, boric acid, rat poison or formaldehyde into ingredients to act as preservatives or to cover-up spoiled meat. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.140912434027827 and the wording score is -0.245279067913644. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f06cc2a058eb for prompt ebad26: 'Some ways how the factory would cover up spoiled meat would be to mix it with the sausage. According to the text, "There was never the least attention paid to what was cut up for sausage; it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption." (paragraph 3) Another way they covered up the spoiled meat was by putting it inside of hams. The passage states, "The packers were always originating such schemes--they had what they called 'boneless hams,' which were all the odds and ends of pork stuffed into casings;" These were only a few ways how they disguised the spoiled meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.13599663087726 and the wording score is 0.409262068734668. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f07dcc3335dc for prompt 814d6b: 'It developed over such a short period of time because Jones made up a salute resembling that of the Nazi regime and ordered the class members to salute eachother even outside the class. By day three the expiriment took a life of its own from all over the school. Jones started losing control over the expierement so he decided it was time to end it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0812c698162 for prompt 3b9047: 'In story " EGYPTIAN SOCIAL STRUCTURE" by USHistory.org, the social classed involved the govenment because in that time of period all people was beliving God give us everything "the gods controlled the universe.''(org 1)and every different classed all have to work hard to get the resources and they believe "that their pharaohs were gods,"(org 3) so the pharoph was ruling the government and everybody have to liste to him'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.153454049433642 and the wording score is 0.168544074280091. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f08d4b4c14ae for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements that stand out ot me of an ideal tragedy are. ¨The change of fortune should be not from bad to good, but, reversely, from good to bad.¨ wich means that the sistuation for the protagonist should not get better but worse.another element he explained is ¨be arranged not on the simple but on the complex plan. It should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear¨ what i think he is trying to convey is the story should not be straight and their should be twist and turns to get the reader to always be interested in what comes next.the last element that stands out to me is ¨Nor, again, that of a bad man passing from adversity to prosperity¨ this means that youre charecters should not go from poor or in bad shap to rich and of high status.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.72244769187161 and the wording score is 0.57649462147374. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f09b62d4764e for prompt ebad26: 'The factory and its workers would combine rotten meats with good meat and put it in cans and sell it as sausage. This information can be found in paragraph 1.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.20457384774869 and the wording score is -1.16978365920044. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f09cecc2992f for prompt 39c16e: 'A tradegy should come to fruition through a complex plan, should excite pity and fear, and should have a change of fortune going from good to bad. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f09e60741225 for prompt 39c16e: 'Aristotle defined greek plays and is considered one of greatest philosophers ever. He set in motion a set of elements that are needed for an ideal tragedy. Three elements needed for Aristotle's ideal play are complexity, evoking pity and fear, and a play should also not tell of a good thriving person facing hardships or a wicked person facing hardships and as a result receiving wealth.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0a247da44bc for prompt 39c16e: 'A perfect tragedy should invoke pity or fear, about a man whose downfall is due to his own judgement, and about a man who is prosperous or born into a powerful family.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0b269d27dd5 for prompt ebad26: 'They would chop up rotten meat into sausages or put it in cans. They would also rub the rotten meat with soda to get rid of the smell. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.14493363003249 and the wording score is -0.834494799990917. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0ba031d183a for prompt 3b9047: 'In pragraph 2 Egyptuans also elevated some human beings to gods. Their leaders pharaohs were thought as gods in a human form. Also in paragraph 12 farmers had to give 60% of the crops that they harvest to pay taxes. So they only had 40% percent to make there food and sale. In paragraph 13 Social mobility was not impossible. A small number of peasants and farmers moved up the economic ladder. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.233384835170626 and the wording score is -0.838378291090528. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0c00231e3a4 for prompt 3b9047: 'the ancient Egypt made a social class upper, middle, lower the upper class is rich people, important priest, and doctors, the middle class was chiefly of merchants , manufactures, and artisans'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0c0232fe480 for prompt ebad26: 'Various ways the factory would use or cover up spoiled meat was covering them with an odor called thirty percent according to paragraph 2 it states "in spite of this, there would be hams found spoiled, some of them with an odor so bad that a man could hardly bear to be in the room with them. To pump into these the packers had a second and much stronger pickle which destroyed the odor—a process known to the workers as “giving them thirty per cent"." This means when the meat was spoiled and it smelled bad they would use an odor to take away the smell. This effects socially because the people they would sell it to wouldn't know it would be spiled meat because of the odor '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.830014388222652 and the wording score is 0.502871862448923. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0c79ef9b3ae for prompt 39c16e: 'The three ideal elements of an ideal tradgedy are that the plot should go from good to bad fortune wise, that comes from the characters doing. Many play should end with a tragic ending, the unhappy endings are the right endings to have for a perfect tradgedy. The tragedy should be complex, not simplistic.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0c7b479bac1 for prompt ebad26: 'In paragraph two, Sinclair states that the company would rub rotten and smelly meat with soda to take away the smell and sell it to people on lunch counters. Right after that, he states, "...also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose." This proves they did not care about germs in their meat and made it a point to cover the smells up so they customers would still buy it or eat it. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0cafe9060da for prompt 3b9047: ' gyptian society was structured like a pyramid. At the top were the gods, such as Ra, Osiris, and Isis. Egyptians believed that the gods controlled the universe. Therefore, it '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0cca400e9f2 for prompt 3b9047: 'Egyptian system of government social class is different whatever the role you play is based on your class pyramid . The first class is with the pharaoh, vizier . The pharaoh is the ruler of all people of Egypt. The middle class consists of skilled workers, physicians, nobles, priests, and craftsmen/women. Their job was to make and do things for Egypt. The lower class consists of slaves and framers. Farmers tend to the fields and raised animals. Slaves built things such ass buildings.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.622715896629557 and the wording score is 0.0347199454741653. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0cf73272e1d for prompt ebad26: 'The various ways that the factory would use or cover up spoiled meat would be by dosing the meat with chemical substances and dumped in the hoppers. This can be seen in paragraph three" There was never the least attention paid to what was cut up for sausage; there would come all the way back from Europe old sausage that had been rejected, and that was moldy and white – it would be dosed with borax and glycerin, and dumped into the hoppers, and made over again for home consumption."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0661115030294547 and the wording score is -0.715082996363196. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0d7c22fb4a2 for prompt 3b9047: 'At the top of the system of government there was the pharaoh. The pharaoh were considered the gods and controlled Egypt.People of Egypt believed that the gods controlled the whole universe.Next to the pharaoh was there vizier as a supervisor.The vizier ensured that all the taxes were gathered.Then there were powerful nobles and priests.The priests were responsible for pleasing the gods.Nobles were the only people who were able to hold government.That is how all the social classes were involved in this government of Egypt.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.884755379713532 and the wording score is -0.431470622482374. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0dc097d1ae7 for prompt 39c16e: 'One element of ideal tragedy is that the plot should have a complex plan. This kind of plan shows many emotions such as fear and pity, and shows the audience tragedy. Therefore, a simple plan is not as descriptive and emotional as a complex one with tragedy. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0f383b6ca09 for prompt ebad26: 'The meatpacking houses would disguise the taste, smell, color, and presentation of the meat to cover up the fact that it was spoiled. Sinclair describes the process from the word of a pickle room worker, "... the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose. " (Paragraph 2). He goes on to explain that they still worked with meat that had an unbearable smell to the workers and they would just pickle the meat stronger to destroy the oder. He also added that The meatpacking houses would disguise the taste, smell, color, and presentation of the meat to cover up the fact that it was spoiled. Sinclair describes the process from the word of a pickle room worker, "... the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose. " (Paragraph 2). He goes on to explain that they still worked with meat that had an unbearable smell and they would just pickle the meat stronger to destroy the oder. He also added that that some spoiled meat that contained white coloring and mold would be used for sausages and home consumption. Sinclair starts to explain the sausage process, "Some of it they would make into "smoked" sausage – but as the smoking took time, and was therefore expensive, they would call upon their chemistry department, and preserve it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it brown. " (Paragraph 5). He proceeds to state that all the sausages were the same but some were labled differently to uncrease the price. He also adds that no one pays attention to what goes in the sausage as long as its made. The meatpacking houses wrongfly hid the condition of the meat by altering the taste with stronger pickling, smell by scrubbing it with soda, color by using different chemicals that were unhealthy, and presentation by either grinding it, choping it, or whatever else was acceptable.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.38075197758646 and the wording score is 1.22030925893863. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0f7c2b5e9aa for prompt 3b9047: 'Because the people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods, they entrusted their rulers with many responsibilities. Protection was at the top of the list. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f0fe932318f8 for prompt ebad26: 'If meat was spoiled and could not be used for anything else they would either can it or chop it up into sausage. (par 1) They would pickle the meat and if that didnt seem to fix the smell they woud rub it with soda and sett it to be eaten on fee lunch counters. (par 2) '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f104f042f0d5 for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient Egyptian system of goverment is like a pyramid with the gods on top, pharaohs, nobles and priests, and slaves and farmers at the bottom because in the text it says "Egyptian society was structured like a pyramid. At the top were the gods, such as Ra, Osiris, and Isis. " and "At the bottom of the social structure were slaves and farmers. Slavery became the fate of those captured as prisoners of war. In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f10d37994ffc for prompt 3b9047: 'The pharaohs had power over the subjects and when the pharaohs died huge pyramids were built . The Nobles grew wealthy from donations . People brought goods from traders and artisans because they sold goods in public . Priests also had to please the gods . Solders also fought in wars.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.078390928107684 and the wording score is -0.958751165758945. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f11bb0016b7a for prompt 814d6b: 'Jones was trying to get the point across about someone taking leadership and it get out of control and then more and more people start doing it '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f123f1a9b8b8 for prompt ebad26: 'If the meat went bad in the factory they had various ways to cover it up such as canning it, putting it into sausage, be rubbed with soda to remove the smell then to be served at lunch counters, pack it with a large amount of pickle, and extracting the bone with the bad part. "For it was the custom, as they found, whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage." (Sinclair, np). These were all disturbing ways they would try and unspoil the meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.388378742233568 and the wording score is -0.718005416422111. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f129367d2914 for prompt 39c16e: 'The ideal tragedy must have a complex plot involving a good character in which something tragic happens to them making us feel pity and fear. The opposite of moral standards occurs in tragedies because it inspires more emotion in us. It must also have an unhappy ending, one where the enemies are fortunate and end up friendly. The person the experiences the misfortune must be of a fortunate lifestyle or prosperous.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.285025753815689 and the wording score is 1.01289012599015. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f12e9931a052 for prompt ebad26: 'When the meat was spoiled the companny did many diffrent things. Such as,"they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell...giving any sort of meat, fresh or salted...any oder they chose"(Sinclair par 2). Even with the spoiled meat they would change it to trick people into buying bad met. They would cover up the smell, color and anything that made the meat look undesireable. That is how they coverd up their rotten meat and were able to sell it with no problem.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f130aae2bb30 for prompt ebad26: 'They would take the bone out and add color to the meat. They would mix the bad meat up with the good meat and sell all of it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.04468071446043 and the wording score is 0.220220559608797. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1343aef1a69 for prompt 3b9047: 'The race of egyptians are structured like a pyramid the top is the gods the middle is royals and pharaohs and the bottom is farmers and slaves.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f137e76fdbd8 for prompt 3b9047: 'The Egyptians structured their society like a pyramid, the higher class such as gods were at the top, and the lower class such as slaves were at the bottom. Then there is the middle class such as craftsmen, craftsmen would make jewelry, pottery, products, tools, and other useful items. Also in the middle class, there were the people that supplied the craftsmen wth the products they needed to make the things they would sell. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.376373871691152 and the wording score is 0.463618598397948. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f13edd6d07d4 for prompt 39c16e: 'The 3 elements of an ideal tragedy that were described by Aristole begin with imitating actions which excite pity ad fear, followed by the fall of a hero caused by error or farility, and lastly the tragedy that occurs follows a complex plan.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.372093745684063 and the wording score is -0.621473202648942. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f13f8961796e for prompt 3b9047: 'Different social classes involved in this goverment because it showed how the slaverywas and it had what each part of the structure and what they do.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.48752299907168 and the wording score is -1.12595596361576. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f141c3d494b3 for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the ancient Egyptian system of government was like a pyrimid. According to the text it states, "Egyptian society was structured like a pyramid. At the top were the gods, such as Ra, Osiris, and Isis." The different social classes were involved in the government by working together and relying on each other.In the text it states, "Each farmer paid taxes in the form of grains, which were stored in the pharaoh’s warehouses. This grain was used to feed the people in the event of a famine." Therefore implying that the pharaoh relied on the farmers. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.49913875826482 and the wording score is 0.955611176267953. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f14424505232 for prompt ebad26: 'Various ways the factory would use or cover up spoiled meat is how they would use chemicals to color, get rid of mold, or cover up the smell. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1530583474c for prompt ebad26: 'They did various things with spoiled meat. They would can it or chop it into sausage if it wasn't too spoiled. If they took it out of the pickle and it was sour they would rub it with soda to take the smell away and sell it. When they used the machine to pickle the ham there were still some that came out sour. Some of them were too sour to stand. Then they would pump the sour ham with an even stronger pickle that got rid of the smell. For the hams, they would stuff odds and ends of pork into casings. California hams were shoulders, knuckle joints, and most of the meat cut out. The skinned hams were old hogs that were tough and no one bought until it was cooked and chopped to be head cheese. When the whole ham was spoiled they mixed it with good meat and canned. The moldy sausage that came from Europe was dosed with borax and glycerin. They sent it out to shops again. Poisoned rats went in the sausage along with the spoiled chopped up meat. The waste barrels were cleaned out once in a while and mixed with fresh meat to go to shops. Some of it would be made into smoked sausage. They would rub it with borax and color it with gelatin to make it look brown and sell it. All of these methods were disgusting. You never knew what you were going to get. It was a pork surprise.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 3.07026489553763 and the wording score is 1.58247076152938. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f155fc6043a1 for prompt ebad26: 'There were various ways the meatpacking industry would use or cover up spoiled meat. This included mixing fresher meat with the spoiled meat, the factories would also utilize chemicals to alter the apperance and oder of the spoiled meat. "also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose." (paragraph two). The factory also took advantage of packaging by selling the meat under the guise of california ham, or head cheese. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.72244769187161 and the wording score is 0.57649462147374. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f15713d463b9 for prompt ebad26: 'Upton Sinclair's The jungle is an excellent book that describes numerous mechanisms that led to meatpacking infractions. workers in meat processing plants would replace old and diseased meat with healthier cuts. Pork fat and beef scraps will be proxessed or canned in the same way as chicken is many of these meats would be minced and turned into sausage.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f15a85783ed5 for prompt 39c16e: '3 elements of an ideal tragedy are complexity, moving the character to a strong emotion like pity and fear, and the change of fortune should not be from a big person but from a normal person. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.45143699301711 and the wording score is -1.2538256898768. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f15c5a4413b5 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy, as described by Aristotle are having a complex plan, have a well constructed plot, and end in pleasure to the audience, although, there is an exception to the Odyssey, as it is a second rank. In the chapter from Poetics, Aristotle states, "A perfect tragedy should, as we have seen, be arranged... on the complex plan" (Paragrapgh 2). When Aristole says this, he means that there should be actions that entertain pity, fear, and bring in the "tragic" part of the writing. There has to be a bundle of emotions to make the audience feel a certain way for the character. In the chapter from Poetics, Aristotle also states, "A well-constructed plot should, therefore, be single in its issure, rather than double as some maintain" (Paragraph 3). This means that there should be a plot that goes from good to bad. This provides an emotional connection to the character with their successes, but as the "bad" part comes in, you wil feel for the character. In the chapter from Poetics, Aristotle states, "It is accounted the best because of the weakness of the speactator; for the poet is guided in what he writes by the wishes of his audience" (Paragraph 4). If you write the ending in the audiences wishes, they will be more intrigued. It's in the best wishes that the poet ends the writing in the audiences wishes, it will result in pleasure. All in all, the three elements of an ideal tragedy, as described by Aristotle are having a complex plan, have a well constructed plot, and end in pleasure to the audience.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 3.40169912276593 and the wording score is 3.01338025586439. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f15cd219318e for prompt 3b9047: 'At the bottom of the pyramid, you have the poor people, the slaves and farmers. Slaves worked for the pharohs. Farmers tended to fields, and made things in order. They could manage to get out of the bottom of the pyramid. I can support my claim with evidence because in the text it says, "Slavery became the fate of those captured as prisoners of war. In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles." and "Farmers tended the fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments." You then have the top of the pyramid, the gods. The gods control the universe. If they were not happy the Nile would overflow, cause famne, or even bring death.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.830014388222652 and the wording score is 0.502871862448923. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f15f0e17441f for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of anchent Egypt was lik a triangle at the bettom was slaves above the slaves were avrage(workers) than the scribes and preats and the weathey and on the top was sparrow/king or queen.the scribes and preasts were more in the goverment than anyone eles exepte the goverment workers ot high class and sparrow king or queen.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.308447956496584 and the wording score is 0.0481711996116745. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f166c2d831cf for prompt 3b9047: 'The system of goverment is like a pyramid the most important on top and the slaves on bottom. Arcording to the acticle the scribes would keep goverment records and worked with the vizier. They were the only people who coupld read. They were also the only people who could write.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.456955959104999 and the wording score is -0.0425161740436652. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f174958794a0 for prompt 39c16e: 'a perfect tragedy as explained should be not on the simple but on the complex plan. A plot itself should be single in its issue not double. The tragedy that some place first and opposite a catastrophe, made for weakness and pleasure for the audience like a comedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.61194986616794 and the wording score is -0.162889048712082. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f18ac11effa4 for prompt 3b9047: 'The social structure was structure was structerd like a pyramid. At the top was the pharaoah. The level below was nobles and priests. A level below is physcians and craftsmen. A level below is artsans and traders. The lowest level is the slaves and farmers. According to the text the jobs for slaves was ," Slavery became the fate of those captured as prisoners of war. In addition to being forced to work on building projects, slaves toiled at the discretion of the pharaoh or nobles". According to the text the jobs of farmers is "Farmers tended the fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments". According to the text the jobs for physicians and craftsmen are "Farmers tended the fields, raised animals, kept canals and reservoirs in good order, worked in the stone quarries, and built the royal monuments". according to the text the jobs for nobels and priests is "Right below the pharaoh in status were powerful nobles and priests. Only nobles could hold government posts; in these positions they profited from tributes paid to the pharaoh. Priests were responsible for pleasing the gods". According to the text the jobs for the pharaoah is "Because the people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods, they entrusted their rulers with many responsibilities. Protection was at the top of the list. The pharaoh directed the army in case of a foreign threat or an internal conflict. All laws were enacted at the discretion of the pharaoh. Each farmer paid taxes in the form of grains, which were stored in the pharaoh’s warehouses. This grain was used to feed the people in the event of a famine".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.10928657647587 and the wording score is -0.430427743896879. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1ad450bc13b for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy are to add in intimate actions before the overall tragedy to excite pity and fear. This will show the audience that the tragedy is about to occur, preparing them for the devastation and provides suspense. Another element is that the plot should be single threaded, meaning only one main storyline is occuring. This gives the audience a full feeling of good to bad fortune making them feel the full intention of despair for the characters. The last element of an ideal tragedy is the idea that the chracter should not be considered good or bad, but in between, and their misfortune should be brought to them by error of judgment or frailty.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.65903189155308 and the wording score is 2.34561539507719. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1b2d30d3092 for prompt 3b9047: 'In the top of the social structure were the pharaohs which were powerful and they were also considered gods . The text says " Their leaders, called pharaohs, were belived to be gods in human form . They had absolute power over their subjects. "'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.236802868237966 and the wording score is -0.798163955998856. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1b84ade4ac3 for prompt 3b9047: 'Pharaohs is on the top and they have a lot of power, and the nobles have a little of power, the preists have low amount of power, the scibes are the 4th low from the pyramid. the slaver are the really lowest in the social stucture pyramid.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.591933852682973 and the wording score is -0.675801977429964. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1b9134ba254 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tragedy are a plot that satisfies moral sense, founded on the fortunes of those who have done something terrible, and the tragdey's way to excite pity and fear. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1ce0d5580da for prompt 39c16e: 'An ideal tragedy would have elements such as imitating actions, following plainly in the first place, and possesses no single tragic quality. Paragraph 2 reads, "It should, moreover, imitate actions which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation. It follows plainly, in the first place, that the change of fortune presented must not be the spectacle of a virtuous man brought from prosperity to adversity: for this moves neither pity nor fear; it merely shocks us. Nor, again, that of a bad man passing from adversity to prosperity: for nothing can be more alien to the spirit of Tragedy; it possesses no single tragic quality".'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.221105410092397 and the wording score is -0.835455871031613. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1cef2bbd21f for prompt 39c16e: 'The 3 elements the ideal tragedy should have is; moreover; immitate actions, and be arranged on the compex plan, as in the text it states,"which excite pity and fear, this being the distinctive mark of tragic imitation." This statement shows that when you use this in ideal tragedy it would catch attention to the reader and give them something they could relate to.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.345055082881168 and the wording score is -0.336899757727423. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1d58eb337c8 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tradegy, as described by Aristotle, are that it should be arranged on the complex plan, should excite pity and fear, and should "be single in its issue."'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.810573548933394 and the wording score is -1.465819254359. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1d619165ad0 for prompt 3b9047: 'Well the pharaoh rules the whole empire. Then the visier who has to is a tax super visier. Kind of like the pharaohs assistent. Scribes had to write the goverment records. Then was the priests and powerful nobles The powerful nobles were the only ones who could hold goverment posts. The priests were there to please the gods. Next were the soldiers who fought in the wars and protected Anchient Egypt.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.622715896629557 and the wording score is 0.0347199454741653. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1dd3979334f for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed over a short period of time because of how Jones showed a lot of discipline and authority to the students. That disciplines became better in only a few days to the point that more people would join the Third Wave. The experiment ended because of how the Third wave went out of control when all of the people that were in it were had more than enough discipline and loyalty that it had to be shut down.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.514820591877002 and the wording score is 0.663459072209011. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1efceb9168e for prompt 3b9047: 'The top class was the Pharos/gods, the second was scribes and nobles, then I'm pretty sure it was slaves,farmers,etc. First It states in paragraph 1 how the gods/Pharos were the people who controlled the land, and the universe people thought, they also helped to make the people happy they also helped control the army,etc. In paragraph 4 it talks about Vizire helped the Pharos with the taxes, they also helped with reading and writing. In paragraph 6 it talks about how under the Pharos is nobles/priest profited from tributes they became wealthy because of them donating to the gods, this explains how nice the gods were if you brought them gifts! Craftmens/women were in the middle the reason was because they made and sold stuff to probably help the town. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.12951072642273 and the wording score is 0.379576567721591. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1f1bed260d1 for prompt 3b9047: 'How different social classes involed were because craftmen/women made up the class to make useful things. According to the text "Skilled workers such as physicians and craftsmen/women made up the middle class. Craftsmen made and sold jewelry, pottery, papyrus products, tools, and other useful things." '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.691293113500988 and the wording score is -0.795241535939942. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f1f79725d7f1 for prompt 3b9047: 'The Egyptian social latter was built like a pyramid very few people are at the top than at the bottom. Since peasents were ranked so low they were gave simple jobs and the people that were ranked higher were gave more complex jobs. Like making important desissions. Or watching all of the slaves and not leting them run away.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.153454049433642 and the wording score is 0.168544074280091. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f22c026c23e0 for prompt 3b9047: 'These schools were run by priests or by artisans. Boys who learned to read and write could become scribes, then go on to gain employment in the government. It was possible for a boy born on a farm to work his way up into the higher ranks of the government. Bureaucracy proved lucrative. last paragraph '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.382272237741744 and the wording score is -1.79549080344932. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f230dc492202 for prompt 39c16e: 'The first element is to imitate actions that cause pity and fear, such as actions that the audience feels bad for the protagonist. The second element is to base the tragedy on the base of Greek heroes, and the last element is to make sure your plot is well constructed.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.205682506482641 and the wording score is 0.380537638762288. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f264407fa48f for prompt ebad26: 'When the factory was faced with spoiled meat they would cover it up or use it in different ways. One of the ways that they would cover it up would to be using the process of giving them thirty per cent which destroyed the odor of the spoiled meat. After the hams would be sold as Number three grade. When the whole ham was spoiled it would be sent to the department of elzbieta. It was cut up and and mixed with half a ton of other meat and no odor of the meat could make any differnece. '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.297030624358104 and the wording score is -0.168733888829912. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f27649734a41 for prompt 814d6b: 'The Third Wave developed so quickly because Jones appeared as an authoritative figure and his students were succeeding, which made more people want to join. The experiment ended because Jones felt the Third Wave was slipping out of his control.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f27ac8c40e0a for prompt 3b9047: 'Different social classes involved in this government by them having different classes depending on there power. For example, the pharaoh is at the top of the pyridmaid. According to the site, "people of Egypt believed that their pharaohs were gods." This means that the people believed that the pharaoh is at the top and everyone below him was just a mear mortale.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2805de94502 for prompt ebad26: 'The factory would cover up spoiled meat by a varity of ways to protect themselves and not thinking they would get caught. The factory covered up the meat by " Rubbing it up with soda to take away the smell" ( PP 2 ). The meat would smell sour so the workers would rub it with soda to mask the sour smell so it would be sold and eaten. The chemistry department helped cover up spoiled meat by " Preserve it with borax and color.. it brown" ( PP 5 ). Preserving the "Sauage" with borax would help make it look eatable and since the gelatin changed the color brown make the customers who bought it think it was actual sauage since it looked like it with the color. Lastly the factory would " Cut up ... mixed with half ton of other meats" ( PP 3 ). The factory would combine the spoiled meat with tons of other meat to hide the odor it provided in a meat ginder that combined it. The factory used borax, combined it with other meat, glycerin, and gelatin to cover up the odor and hide the spoiled meat so it would get sold and ate.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 2.50351686416013 and the wording score is 1.71230183680864. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2879e34ad25 for prompt ebad26: ' whenever meat was so spoiled that it could not be used for anything else, either to can it or else to chop it up into sausage. With what had been told them by Jonas, who had worked in the pickle rooms, they could now study the whole of the spoiled-meat industry on the inside, and read a new and grim meaning into that old Packingtown jest—that they use everything of the pig except the squeal.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.54716321678788 and the wording score is -1.46124482282529. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f29a9f3f7713 for prompt 39c16e: 'Tragedies, according to Aristotle, should follow “complex plan,” should “imitate actions which excite pityand fear,” and should have a character who “is not eminently good and just”and whose problem is brought about by “some error of judgement or frailty.” '### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.981264914141905 and the wording score is -1.54890021399466. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2a51066b7d7 for prompt ebad26: 'The various ways the factory would use and cover up the spoiled meat was they would rub the meat down with soda to cover up the smell so they could but the meat back out for reselling. "spoiled meat with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose". They also had a job for cleaning out the waste barrels that the meat was in. they would reuse all of the meat and lable it special so more people would buy it, and sell it for more money. "every spring they did it and in the barrels would be dirt and rust and old nails and stale water – and cartload after cartload of it would be taken up and dumped into the hoppers with fresh meat, and sent out to the public's breakfast." All of the left over meat that they had they would reuse it rather it was spoiled of not they would mix the good and ad meat toghter and put it back out for sell.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 0.921362506098116 and the wording score is -0.0463996651432763. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2a92a72c495 for prompt ebad26: 'The industy used as many ways as they could to use all of the meat, even after it was spoiled. They would mash it up with meat that was still good so no one would notice. They would rub it with soda, they chopped up some of the meat and labelled it as something other than what it was. Some of the meat would tumble onto the floor, and this meat would still be used. "Jonas had told them how the meat that was taken out of pickle would often be found sour, and how they would rub it up with soda to take away the smell, and sell it to be eaten on free-lunch counters; also of all the miracles of chemistry which they performed, giving to any sort of meat, fresh or salted, whole or chopped, any color and any flavor and any odor they chose." They did wjhatever they could to use the bad meat.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is 1.43949854054862 and the wording score is 0.620322317058425. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2aac3907e0c for prompt ebad26: 'As it says on paragraph 1, they did not waste not even a single gram of spoiled meat, they used it to chop it up into sausages, they used everything of the pig except the squeal,'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2adfd23970e for prompt 3b9047: 'Different social classes were involved the government by, depending on what they are. For example: if you were a slave, then you would have to work and you didn't have a choice. The more high up you are, the better life you get and you would also be very wealthy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2b4b775af48 for prompt 39c16e: 'Three elements of an ideal tradegy, as described would be plot, diction, and character. Aristotle said a well-constructed plot should be single in its issue. He also said that the words chosen and how they are spoken also affect how the tragedy is portrayed. Lastly, Aristotle said one of the most important parts of a tragedy is the characters invlolved. The character should invoke pitty and or fear if that character dies because, after all, it is a tragedy.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2c0c4649ff2 for prompt 3b9047: 'War was stressful and hard and you had to be hard working to be able to help and fight in the war. The war was very dangerous and hard to deal with.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.986247135366393 and the wording score is 0.430210174464802. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2cce2cad989 for prompt 814d6b: 'there were so many people that enjoyed it they started telling people about it and it grew bigger and bigger, it ended when he told them it was an experiment'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2d9f3bc4512 for prompt ebad26: 'Some ways the factory covered up spoiled meat was to put borax and glycerin in it to cover up the mold. For example, in paragraph three it talks about how sausages from Europe would be rejected, but factories would cover it up with the toxic chemicals. The chemicals were deadly and could cause harm to the people that eat it.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.0938138317174397 and the wording score is 0.503832933489619. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2da4e5100b4 for prompt ebad26: 'By using chemicles to cover the odor the buyer won't think much of the meat being spoiled. According to the text "to pump in these packers had a second and stronger pickle to destroy the odor"'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.14493363003249 and the wording score is -0.834494799990917. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2dd06e70ce7 for prompt 3b9047: ' Socil classes were involed in this government because... For example, they really didnt have teachers since it was so long ago so they had other people teach there kids.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.974242264823977 and the wording score is -0.751413840355257. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2e12460d6c9 for prompt 39c16e: 'In Aristotle's view of a tragedy, it must be complex, have a fall from grace, and have no more than one big issue throughout the play.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -1.26421406546489 and the wording score is -1.50507251840997. |
### Human: Here is a summary written by student f2e809638e9a for prompt 3b9047: 'The structure of the system of government was like the pyramids because there were a lot more poor people like slaves and farmers and only a few at the top or rich. A pyramid is large at the bottom and gets smaller as it goes up.'### Assistant: The content score for this summary is -0.39331016991752 and the wording score is 0.627128228216951. |